Ho Chi Minh City Open University

Vũ Quang Vinh-2057010965-R&W4

PERSUASIVE ESSAY

Playing video games is a good hobby for kids.

Outline:

Introduction:
_Hook: play video game
_Background: kids play video game
_TS: reason has attracted these kids is video games

Body:
+Topic 1: prartice for children to slove problem
_Children have to find the way to solve this issue. They plan, organization, and flexible think to win this game.
+Topic 2: help children social connections
_Help children to connect with others frends if they have some trouble in communicate in real life.
+Topic 3: create imaginative play and creativity
_It requires children that they have to encourage their creative thinking by themselves.

Conclusion:
_In conclusion, video games is a good habbit for kids, it will help them a lots in practing their brain and create
imaginative play and creativity.

Video games is a good hobby for kids

Nowadays, the world of technology is developing fastly everyday. Children, special kids are attracted by these

technology such as: smart phone, TV, laptop, computer... make them can't left eye. And one of reason has attracted

these kids is video games.

First of all, video games prartice for children to slove problem. Science has showed for us that video game is a

challenge. So the children have to find the way to solve this issue. They plan, organization, and flexible think to

win this game. And these games such as: puzzles, mysteries, to managing virtual cities or empires are spended for

children and suitable with their age to they can play and practice their brain.

Secondly, video games can help children social connections. This is very good for them. Children can play to relax

also talk others friends through internet. Video games help children to connect with others frends if they have some
trouble in communicate in real life. But if they communicate with others people through video games every day. It

can make the habbit for children. from that, the children no more scare, worry, shy when make new relationship

and communicate with people.

Lastly, video games create imaginative play and creativity. When the children are young, they play some game has

creativity and imaginative will help them a lots in solving theirself. It makes them have to find the way and

correctly to solve this issue. Beside, it requires children that they have to encourage their creative thinking by

themself. In one study, twelve-years-old gamers were asked to draw, tell stories, ask questions, and make

predictions. It makes children have to high focus to creativity and curiosity.

In conclusion, video games is a good habbit for kids if it is managed by their parents. Children play video games

with a suitable time and game content in their age will help them a lots in practicing their brain and create

imaginative play and creativity. But if they play so much and wrong content game with their age, it can do hamrful

to them and wrong thinking.