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A. IDENTIFY THE ERRORS BY CHANGING AND DELETING THEM.

THEN MAKE
THE NEW BETTER ONE BASED ON YOUR VERSION.

Flood is a natural phenomenon which is the water from all the water sources on the earth
overflow on resident living places. It can cause loss of a large sum of money, loss of life, great
suffering, and damage property. The casualties are injured or died. Some people are homeless
and need medical care. So hospitals will sell many medicines.
Floods can be caused by natural phenomena. Although the main cause of most of the
flooding is the excessive rainfall. The rain may occur seasonally-region covering large areas, or
from local storm producing rainfall of high intensity. Moreover, floods also occur when the
water of rivers, consequently lakes, nor streams overflow their banks and pour onto the
surrounding land. If the surrounding land is flat and can absorb the water. No flooding will
occur. However, if the land is hard and rocky, heavy rain cannot be absorbed. Where the banks
are low, a river may overflow and flood adjacent lowland. In many parts of the world flood are
caused by tropical storms called hurricanes or typhoons. They are imposible. They bring
destructive winds of high speed, torrents of rain, and flooding. It is wonderful. When a flood
occurs, the destruction to surrounding land can be severe. whole villages and towns are
sometimes swept away by water pouring swiftly over the land. Any help is useless. Railroad
track are blocked and uprooted from their beds. Highways are washed away.
On the other hand, human activities can also be a potential disaster such as floods and
forest logging that is getting crowded. For the classically logging, though not exactly true, the
main suspect of flooding are farmers, who cut down forests in upstream watershed. Settlement
and compacting the soil does not give a chance of rain water to seep into the ground. Even
though most water, then flow on the ground. Moreover, the river is supported by an increasingly
shallow and narrow river crowded with inhabitants, and the blockage of water upstream area.
Then the flood comes. In fact, not only once the flood happens in an area, the next flood will be
easier again. Because the pore surface is covered with mud so that the soil water is not able to
penetrate.

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