PORTFOLI

OGRAMMAR
ADVANCED
TEACHER: IIi
LOUIS CIPRIANO
STUDENT:
VICTOR ARTURO SIPÁN
RIVERA

2020

WRITING 1
GUN CONTROL, A SOLUTION TO SOCIAL VIOLENCE
Should we have arms control in our country? Definitely this security strategy
that is commonly applied in rich countries has quite a lot of benefits for us, and we
must certainly support it because this strategy would fundamentally help security. I
think it should be established in the country. Not only should gun control be
available, but it should also be a rule or law for all citizens.

Gun control is clearly important because it allows the authorities to have control
over the use and possible crimes that can occur using firearms. This strategy is
promoted in order to protect people and to place stricter rules and requirements to
be able to own a weapon. Overall, these requirements are based on the mental
and psychological health of the person, basically. It is inherent to mental health if a
person It allows or not to use weapons.

If there were gun control in the country, people should be more careful and
cautious when having them which is beneficial for the people, they did not worry
about this situation before. Neither did politician. Maybe gun control would help a
lot with the increase in violence and crime in the country definitely helping the state
and the police to better control.

Despite this issue is controversial in the population because some people think that
it is a form of government control, obviously this is not true; This strategy is very
popular in Europe and Asia due to the large number of inhabitants and different
cultures. In addition, many organizations affirm that the gun control goes against
the rights of freedom and personal defense, that is absolutely false because the
use of arms is restricted completely, only that it is regulated and specifies the
requirements to possess a weapon.

Finally, I can say that gun control is in my opinion an effective way to reduce crime
and possibly improve people's quality of life, which is why its application is
necessary in our society. Not only should we allow that, but we should also
encourage it.Even if we could get a gun, we have to be careful for others.

VOCABULARY GRAMMAR

WRITING 2
BIRTH ORDER

The theory of birth order is a concept based on family structure and

responsibilities; however, this theory is still present today, although the concepts of family
has evolved, it is still a reference for them being the configuration of character and
temperament of its members. There are many compelling empirical tests, I know my
personal case, for example, my family is of a traditional type and that is a nuance.

The point is that as an only child I have a lot of responsibility and right all the time. what
allows me to be a better person and achieve my goals is to be an important member of the
family, who are very successful in their dreams and are an example to others. Whoever
has been an only child knows that the responsibility and hopes of the family in one, form
us as smart people, whatever we face, we will always win and we will never feel sole.

The fact that I am a great and successful person whose abilities and temperament were
influenced by my family, who are the main educators in life, is a good example of the birth
order, since thanks to that way of raising, I can say that I am a responsible, honest, calm
and friendly person, also with a calm temperament these characteristics are because there
are many reasons due to the family niche where I was born that allow me to have that
attitude.

What I understood about the theory is correct because I believe that it is accurate in
general, It is evident that the first births or being an only child makes us independent
enough with a lot of self-esteem and respect for the family that allows us to face the
problems of life to achieve our goals and to enhance our family who expect a lot from us
so we should do it in the best way.

In conclusion, I can say that the birth order allows anyone who has a loving family, who
like me, thanks to this, can grow and improve as people who have been appreciated in
their families, what makes us good people, with values and good behavior wherever we
are. However, although the Birth order, what is a determining factor, does not define us
completely, whichever is the factor that influences us, the choice to be someone is
ultimately ours.

VOCCABULARY GRAMMAR
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