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生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
1. 前言
精簡與準確是學術寫作的重要基礎。對於生物科學與醫學寫作而言,更是如此。許多科學或醫學
機構(例如 CSE 與 AMA)自行提出一套格式規範,以引導世界各地的作者與編輯進行學術寫作
與編修,特別有助於非英語系國家的研究員或學者改善研究論文的品質。某些格式規範僅限於特
定主題或領域,有一些則適用於一般學術寫作。不過,這些格式規範多半要求使用簡潔明瞭的文
字,進而確保該領域內的其他研究員或學者能夠理解論文主題。甚至,科學或醫學寫作通常會藉
由避開專業術語來提升文字的可讀性,這種做法可以減少冗詞贅字,增加語意精確度。在本期電
子期書,我們從美國科學編輯委員會出版的科學寫作風格與格式指南(Scientific Style and
Format)與美國醫學會格式手冊(AMA Manual of Style)中,列出關於詞彙選擇與減少贅字的建
議與祕訣,同時列舉出相關例句。
暖身題
進入主題前,先來複習一下之前學到的東西。下方列出幾個使用專業術語的句子,您是否能找出
哪些用詞是專業術語?
1) The lab data confirmed the diagnoses.
2) No pathology was found in the lung.
3) The patient expired.
4) The patient’s physical exam findings were unremarkable and her labs were in the normal
range, so she was released from the emergency room and prepped for surgery.
5) The rats were sacrificed.
6) We stocked trout in the stream.
作答完畢請參閱本期電子書末的解答。
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
2. 正確與適合的詞彙選擇
Acute: Fibrinolytic therapy can reduce mortality in patients with suspected acute
myocardial infarction.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Chronic: Imatinib, a selective inhibitor of the BCR-ABL tyrosine kinase, produces high
response rates in patients with chronic-phase chronic myeloid leukemia who have
had no response to interferon alfa.
Adapt: We compared dark-adapted ERG responses with the response dynamic ranges of
individual retinal cells recorded with patch electrodes from dark-adapted
mouse retinas published from other studies.
When confronted with a toxic substance, microorganisms frequently adapt to
detoxify it.
Adopt: Bone marrow cells adopt the phenotype of other cells by spontaneous cell fusion.
We evaluate disruption-minimized spectrum defragmentation in dynamic elastic
optical path networks that adopt distance adaptive modulation.
Adduce: The post-2000 administration has adduced a number of arguments for pressing
relentlessly for the immediate replacement by grants (up to 50%) of
concessional loans of the WB’s most concessional lending window.
Deduce: Synthetic probes deduced from amino acid sequence data are widely used to
detect cognate coding sequences in libraries of cloned DNA segments.
Induce: His responsibility may induce him to spend the entire night on deck.
Two-dimensional electron gases in Al x Ga 1− x N/GaN-based heterostructures,
suitable for high electron mobility transistors, are induced by strong
polarization effects.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
6) Adherence and Compliance. 這兩個同義字有時意思並不相同。Adherence 可以指「病人在行
負面含意,具有支配與服從的意味。
Examples
Adherence: Numerous empirical studies from various populations and settings link
patient treatment adherence to physician–patient communication.
Compliance: Only compliance with those laws will be ultimately successful.
Affect Noun: In recent studies of the structure of affect, positive and negative affect
have consistently emerged as two dominant and relatively independent
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
dimensions.
Verb: An enhancer deletion affects both H19 and Igf2 expression.
Effect Noun: Antimycin A exerts a very pronounced effect in enhancing H2O2
production in pigeon heart mitochondria; 0.26 nmol of antimycin A/mg
of protein and the addition of an uncoupler are required for maximal H2O2
formation.
Verb: Damage control, rather than unresponsiveness, is effected by protective
DX5+ T cells in autoimmune diabetes.
Impact Noun: Studies of nursing-home patients, the hospitalized, and healthy youths
suggest that increased daytime light exposure, measured by duration and
intensity, has an impact on nighttime sleep quality and consolidation.
Verb: Strength tests on soda lime glass laths impacted with SIC grit
confirm basic predictions of the theory.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Aliquot: A 0.2- to 0.4-mL aliquot was taken for assay of total C1' or H~ content.
The collection of small aliquots of bone marrow (BM), followed by ex vivo
expansion for autologous transplantation may be less morbid, and more
cost-effective, than typical BM or blood stem cell harvesting.
Aliquant: The volume of the aliquant is dependent on the length of the shorter tube, which
is constant, and the diameter of the vial.
An aliquant of supernatant was removed for the antiviral assay. A second aliquant
(0.5 mL) was removed and placed in a boiling water bath for 20 min before
the antiviral assay. A third aliquant (5.0 ml) was removed and dialyzed.
Sample: This report describes a new method for simultaneous isolation of RNA, DNA and
proteins from cell and tissue samples.
We added 100 μL of 0.1 M Na2CO3 (containing sildenafil citrate, 3 μg/mL as free
sildenafil) and 1 ml of ether to a 100-μL aliquot of biological samples
(urine samples were diluted 20 times with distilled water).
While: This paper explores several hypothesized relationships between real time affect
while working and standard measures of job satisfaction.
Although: Although the normal roles of tumour suppressor genes are still largely unknown,
they may be involved in promoting cell differentiation as well as in mediating
growth arrest by growth-inhibitory cytokines.
Among: The photon yield values on the basis of absorbed light were remarkably constant
among plants possessing the same pathway of photosynthetic CO2 fixation,
provided the plants had not been subjected to environmental stress.
Between: Relationships between attitudes and turnover were found in the last two time
periods only, suggesting that such relationships are strongest at points in time
closest to when an individual leaves the organization.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
13) Analog/Analogous, Homolog/Homologous, and Homeolog/Homeologous.
Analog/analogous 意指「結構類似,但功能不同的器官或構造」。在生物學中,
homolog/homologous 代表「在結構、位置、起源,或其他特性上相互對應,但功能未必相應的
器官或構造」。Homeolog/homeologous 指的則是「部分同源染色體」。
Examples
Analog: Somatostatin receptors in the rat brain, pituitary, and pancreas were labeled
with two radioiodinated analogs of somatostatins 14 and 28.
Analogous: Telomers of chromosomes in humans, plants, or unicellular eukaryotes are
analogous to each other as far as their function and DNA composition is
concerned.
Homolog: Double strand-specific 5′-to-3′ exonucleases, which appear to be functional
homologs of each other, have been isolated from human cells, mice, and
calves.
Homologous: ICAM, an adhesion ligand of LFA-1, is homologous to the neural cell
adhesion molecule NCAM.
Homeolog: A bias toward reciprocal expression of the homeologs of BnPOX1 in
different organs in the natural allotetraploid of B. napus was also observed.
Homeologous: It is possible that these 2 chromosomes come from different diploid species
and are homeologous to each other.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
at 360 μmol mol−1 (control) and 720 μmol mol−1 (+CO2),
temperature at 30°C/22 °C (control) and 38°C/30°C (+T), and UV-
B radiation 0 kJ m−2d−1 (control) and 10 kJ m−2d−1 (+UV-B) on flower
and pollen morphology.
Structure: For a successful analysis of the relation between amino acid sequence and
protein structure, an unambiguous and physically meaningful
definition of secondary structure is essential.
Ante: The first antenatal diagnosis of Down's syndrome was made in 1968.
In the ulnocarpal region, the antebrachial fascia consists of two definitely separated
layers, a superficial and a deep layer.
Anti: We evaluated the efficacy, pharmacokinetics, immunogenicity, and safety of
multiple infusions of a chimeric monoclonal antitumor necrosis factor α
antibody.
These compounds have potent antiviral and antitumor properties.
Association: (title) Strong association of de novo copy number mutations with autism.
Among Japanese schoolchildren, there was a strong inverse association
between delayed hypersensitivity to Mycobacterium tuberculosis
and atopy.
Relationship: Quantum yields of chlorophyll fluorescence and CO2 assimilation are used to
examine the relationship between fluorescence quenching
parameters and the quantum yield of noncyclic electron transport.
This study explores the relationship of high and low ankle brachial index to
all-cause and cardiovascular disease mortality.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
17) Assure, Ensure, and Insure. Assure 通常有給予對方保證的意味,insure 主要用在與生命財產
有關的財物擔保或抵押,而 ensure 則用來表示確保或消除疑慮。
Examples
Assure: The patients were assured that their responses would be confidential.
Insure: Patients insured by Medicaid were more likely diagnosed at a late stage of breast
cancer (OR = 1.87, P < .001) and melanoma (OR = 4.69, P < .001).
Ensure: Careful follow-up of patients ensured the identification of the more common
surgical complications of the procedures.
18) Because of, Caused by, Due to, and Owing to. Due to 意指「可歸因於…」,而 because of 代
表「由於、因為…」。兩者意思不同,不能相互替換,因此分別將 due to 替換成 attributable to
(可歸因於…),將 because of 替換成 as a result of(因為…),便可以區別兩者的正確意思。
Examples
Because of: Because of the combinatorial nature of the chemistry and the ability to
synthesize small arrays containing numerous specifically selected
oligonucleotides, the method is readily scalable to the
simultaneous monitoring of numerous genes.
Recommendations are likely to differ between patients at lower and higher
risk of stroke because of differences in the absolute reduction in
risk.
(title) Survival analysis of hips treated with core decompression or
vascularized fibular grafting because of avascular necrosis
Caused by: (title) The epidemiology of infections caused by Escherichia coli O157: H7,
other enterohemorrhagic E. coli, and the associated hemolytic uremic
syndrome
Sixty nosocomial infections caused by Pseudomonas aeruginosa and
Acinetobacter baumannii resistant to aminoglycosides,
cephalosporins, quinolones, penicillins, monobactams, and
imipenem were treated with colistin.
Virtually every attempt to rank bacterial causes of community-acquired
pneumonia in adults has placed Streptococcus pneumoniae at the
top of the list, although the actual proportion of cases of
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
pneumonia proven to be caused by this organism has varied from
15% to 76%.
Due to: Mortality risk increased irrespective of whether hypopituitarism was due
to pituitary adenoma or secondary to other diseases.
Whether this glial loss is due to astrocytes, oligodendrocytes, or microglia
remains unknown.
This activity was due to a lysophospholipid, most likely lysophosphatidic
acid, bound to serum albumin.
Owing to: (title) Increased UV-B penetration in a lake owing to drought-induced
acidification
Benchmark: This study calls for a benchmark of 85% of patients undergoing routine
NHS cataract surgery to achieve a spherical-equivalent
postoperative refraction within 1 D of the predicted value to be
established by the RCOphth.
From 1998 to 2004, the development of benchmark tools for simulation-
based evaluation of control strategies for activated sludge plants
has been undertaken in Europe by Working Groups of COST Action
682 and 624.
Criterion: Parameter sensitivity is a theoretical criterion that can be used in the
quantitative evaluation and comparison of different biochemical
systems that regulate, for example, the supply of end product.
Criteria for the classification of Churg-Strauss syndrome were developed
by comparing 20 patients who had this diagnosis with 787 control
patients with other forms of vasculitis.
Standard: We describe a standard, based on the set of ocean water samples used by
Epstein and Mayeda, to obtain a reference standard for 18O data.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Short tandem repeat profiling provides an international reference
standard for human cell lines.
Comparable: At what age is the developing cerebral cortex of the rat comparable to
that of the full-term newborn human baby?
Because the methods of ascertainment differed, the mortality statistics of
Sweden and Chile are not comparable.
We analyzed whether basic skills acquired on a virtual endoscopic
surgery simulator are transferable from virtual reality to physical
reality in a comparable training setting.
Similar: Human DNA polymerase alpha gene expression is cell proliferation
dependent and its primary structure is similar to both prokaryotic
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
and eukaryotic replicative DNA polymerases.
The mortality rates in Sweden and Chile are similar.
TNF infusion in doses ≥545 µg/m2/24 h produced peak plasma TNF
concentrations and metabolic responses that were similar to those
after endotoxin injection.
Examples
Continuous: Plasmodium falciparum can now be maintained in continuous culture in
human erythrocytes incubated at 38°C in RPMI 1640 medium with human
serum under an atmosphere with 7% CO2 and low O2 (1% or 5%).
Continual: Peripheral T cell survival requires continual ligation of the T-cell receptor
to major histocompatibility complex-encoded molecules.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Examples
Criterion standard: The present study was designed to assess the sensitivity and
specificity of the optimal symptom threshold by using a professional
mental health diagnosis of bipolar spectrum disorder as the
criterion standard.
Gold standard: It is common in population screening surveys to have results from
one or more tests investigating the same condition or disease, none
of which can be considered a gold standard.
Customary: This is in contrast to the customary role of traditional medicine, that is, the
first and last resort for health care for the poorer members of society.
Conventional: We evaluated the safety of etanercept (Enbrel) in patients receiving
conventional treatment for Wegener’s granulomatosis.
Traditional: Ayurveda, the traditional Indian medicine, and traditional Chinese
medicine remain the most ancient yet living traditions.
Normal: (title) A direct measurement of the radiation sensitivity of normal mouse
bone marrow cells
Norm: Streptokinase was the predominant lytic agent—a factor limiting
applicability in North America, where second- and third-generation
fibrinolytics are the norm.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Examples
Data: The two most commonly used methods to analyze data from real-time, quantitative
PCR experiments are absolute quantification and relative quantification.
Database: In addition to maintaining the GenBank® nucleic acid sequence database, the
National Center for Biotechnology Information provides analysis and retrieval
resources for the data in GenBank and other biological data made available through
the NCBI web site.
Data set: A 9-year (1982–1990) global normalized difference vegetation index data set with a
spatial resolution of 1° by 1° and a temporal resolution of 1 month was compiled for
use in climate studies.
28) Diagnose, Evaluate, Examine, and Identify. 除了動詞 diagnose 以外,evaluate 與 identify 也
可用於修飾醫療情況、症候群、疾病。不過要注意的是,患者無法被 diagnosed(診斷),但
病況可以被 diagnosed(診斷)。此外,患者不僅可以被 examined(檢測),也可以被
evaluated(評估)是否出現某些症狀。
Examples
29) Die from and Die of. 人會 die of(死於)某種疾病,而不會 die from 某種疾病。
Examples
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Examples
Dilate: We examined whether EETs dilate human coronary arterioles via large-
conductance calcium-activated potassium channels.
Dilation: Survey questionnaires were mailed in the spring of 1974 to 624 NS/G/E
members regarding their endoscopic and esophageal dilation experience
for the years 1972-1973.
Dilatation: Gastric dilatation is an acute condition and when associated with volvulus
is an acute fatal condition.
Disinterested: Cognitively, while they remained fully oriented, all patients appeared duller,
inattentive, and disinterested within the first week of interferon therapy.
Uninterested: Compared with uninterested patients, subjects interested in alternative
therapy were younger.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
34) Effective, Effectiveness, Efficacious, and Efficacy. Efficacy 與 efficacious 代表「在理想情況
般或慣例情況下,某種醫療過程或藥物產生預期結果的程度」。
Examples
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Hyperendemic: An epidemiologic study of susceptibility to frequent and high-grade
parasitemia by Plasmodium falciparum revealed that age-dependent
acquired protection developed within a 2-year period of exposure
to hyperendemic infection pressure.
Long-term exposure to ingested inorganic arsenic is associated with
peripheral vascular disease in the blackfoot disease-
hyperendemic area in Taiwan.
Pandemic: The influenza pandemic of 1918–1920 is recognized as having generally
taken place in three waves, starting in the northern spring and
summer of 1918.
In November 2002, acute respiratory syndrome first appeared in
Southern China and caused a global pandemic with 8273 cases
and 775 deaths in 37 countries.
Epiphytic: A study was conducted to determine the joint effect of gaseous
atmospheric pollutants and trace elements on epiphytic lichens.
Crosse first established that bacterial populations may possess an
epiphytic stage of growth without producing symptoms of
disease.
Epizootic: The Ibaraki virus was compared antigenically with the four serotypes of
bluetongue virus and with the two serotypes of epizootic
hemorrhagic disease virus (EHDV).
Bovine pleuropneumonia is a severe epizootic disease of cattle still
prevalent in many parts of the world.
Ethnicity: For the purpose of analysis within the database, self-described ethnicity was
categorized as white, African American, Hispanic, Asian, and other.
Race: Black and mixed-race (black–white) children adopted into white middle-class
families typically perform at a lower level than similarly adopted white children.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
37) Etiology and Cause. Etiology 的意思為「探討 cause(起因)的研究或論述」,不應被當做
cause(起因)的同義字。
Examples
Farther: The use of insulin declines as patients live farther from their source of care.
Further: Nonsurgical reduction of the septum in hypertrophic obstructive cardiomyopathy
warrants further clinical evaluation.
Fewer: We excluded hospitals with fewer than 100 beds as well as for-profit, federal, and
osteopathic hospitals.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Less: Azotemic patients with diabetes are at high risk of developing contrast nephropathy
even when less than 100 mL of radiocontrast agent is used.
Flammable: Such a classification is important for the safe handling of flammable liquids
such as organic solvents and solvent mixtures.
Inflammable: This paper proposes a method to estimate the concentration of
inflammable gases from transient response patterns, which a
semiconductor gas sensor shows under periodic heating conditions.
Nonflammable: The use of nonflammable methyl nonafluorobuyl ether has been studied to
develop an inherently safe electrolyte for lithium secondary batteries.
Gender: It is proposed that masculine gender role socialization affects whether men
appraise specific situations as stressful.
Sex: Smaller effects of sex (male vs. female) were also seen.
Racial and ethnic disparities in health care are known to reflect access to care and other
issues that arise from differing socioeconomic conditions.
We derive a discrete choice model of the demand for health care from a theoretical model
which implies that if health is a normal good, then the price elasticity of the demand for
health care must decline as income rises.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Examples
Incidence: The incidence of knee injury was 0.48 in untrained female athletes,
0.42 in trained female athletes, and 0.08 in male basketball players.
Prevalence: The influence of age, parity, duration of previous oral contraceptive
use, hysterectomy, and menopause on the prevalence of urinary
incontinence was evaluated through a postal questionnaire in
Swedish women aged 46–86 years.
Point prevalence: The point prevalence of neck pain was measured by asking the
participants “Do you have neck pain right now?”
Period prevalence: The period prevalence of each health problem was determined for
each 8-week period.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Law: The modified Beer–Lambert law is the basis of continuous-wave near-
infrared tissue spectroscopy.
Theory: There are currently 2 opposing theories concerning the nature of pain: (1)
the specificity theory and (2) the pattern theory.
Hypothesis: According to the amyloid hypothesis, accumulation of Aβ in the brain is the
primary influence driving AD pathogenesis.
Conjecture: Kazhdan and Lusztig gave a conjecture on the multiplicity of simple
modules, which appear in a Jordan-Hölder series of the Verma modules.
Management: This guideline has been developed to advise the treatment and
management of bipolar disorder.
After July 1991, all cases were managed using MVAC in either the
emergency room or the labor ward.
Treatment: The results of the treatment of 250 patients with established acute
myocardial infarction in a coronary care unit in a university
hospital are described.
This vaccine should be considered an adjunct to the practice of personal
protective measures against tick exposure and the early diagnosis
and treatment of Lyme disease.
Mean: The mean, standard deviation, test statistic value, and P value for normality based
on 5000 runs are reported.
In this study, we included 13,000 participants, comprising 6,038 men (49.7%) and
7,759 women, with a mean (SD) age of 39.5 (0.32) years.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Median: Data are reported as median (interquartile range) unless specified otherwise.
More than 30% of patients with recurrent HNSCC (median age, 54 y) were at an
advanced clinical stage at first diagnosis (stages III and IV).
Examples
Militate: The large plants may have certain competitive advantages when a specific density is
reached, which will militate against algae.
Mitigate: Development of strategies for mitigating the severity of a new influenza pandemic
is now a top global public health priority.
Mucus: We examined the association of chronic mucus hypersecretion with FEV1 decline
and subsequent hospitalization from chronic obstructive pulmonary disease.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Mucoid: The mucoid colony morphology of these strains is a result of the abundant
production of capsular polysaccharide, which is composed of hyaluronic acid.
Mucous: We investigate the effect of conventional periodontal treatment on the prevalence of
Prevotella intermedia on oral mucous membranes in periodontitis patients.
程」,operation 是「患者接受麻醉與麻醉退去之間的過程,即動刀、解剖、切除、縫合等一
的意思。
Examples
Surgical procedure: A new surgical procedure for localized ridge augmentation prior to
the placement of dental implants has been developed.
Surgery: Postoperative hemorrhage is one of the most severe complications
after pancreatic surgery.
Operation: (title) Reproductive outcome after anesthesia and operation during
pregnancy: A registry study of 5405 cases
Participant: We included all participants in the Framingham Heart Study who were free
of AF at index ages of 40 years and older.
Patient: For this finer specification, we included only patients with definite histories
of myocardial infarction, abnormal coronary angiographic
results/angioplasty, or coronary artery bypass grafting.
Case: Case patients were 48 ventilated patients with nosocomial pneumonia
identified on the basis of results of protected specimen brush quantitative
culture.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
54) Perform, Carry out, and Execute. 這類動詞可以替換成意思更明確的動詞,例如 analyze 或
operate。
Examples
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
immunocompetent 22-year-old man whose initial
finding on brain imaging was positive/negative.
Abnormal/Normal Incorrect: Our purpose was to determine the frequency of
abnormal/normal contrast-enhanced high
resolution MR imaging studies in patients with
sudden hearing loss.
Correct: Our purpose was to determine the frequency of
abnormal/normal findings on contrast-enhanced
high-resolution MR imaging studies in patients
with sudden hearing loss.
Incorrect: The radial arteries of 16 patients with
abnormal/normal Allen’s test were cannulated.
Correct: The radial arteries of 16 patients whose results of
Allen’s test were abnormal/normal were
cannulated.
Preventive: This new approach speaks specifically to the clinical preventive action
rather than anchoring the recommendations to a particular organizing
framework for preventive care.
Preventative: Resveratrol is a cancer preventative agent that is found in red wine.
Regime: The viability and desirability of a finance-led growth regime is first assessed against
the historical evidence about the many alternative regimes that have been proposed
as successors to Fordism.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
Regimen: This study evaluates an optical coherence tomography-guided, variable-dosing
regimen with intravitreal ranibizumab for the treatment of patients with
neovascular age-related macular degeneration.
Unique: We have determined the DNA sequence of the long unique region in the genome of
herpes simplex virus type 1 (HSV-1) strain 17.
Unusual: Five cases of scrapie with unusual features have been diagnosed in Norway since
1998.
Rare: Long‐term monitoring over 5 years of therapy showed that hepatitis B virus
resistance to entecavir is rare in nucleoside‐naïve patients.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
60) Vaccinate and Immunize. 這兩個動詞常被當做同義字使用,但 vaccinate 意指「特意為人或
動物施打抗原,以產生保護抗體」,而 immunize 的引申含意為「透過感染或施打疫苗所獲得
的抗原已成功製造出保護抗體」。
Examples
Vaccinate: Groups of calves (20 per group) were vaccinated subcutaneously with a
single dose of BCG Pasteur (6 × 104 or 6 × 106 colony forming units) and 2
months later, 15 calves from each group were challenged intratracheally
with virulent Mycobacterium bovis.
Immunize: Concerned by a greater than one-third increase in measles and an estimated
30 000 cases of hepatitis B among teenagers in the United States, infectious
disease authorities are urging renewed efforts to immunize those entering
adolescence against these diseases.
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
3. 減少冗詞贅字
下表列出冗詞贅字的精簡替代說法,這些用法可使句子更為簡潔易懂。
冗詞贅字 精簡說法
a majority of most
a number of several, numerous, some, many
absolutely essential essential
accounted for the fact that explained
along the lines of like
an innumerable number of innumerable, countless, many
an order of magnitude 10 times
are of the same opinion Agree
as a consequence of because of
ascertain the location of locate, find
at a rapid rate rapidly
at no time never
at the conclusion of after
at the present moment, at this point of time now, currently
based on the fact that because
bright green in color bright green
by means of using, with, by using
caused injuries to injured
completely filled filled
conducted inoculation experiments on inoculated
definitely proved proved
despite the fact that although
due to the fact that because
during the course of during, while
during the time that while, when
end result result
fewer in number fewer
for the purpose of examining to examine
for the reason that because
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
foreseeable future future
future plans plans
give rise to cause
has a capability of can, is able to
if conditions are such that if, when
in a satisfactory manner satisfactorily
in all cases always, invariably
in an adequate manner adequately
in case if
in connection with about, concerning
in order to to
in the course of during, while
in the near future soon
in the vicinity of near
in the view of the fact that because
is in a position to can, may
it has been reported by Jones Jones reported
it is believed that I/we believe that (or omit altogether)
it is often the case that often
it is possible that the cause may be the cause may be
it is this that this
it is worth noting/pointing out that note that
it would thus appear that apparently
lacked ability to could not
large amounts of much
large in size large
large numbers of many
lenticular in character lenticular
located in/near in/near
necessitates the inclusion of necessitates, requires, needs
of such hardness that so hard that
on account of because
on behalf of for
on the basis of from, by, because
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
on the grounds that because
original source source
oval in shape/oval-shaped oval
owing to the fact that because
past history (nonmedical reference) history
period of time/time period period
prior to (in time) before
referred to as called
results so far achieved results so far/results to date
serves the function of being is
smaller in size smaller
subsequent to after
take into consideration consider
the fish is question this/these fish
the question as to whether whether
the treatment having been performed after treatment
there can be little doubt that this is this is probably
through the use of by using, with
throughout the entire area throughout the area
throughout the whole of the experiment throughout the experiment
two equal halves two halves
was of the opinion that thought
with a view of getting to get
with reference to about (or omit the complete phrase)
with regard to regarding, about, concerning (or omit the
complete phrase)
with the result that so that
within the realm of possibility possible
注意:在某些情況下,冗詞贅字比精簡說法更加適切,因此請務必在大幅更改稿件內容以前,確
認該用法的適用性。
生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則
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生物科學寫作的詞彙選擇與精簡原則