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Lesson 2: Create lyric poem Lesson Duration: 60mins Stage: 4 Year: 7 Class: 7D
Constructive
feedback –
Highlight
something the
student did well
EPT436 Subject Guide to Professional Experience Placement, Faculty of Arts & Education, Charles Sturt University
and something
the student could
do to improve.
Student Teacher reflection: Students are beginning to personally connect with poetry and understand how it is important. Students enjoyed creating their own lyric
poems as they were able to express their thoughts and feelings in a safe, non-judgemental environment. Challenges with this activity was getting students to
independently think about a topic. Some students required prompting by myself or their peers.
Student C Sample
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Student D Sample
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Lesson 3: Analysing the power of poetry Lesson Duration: 60mins Stage: 4 Year: 7 Class: 7D
Hand back to students their entry slips from last lesson. Ask Feedback and Independently Constructive written
students to read the feedback provided and respond to the response – response to entry feedback: Indicates what
10mins feedback suggestion. Students then glue these into their Provide students slip feedback. students need to expand
workbooks where they can refer back to when writing their with a draft on for their thesis.
thesis for their assessment tasks. thesis for their
assessment task.
Students select poem 1 for these assessment task. Please
EN4-1A: Selecting 10mins note poem 1 must be a poem the students have studied in Write poems on Independently
poem 1 based on class: the whiteboard – review poems to
pleasure and individual - Mulga Bill’s Bicycle So students can select one.
interests. E.g. - Sonnet 18 refer to when
Selecting Mulga Bill’s - All One Race selecting.
Bicycle as it was - Declaration
something studied in a - Haikus
prior unit and student’s
enjoyed it. Body
Collaborative Groups for 4. If
work – Assist more than 4 Observation and
Once students have selected one of the studied poems,
EN4-1A: Responds to students with students, select the questioning: Highlights
students will use the provided table to analyse the poem
selected poem in the 30mins analysing same poem is the teacher needs to
(appendix 3). Students will complete the table using their
form of a critical techniques and separate into encourage students to
notes from prior lessons and their peers support as they will
analysis. Students identifying the smaller groups analyse a more
be grouped based on the selected poem.
begin identifying the power of the (e.g. a group of 3 appropriate poem (e.g.
link between the selected poem. and a group of 4 Sonnet 18 may be too
importance of poetry The teacher will explicitly explain to the students how to analysing Sonnet difficult to analyse).
and the textual features use the table using the red example (appendix 3). The Scaffolding 18).
of poems. teacher will also highlight that they can use this when resource – steps Analysing table: View
completing poem 2 and 3 for their assessment task. out the process of students’ response to
identify which students
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Student Teacher reflection: Returning the entry slips to students worked well as it demonstrated their understanding of the unit’s focus and where I need to explicitly
teacher more. Getting students to work in the selected poem groups was a success. Students were more engaged and interested in what they were doing. The plickers
highlighted which students I need to gently remind about the assessment task and how they should be attempting it outside of the classroom.
Appendix 3:
What is the poem about? What techniques does Why is this poem powerful? How do the
the poem use? techniques show this?
EXAMPLE: The poem is from the perspective of a man who is Connotations (ideas) – This poem is powerful because it helps the
Declaration by about to be executed. The poem begins with Yu perhaps the final hour is audience to connect with Yu Luoke and
Bei Dao Luoke reflecting on how his life is about to suddenly come imagine what it would be like to be him.
end. It then moves to Yu Luoke’s execution as he
speaks about how he will continue to stand up for Simile – star-like bullet The line “perhaps the final hour is come”
what he believes in even if it is the cause of his death. holes communicates that Yu Luoke is uncertain of
his fate but is preparing for the end.
Visual imagery – A
blood-red dawn The simile, “star-like bullet holes” highlights
Yu Luoke’s fate as he is comparing his death
by shooting to star shaped bullet holes.
Poem Title:
What is the poem about? What techniques does the poem What is this poem powerful? How do the techniques show
use? this?
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Student Teacher reflection: Students appreciated seeing an exemplar of the assessment task as they were confused about the multimodal element of the presentation.
Student however after viewing the task became fixated on beginning to create PowerPoints and PowToon’s. This meant I had to constantly redirect students to using
their devices only to type up draft scripts. Also indicated that I need to highlight the significance of their content rather than the fancy animations the presentation
programs can offer.
Appendix 4:
Introduction: I have …
Discuss some techniques poem 1 uses and why they are powerful
“Poem 1 uses . This technique is powerful because…”
“To highlight the important message poem 1 is communicating the composer uses . This makes us…”
EPT436 Subject Guide to Professional Experience Placement, Faculty of Arts & Education, Charles Sturt University
Introduced poem 2
“Poem 2 is by it is about…”
Discuss some techniques poem 2 uses and why they are powerful
“Poem 2 uses . This technique is powerful because…”
“To highlight the important message poem 1 is communicating the composer uses . This makes us…”
Body: Poem 3 I have…
(a poem YOU
have composed) Used a linking statement
“These poems have inspired me to compose…”
“Through exploring the power of poetry in these poems I have…”
“The power and importance of poetry can likewise be seen in…”
Introduced my poem
“Poem 3 is a poem I have composed called…”
Discuss some techniques my poem uses and why they are powerful
“I have used . This technique is powerful because…”
“To highlight the important message in my poem I have used . This makes the audience…”
Conclusion: I have…
Used expression
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