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Republic of the Philippines

BICOL UNIVERSITY
College of Science
Legaspi City

SUMMARY OF RECOMMENDATION

Name of Student: Jan Xavier M. Abainza, Paul Justin G. Ludovice, and Zyrolie V. Suárez
Name of Adviser: Jerome A. Azul
Title of the Study: SENTINEL/SMAP-BASED SOIL MOISTURE DYNAMICS AND RAINFALL
ANALYSIS FOR FLOOD HAZARD ASSESSMENT OF SELECT
BARANGAYS IN GUINOBATAN, ALBAY
Date of Defense: April 27, 2022
Venue: Bicol University College of Science

Proposal  Final 

Recommendation Panelist Page Incorporated


Revise the title –Put “select barangays” to indicate Erwin N. Bañares i
that not the whole Guinobatan was the area of
interest
Revise abstract – remove “some conclusions that Erwin N. Bañares v
does not really reflect on the objetives”
Fix the table of contents – Rearrange the orders of Erwin N. Bañares ix-xii
headings particularly list of figures and list of
tables
Revise the Background of the study – Rearrange Erwin N. Bañares 1-2
introduction of the background – too much concept
jumps, put proper citations
Objectives: Directly state the general and specific Erwin N. Bañares 2
objectives, no need for introductory statements
Chapter II: Translate screenshotted figures into Erwin N. Bañares 10
text.
Correct punctuation marks, repeating words, Erwin N. Bañares All
spelling and grammatical errors.
Observe correct citations Erwin N. Bañares All
Remove redundancies in RRL including definition Erwin N. Bañares 10-11
of concepts – Field Capacity
Check format – title page Erwin N. Bañares i
Put full names of the member of panelists and Erwin N. Bañares ii
chairman
Revise the format of abstract – include the name of Erwin N. Bañares v
authors and adviser
Restructure abstract – input proper wordings, limit Erwin N. Bañares v
3-5 keywords only
Fix list of figures, list of tables, and list of Erwin N. Bañares ix-xii
appendices formatting
Convert figure and table titles to APA 7th ed Erwin N. Bañares 5-61
Observe proper spacing of title headings Erwin N. Bañares 5-61
Put relationship letters a and b for figure 2, and Erwin N. Bañares 7
image border
Change headings to statistical analysis, change to Erwin N. Bañares 23-24
data collection
Republic of the Philippines
BICOL UNIVERSITY
College of Science
Legaspi City

Minor formatting Erwin N. Bañares 1-21


Streamline the study and include only the graphs Karen Conda-Botin 6-11, 41-49
that are essentials in answering the objective/
Change the validation part to rainfall data only
Chapter II: Remove other soil types that was not John Ruel L. Locaba 8-9
focused in the study – focus only on Ultisol

THESIS COMMITTEE

Jerome A. Azul
Adviser
Date: _______________

Karen P. Conda Erwin N. Bañ ares


Member Member
Date: _______________ Date: _______________

John Ruel L. Locaba


Chairman
Date: _______________

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