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Higher Colleges of Technology

Education Division
Presentation Interview with Principal

Course teacher: Fatema Al Awadi Course code: EDU 4103 Grade:


Student name: Mariam Khalifa Alsuwaidi ID: H00300001 93 / A
Criteria A B C D F
1. Research/experimentation exploration of ideas 
2. Explanation/ description and or justification/ Discussion was 
made
3. Analysis 
4. Subject knowledge 
5. References 
6. Collaboration 

7. Spoken language/ clarity and accuracy 


8. Presentation length 
Comments:
- Added cover page with all information
- Sent presentation to be checked
- Content added with the main topics
- Provided the permission taken from the principal
- Clear school overview provided
- Organizational structure title in the slide was not correct
- Provided the organizational structure of the school
- Well organized presentation with good collaboration between the students
- Spent 15:51
- School leadership model we call it not style
- Sent all the needed documents after the presentation
- Both students needed to provide further information regarding the main key aspects being discussed
- Provided comments on the permission taken from the principal
- Language mistakes in the presentation
- Good to mention key vocabulary being covered in the course
- Checks the work with the teacher
- All documents are sent after the presentation
- Used good in-text citation
- Sent 5 sources as references in a Word doc but in the presentation they were only three
Higher Colleges of Technology
Education Division
- Had some APA formatting consistency errors, missing the retrieval dates for the web sites
Maryam
- Provided the introduction for the presentation
- A bit nervous
- Language mistakes, mixing past and present in one sentence
- Mentioned the school’s overview with all needed details
- Mentioned the school leadership model, and mentioned that it is hierarchical style as well – Explain why
did you say it is bureaucratic and hierarchical? Good justification
- Discussed the leadership style of the principal, provided good support to the finding of leadership style
- Mentioned the school relationship with the MOE
- Why she is not responsible about the finance?
- Good to mention that parents are participating in school’s finance
- Relationship with the Ministry and how it happens
- Discussed the decision making process
- Why did you provide these recommendations? Needed more justifications
- Commented on Mahra’s question related to vision
- Added good elaboration about communication
- Was able to answer the leadership model but not deep enough

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