JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL
Instructional designer’s name: Joseph Lindain
Grade level: Grade 7
Subject: MAPEH 7
Week number and Recommendation
topic
 Please provide proper and
Week 1 correct citation of the used
Music of Luzon reference.
(Lowlands)  The source of the pictures in
pages 1,2,3,7 and 8 are of the
Study Guide is not cited, please
do so as recommended.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content from
the SG.
 Modify the directions of the
WRITTEN ACTIVITY.
 Please provide proper and
Week 2 correct citation of the
Music of Luzon used reference.
(Lowlands)  The source of the pictures in
Instrumental Music pages 1,2,3,4 and 6 are of
the Study Guide is not cited,
please do so as
recommended.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content
from
the SG.
 Please provide proper and
Week 3 & 4 correct citation of the
Arts and Crafts of used reference.
Luzon (Highlands and  The source of the pictures in
Lowlands) pages 2,3,5,6 and 7 are of
the Study Guide is not cited,
please do so as
recommended.
Reasons/ basis
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 Most of the
explanation and
content of the SG is
directly taken from the
reference book
specifically pages 4-12.
 To avoid confusion on
the part of the
learner.
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 Most of the explanation
and content of the SG is
directly taken from the
reference book
specifically pages 13-17.
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 Most of the
explanation and
content of the SG is
directly taken from the
reference book
specifically pages 68-76.
  Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content
from
the SG.
 Please provide proper and
Week 5 correct citation of the
Exercise used reference.
Program: Health and  The source of the pictures in
Skill-related pages 1,3,5,6,8,9,10,11 and 13
Components of are of the Study Guide is not
Physical Fitness cited, please do so as
recommended.
 Modify the arrangement
of the table content.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation of each
topic.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation of each
topic.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation of each topic.
Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content
from the SG.
 Please provide proper and
Week 6 correct citation of the
Holistic Health & used reference.
Stages of Growth and  The source of the pictures
Development in pages 1-6 are of the
Study Guide is not cited,
please do so as
recommended.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content
from
the SG.
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 The table used in SG
Page 2 is directly copied
from the reference
book page 124.
 The explanation of
Health-and Skill-
related Components of
Fitness used in the SG
page 2 is directly taken
from the Reference
book page 124.
 The explanation of
Body Composition used
in the SG page 3 is
directly taken from the
Reference book page
125.
 The explanation of
Skill- related
Components of
Physical Fitness used in
the SG page 8 is directly
taken from the
Reference book page
133.
 Most of the
explanation and
content of the SG is
directly taken from the
book specifically pages
126-138.
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 Most of the
explanation and
content of the SG is
directly taken from the
reference book
specifically pages 251-
253 and pages 260-261.
  Please provide proper and
Week 7 correct citation of the
Exercise used reference.
Program: Individual  The source of the pictures
and Dual Sports in pages 1-12 are of the
Study Guide is not cited,
please do so as
recommended.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content
from the SG.
 Please provide proper and
Week 8 correct citation of the
Music of Cordillera, used reference.
Mindoro, Palawan, and  The source of the pictures
Visayas in pages 1-4, 6-8, 11-12 are
of the Study Guide is not
cited, please do so as
recommended.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation of the
topic.
 Revise or rephrase the
explanation and content
from the SG.
Area coordinator: Shasta Croissan E. Quilala
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 Most of the
explanation and
content of the SG is
directly taken from the
reference book
specifically pages 141-
143, pages 150-153 and
pages 156-157.
 To give proper credits
to the authors and the
publishing company.
 For proper citation.
 The explanation of the
topic Geographical,
cultural, and historical
background used in the
SG page 5 is directly
taken from the
Reference book page 29.
 Most of the explanation
and content of the SG
pages 6-20 is directly
taken from the
reference book
specifically pages 31-36.
Possible reasons
1. The explanation use in the SG is directly taken in the internet.
2. The explanation use in the SG is directly taken from the Reference books.
3. The written activities are directly taken from the internet.
4. The written activities are similar to the activities provided from the
reference book/s.
Possible recommendation
1. Change
2. Revise
3. Modify
4. Add more explanation with regards to ….
5. Delete replace with .