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OVERVIEW (2 câu)
1. Trend (nhìn điểm đầu + điểm điểm đặc biệt + điểm)
Looking at the graph, it is clear that while unemployment rates among
young adults experienced a downward trend in the first 9 years before
increasing/ resurging (v – tăng lại) in the early 2000s, a decrease was
seen/witnessed in the overall unemployment in the country.
Tips
- Cần bao quát, không bỏ sót đoạn nào
- Gộp các đường giống nhau
2. Order (biggest?)
- Through out the period, young adults aged from 16 to 24 in London
registered (v – biểu thị, biểu lộ) the highest unemployment rates out of
4 groups examined (trong số 4 nhóm được nghiên cứu)
Sentence 1
In 1993, the rate of unemployment people between the age of 16 to 24
in London was 22%
Sentence 2
Tips:
- Cắt đoạn ra làm 2 phần (tối đa là 3)
- Chú ý “by 2012” chứ không dùng “in 2012”
This figure/ number dropped to 15% from 1993 to 2002 before rising
to 25% by 2012
Sentence 3
Tips: Cấu trúc
“Một pattern tương tự được chứng kiến ở …”
A similar pattern was seen/ witnessed in the rest of England, where the
unemployment rates among young people fell from 17% to just over
10% between 1993 and 2004 before reaching/ climbing to
approximately 20% by the end of the period (vào cuối chu kỳ)
BODY 2
- Describe (first year): Miêu tả Line 3
- Describe the changes: Miêu tả sự thay đổi của Line 3
- Compare to the similar line: So sánh Line 1 với một Line tương tự
Sentence 1
At the beginning of the period, the (overall) unemployment rate in
London register nearly 15%
Sentence 2
(1) This figure saw a considerable decrease to about 8% in the next 15
years and maintained at 10% at the end of the period/ in the last 4
years
(2) This figure halved to (v – giảm một nửa) about 8% by 2008 and
maintained at 10% at the end of the period/ in the last 4 years
maintain = stabilize (v – duy trì, ổn định)
Sentence 3
The unemployment rates in other part of England showed a similar
development, where it dwindled from 10% to about 5% between 1993
and 2008 before stabilizing at about 8% afterwards (sau đó)