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    The document summarizes a group's criticism of the film "The Pursuit of Happiness". It notes that the group's discussion of elements like characters, plot, setting were incomplete or lacking in detail. However, the organization and development of the criticism's story flow using introduction, interpretation, evaluation and conclusion was sufficient. The language style was good, but some grammatical errors were present. The criticism also failed to compare the film's actors or adaptions to other works.

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    The document summarizes a group's criticism of the film "The Pursuit of Happiness". It notes that the group's discussion of elements like characters, plot, setting were incomplete or lacking in detail. However, the organization and development of the criticism's story flow using introduction, interpretation, evaluation and conclusion was sufficient. The language style was good, but some grammatical errors were present. The criticism also failed to compare the film's actors or adaptions to other works.

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    Criticising Other's Group Work - Fiction

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    The document summarizes a group's criticism of the film "The Pursuit of Happiness". It notes that the group's discussion of elements like characters, plot, setting were incomplete or lacking in detail. However, the organization and development of the criticism's story flow using introduction, interpretation, evaluation and conclusion was sufficient. The language style was good, but some grammatical errors were present. The criticism also failed to compare the film's actors or adaptions to other works.

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    Group 1

    Zakiyah A320180268
    Miftah Al Fitri A320180270
    Dewi Oktaviani A320180272
    Muthi’ah Nurul I A320180279

    Criticizing Group 8

    Title of film: The Pursuit of Happiness

    1. Scope and content


    The discussion in criticizing is incomplete, for example the elements being criticized have not
    been discussed in full and in detail. The explanation of the characters and the plot is lacking in
    detail, the setting of the place, time and atmosphere is not available. So scope and content
    needs guidance.
    2. Organization and development of story flow
    They use orientation, interpretation, evaluation, and conclusion to criticize and arrange it in a
    text. So the organization and development of story flow is sufficient
    3. Language style
    The language style is good
    4. Grammatical correctness
    The grammar used is quite good and easy to understand, but there are some typos in the text.
    5. There is no criticism about the comparison between the actors in different films or the
    comparison between the film and the novel

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