Portfolio File #6: WRITING MY OWN OUTLINE IN CLASS (Print a copy)

NAME: María Camila Cadena Cely GROUP: 13

Write short sentences. Remember this is a skeleton of you paper, NOT the whole essay! Do not include connectors and aim at
writing single lines (not several) at this point.

Hook Could the technology help to decrease pollution around the world?

Int Issue (paraphrased) Pollution is ending with the world life

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du Background (2 causes of - The air pollution the factories make
cti the main problem) - The daily life activities that consume the natural resources
on Thesis Statement (Main Everyday we see how people is getting sick and is getting poor because they do not know how to
problem + 2 sub- use the natural resources well and that cause pollution that can be decrease by the use of the new
problems) technologies

Problem 1 human health

Supporting evidence
Bo Air pollution is one of the big causes of the human health problems because when people work in
(Example, author’s
dy factories or do different daily activities they get in contact with air pollution that can affect their
opinion, statistics,
health like their lungs and many other problems
par reports)
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ap Solution 1 use the new technologies in differents parts of the cities like shops or factories can help to reduce
(Who, What, How) the air pollution we see everyday but that is a work that has to be asume for everybody
h1

Resulting sentence technology can make air pollution decrease

Problem 2 poverty

Supporting evidence
Bo
(Example, author’s
dy opinion, statistics,
par reports)
agr
ap Solution 2
h2 (Who, What, How)

Resulting sentence

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