estructura propuesta  

rephrasing
Voz activa Voz pasiva

They brought a beautiful present for Jim. Jim... was brought a beautiful present.
voz activa voz pasiva con "have" causative:

The doctor is testing my eyes next Friday. I... am having my eyes tested nex Friday.
Estilo directo: Estilo Indirecto:

"I made this cake" said Tom to his friend. Tom... told his friend that he had made that cake.
Unir dos oraciones: con pronombre relativo:

Beth was very happy. She had passed all her Beth..., who had passed all her exams, was very
exams. happy.
Unir dos oraciones: con conjunción:

To me, this scenery is desolate. Yet, to them it is Although... to me, this scenery is desolate, to them
rich. it is rich.
Oración condicional
unir dos oraciones con condicional
If... he had brought his ID card, he could have
He din't bring his ID card. He couldn't enter.
entered.
condicional con If + oración negativa Condicional con unless

If he doesn't phone, he won't come with us. Unless... he comes, he won't come with us.
uso de los verbos modales verbo modal

It is possible to control a fear of flying. You... can control a fear of flying.

Oración de subjuntivo
El subjuntivo
He... suggested (that) I call/should call him the
"Why don't you call me tomorrow?", he said.
following day.
verbos seguidos de infinitivo con o sin 'to' o de
Gerundio o infinitivo
gerundio
Jim... stopped / gave up smoking.
Jim doesn't smoke anymore.
very + adjetivo (+ sustantivo) so / such

He was very angry. He shouted at me. He... was so angry that he shouted at me.
too + adjetivo not + adjetivo + enough

The ticket was too expensive for him to pay. The ticket... wasn't cheap enought  for him to pay.
simple past (con "ago") present perfect (continuous) (con "since" o "for")

I got an e-mail from him two monts ago. He... hasn't sent me an e-mail for two months.
I wish /If only
deseos / lamentaciones
I wish... / If only... I had been there when she
I regret I wasn't there when she arrived.
arrived.
comparativo / superlativo comparativo / superlativo

She was very fast. No one won her. She... was the fastest. No one won her.
Nobody hired him because he was too old. If... he had been younger, he would have been
 hired.
verbo en negativa seguido de "any" o sus verbo en afirmativa seguido de "no" o sus
compuestos compuestos

We haven't see anybody around here. We... have seen nobody / no one around here.
have never + past participle It's the first time + have + past participle

He had never been in India before. It's... the first time he had been in India.
Despite / In spite of
Although / Even though / However
Despite... trying hard, he finally had to give up.
Although he tried hard, he finally had to give up. Despite the fact that he tried hard, he finally had to
give up.
used to / would
Oración en pasado con adverbio de frecuencia
At that time... I used to / would sleep three hours
At that time I usually slept three hours a night.
a night.
oración en presente indicando frecuencia be used to

They usually take the bus to go to work. They... are used to taking the bus to go to work.
would prefer would rather

I would prefer her to come alone. I... would rather she came alone.
consejo should / had better

It's advisable that you reserve in advance. You... should / had better reserve in advance.

2) Incluye toda la información necesaria en la primera oración y haz los cambios oportunos en la
segunda.

— quitar el pronombre que repite  (oraciones de relativo);

— poner la coma (o no) en las oraciones de relativo y las condicionales;
— en las oraciones condicionales poner el complemento agente sólo si aporta información necesaria.

3) comprueba que no hay faltas de ortografía o puntuación.