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Plan was presented in great Plan was generally Rencana bisnis yang
Rencana bisnis yang dapat
detail and it was presented in great detail dapat disimpulkan dari
Detail disimpulkan dari proposal
consistently obvious there and appeared to have great proposal lebih pada
adalah telah menjelaskan
was great thought behind it. thought behind it. analisis keuangan
keseluruhan aspek baik
(keuntungan) yang akan
point utama maupun
diperoleh, dengan
penujang
mengesampingkan point
lainnya.
Plan was presented in Plan was presented in Format penulisan proposal Format penulisan
paragraph format and had paragraph format and had sangat sederhana, ringkas, proposal sangat
Professionalism
no spelling or grammatical few spelling or grammatical jelas,, dan menarik sederhana dan kurang
errors. errors. menarik. Penulisan kata
‘pudding’ tidak seragam
Plan was highly effective in Plan was effective in Secara keseluruhan Secara keseluruhan
describing the business and describing the business and proposal bisnis yang proposal bisnis yang
Effectiveness
its operations, as well as its operations, as well as diajukan telah diajukan tidak
eliciting support. garnering some support. menggambrakan secara menggambarkan secara
detail usaha yang akan detail usaha yang akan
dijalankan, dan menarik dijalankan, dan kurang
untuk investasi menarik untuk investasi.