LANGUAGE TRAINING CENTER

UNIVERSITAS MUHAMMADIYAH YOGYAKARTA

EVEN SEMESTER 2020/2021

OFFICIAL ASSIGNMENT 1

Subject : Essay Writing Name : Andriansah

Skill : Writing Student Number : 20200410294
Total Score : 15 Department : IMABS A

Task I. Descriptive Essay’s Outline (weigh 20)

Write an outline of descriptive essay.

a. Introduction
1). Hook
Nasi goreng always be my favorit food in my home town

2). Background Information

For the first time I eat nasi goreng is when I child and after that I like taste different kind of nasi goreng in different city

3). Thesis Statement

Most favorite is nasi goreng kambing

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b. Body Paragraph
1). Topic Sentence

The reason why I like nasi goreng kambing is the perfect combination between the lam and taste of nasi goreng its feel
nice. it will be more nice if I combination with tomato sauce, it will have little hot taste but if you don't like spicy I think Just
Nasi goreng kambing is enough. But, I think all kinda nasi goreng is have good taste and for me the most good taste of
nasi goreng is nasi goreng kambing.

2). Supporting details

I have a friend who from another country and I ask him the answer that I get is if nasi goreng is they favorite food in
Indonesia

c. Conclusion

All kinda nasi goreng is good taste, its determine with your taste.

Task II. Comparison and Contrast’s Outline (weigh 20)

Write an outline of comparison and contrast essay. Apply differences and similarities
organization OR point-by-point organization.

a. Introduction
1). Hook

My experience when climbing the mountain before and after I have knowledge about outdoor activity

2). Background Information

I don’t have anything about outdoor activity. Then I reckless to climb mountain with my friend, that absolutely wrong. But,
this is my experience

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3). Thesis Statement

After I learn about outdoor activity I feel better and already for the next journey.

b. Body Paragraph 1 (for differences and similarities essay approach)

1). Topic Sentence about Similarities

• The same thing about that is I know if I should learn more to expand my knowledge.
• Dissimilar thing is my point of view to look the problem
• Before and after I know basic thing about outdoor activity is very different. I change my point of view, I know how to
solve the problem and so on.

2). Details

When the first time I went to climbing mountain I very confused to build camp and just packing, I don't know about time
estimate so I late to summit and so on.

c. Body Paragraph 2 (for differences and similarities essay approach)

1). Topic Sentence about Differences

I know how to use compas, how to build camp, and I no need to confused again if I have problem when I climb the
mountain

2). Details
when the time for pray has come I confuse to know where the kiblat, and I don't know what should I do when my friend
exposed hypothermia when we go summit.

a. Body Paragraph 1 (for point-by-point essay approach)

1). Topic Sentence with Point of Comparison
Before I know about basic thing outdoor activity I worried to climb mountain and after I know the basic thing abou outdoor
activity I no need to worry anymore because I've been already.

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2). Details

For the first I always have negative thinking about the trek or the situation in the mountain, I think it will dangerous if
there are beast or something when I climb the mountain. but now, after i learn about that I know how to solve any
problem including the problem above.

b. Body Paragraph 2 (for point-by-point essay approach)

1). Topic Sentence with Point of Comparison

After I learn the basic thing about outdoor activity I aware about the nature and more safety than before I learn about that.

2). Details

Now I always be patient when have problem suddenly I don't a hurry to solve the problem.

c. Conclusion
Summary of points of comparison and contrast

The knowlegde is important for your own life, you will more aware if you know the knowledge about kinda activity
especially for climbing mountain. you will feel more safety and more already than before you know the knowledge about
that activity

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