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Cách viết đoạn văn
Cách viết đoạn văn
Bài viết đưa ra một số hướng dẫn cụ thể về việc làm thế nào để viết một
đoạn mở đầu cho một bài luận văn, hay còn gọi là mở bài. Đây có thể coi là đoạn
quan trọng nhất trong bài viết, vì nó quyết định người đọc có đọc phần tiếp theo
trong bài essay của bạn hay không?
Muốn viết một đoạn văn, nhất thiết phải biết cách
lập outline và brainstorming. Vậy, outline là gì và brainstorming là gì?
* Introductory paragraph (mở bài) cần bạn giới thiệu chủ đề của bài, khái quát
chúng và dẫn người đọc đến những phần tiếp theo trong bài.
Một Introductory paragraph có ba
phần: Hook, Background information, Thesis statement.
1. Hook là câu đầu tiên (câu đề, thường để dẫn người đọc vào topic của bài) -
* Để viết Hook ta có ba cách thông thường:
- Đặt câu hỏi (Có thể là câu hỏi Yes/No hoặc Wh_question)
- Đưa ra số liệu (Theo số liệu thống kê cụ thể về một vấn đề nào đó hoặc đưa ra
dẫn chứng của một tổ chức quốc tế nào đó)
- Đưa ra một lời phát biểu.
*Ví dụ: Nếu chủ đề của câu là :" If you have a holiday, where would you like to
go?"
Các câu Hook có thể sẽ là:
There are many famous places in the world, so which do you prefer going?
=> Đặt câu hỏi.
Ha Long Bay not only is famous for its beautiful scene but also has been
recognized as a World Heritage by the UNESCO.
=> Đưa ra số liệu, dẫn chứng…
There are a lot of ideal destinations in Viet Nam, but in my opinion, Ha Long Bay
is the best one.
=> Đưa ra lời phát biểu.
2. Background information: phần này có thể chiếm khoảng 2 câu, nhằm đưa
thông tin chi tiết hơn 1 chút về những gì đã được đề cập trong câu hook.
3. Thesis statement: nêu ra mục đích chính của bài viết. Thường thì thesis
statement sẽ quyết định xem bài luận của bạn sẽ có bao nhiêu đoạn trong phần
thân bài.
Ví dụ:
I'd like to visit Ha Long Bay for two main reasons:....
=> phần thân bài của bạn sẽ có ít nhất là hai đoạn cho hai lí do đó.
… for four reasons,...
=> tức là thân bài sẽ có bốn đoạn.
- Ngoài việc đưa ra con số cụ thể cho lí do, bạn còn có thể sử dụng những đại
từ/trạng từ chỉ số lượng như: many, several, a number of, a lot of.
* Một số ví dụ
1. Discuss About The Advantage And Disadvantage Of Studying Abroad?
At the present, education is seen as the main key for the development of most of
nations in the world. There are several types of studying like studying at
university/college or joining training career course and in those cases, studying
abroad is popular youngster’s choice. Besides the advantages that studying
abroad carries, it also has certainly drawbacks. This given essay I will prove this
statement.
At the present, education is seen as the main key for the development of most of
nations in the world. There are several types of studying like studying at
university/college or joining training career course and in those cases, studying
abroad is popular youngster’s choice. Besides the advantage that studying abroad
carries, it also has certainly drawbacks. This given essay I will prove this
statement.
On the one hand, the main advantage abroad is that they have opportunities for a
better future. For an instance, the young have a chance to learn a new language and
use it in their job competently. They can also learn … lots of new knowledge about
culture and society of the new country. Those things help they earn a higher
income in their future job. Furthermore, when studying in another country,
students will witness the dramatic changing in their economy and in term of
technology, moreover they can enjoy a high living standard. For example,
education and healthcare services are the most merit experience thing in most of
European countries. Students will be sponsored or receive certain welfare that
native countries give for international students.
On the other hand, there are several downsides to studying abroad. First and
foremost, staring to have new language back student’s hand might take a lot of
time. hence, language barrier and the different in lifestyle and culture can easily
make people feel shock and alone when they live in new country. Secondly,
homesickness are always appear in their mind, they might get worse emotion
although they can keep in touch with their relatives by using social network.
Thirdly studying abroad is often expensive owing to the expenditure for
accommodation or some expenses their life when moving to another country.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned about that including the benefits
and drawbacks to develop and challenge themselves when people have a chance to
study abroad.
2. ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF FAST FOOD
Given the fact that today’s generation is always busy, most people consider fast
food as a convenient source of food. Fast food can be prepared and served within
a very short time, and thus is more convenient for those people who tend to be
busy or single peoples who are not willing to cook. Although, fast foods has got
bunch of advantages, it has as well some negative effects which should be carefully
considered.
Fast food menu offers a good option for people on diet. Fast food menu provides
people with extensive varieties of ready meals and drinks to choose. One can
choose what he or she feels like taking for meals. For instance, a person can skip
sugar drinks and opt for low fat milk or fresh juices. Luckily, Fast food is not much
rich in desserts, and thus, there is less temptations. People can also eliminate
unhealthy ingredients in their meals by customizing their orders.
Disadvantages of Fast Food
Despite its merits to human life, fast food poses several health hazards to people.
Fast food is rich in fats, salts, artificial substances and oils which increase the risk
of cardiovascular diseases. Well, obesity is also on the rise as a result of growing
popularity of fast food. Although the human body definitely requires these
ingredients, the amount of such substances in fast food is too high. Further, the
cooking method of most fast meals involves frying which destroys most of
important nutrients to human health.
The adverse effects of the sugars, chemicals, salts and fats in fast food are further
enhanced by the people’s sedentary lifestyle. Despite consuming many calories
from fast food, people do not do enough exercises to burn these calories which
make them more obese. Obesity increases the risk of heart attack and other related
diseases.
The internet not only allows for communication through email but also ensures
easy availability of information, images, and products amongst other things. Every
day the internet continues to provide a new facility, something new that is
immensely convenient and that makes life more easier for web users. However, the
internet also contains some unwanted elements or disadvantages. The following
are the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.
1.0 Introduction
Modern life has become easier and the people of the world have to thanks to the
immense contribution of the internet technology to communication and
information sharing. There is no doubt that internet has made our life become
easier and more convenient. We can use internet to communicate with people
around the world, doing business by using internet, make new friend and know
different cultures, searching information, studying and etc.
The internet not only allows for communication through email but also ensures
easy availability of information, images, and products amongst other things. Every
day the internet continues to provide a new facility, something new that is
immensely convenient and that makes life more easier for web users. However, the
internet also contains some unwanted elements or disadvantages. The following are
the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.
Forums on a number of sites allow peoples to discuss and share their thoughts and
informations with others located at different places all over the world. Whether this
information is the latest news happenings in the world or information about your
favourite celebrity, everything is available at your finger tips. A huge cache of data
is available on the internet on every single subjects. With this storehouse of
information people can not only increases their knowledge bank but can do so
without wasting their time through traditional means such as visiting libraries and
conducting exhaustive research. With internet, students can save their times to
search for information and using their time to do other works.
This is particularly relevant for students who can use this wealth of information for
their school projects and also learn new things about the subjects they are
interested in. In fact this internet is for many schools and universities that are now
able to assigns projects and work to the students and follows their progress which
can be easily posted on the school or university internal websites. Online education
has grown at a very fast pace since internet allow the development and uses of
innovative tools for imparting education. University students and lecturers can
communicate through internet. Besides, some universities are also offerings far
distances courses to make study become more inefficient and convenience. Internet
become a gateway for those who wants to learn but cannot afford the living fees at
foreign countries.
Thirdly, entertainments is another popular reasons why many people prefer to surf
the internet. In fact, the internet has becomes quite successful in trapping the
multifaceted entertainment industry. Downloading games or just surfing the
celebrity websites are some of the uses people have discovered. Even celebrities
are using the internet effectively for promotional campaigns. Besides that, there are
numerous games that can be downloaded for free. The industry of online gaming
has tasted dramatic and phenomenal attentions by game lovers. The internet has
also revolutionized the entertainments industry. People nowadays no need to go to
a cinema hall to watch your favourite movie. Instead of watching movies at cinema
now have companies offering their services where you just can downloads or order
your favourite movie and watch it with a fast internet connection. Besides that, you
also can download other important software or your favourite music in a matter of
few minutes. There are a number of shareware programs that allow you to share
and download your favourite music and videos. The internet also allows people
from different cultures and background to connect with each other. Internet gaming
is a huge business and allow enthusiastic gamers to compete against each other in
games even when they are located far apart. Likewise dating has also allowed
people to find their prospective soul mates.
Through the internet, shopping has also got a complete makeover thanks to the
contributions of the internet. You have many website selling a varieties of products
online and one just need to select or bid for the desired product and entire financial
transactions can be conducts through the internet. E commerce has got a facilities
because of the internet and entire global business deals can be conducted over the
internet. Transfer of money is also no longer a times consuming job and with just a
click of a button you can easily transfers funds to any place you wish. Some of
these services of courses come at a price. The internet has made life very
convenient. With numerous online services you can now performs all your
transaction online. You can books tickets for a movie, transfer funds, pay utility
bills, taxes etc, and right from your home. Some travel websites even plans an
itinerary as per your preferences and take care of airline tickets, hotel reservation
etc. by using internet, consumers can compare the prices of product before making
decisions to purchase.
People who believes that impacts of internet on students is positives said that
internet help students by providing them the handy material and resources for their
studies. It is a big reality that now students takes a lots of help from internet.
Students have any problem regarding their studies or their daily life they can finds
lots of solutions of that problem from internet. There they can find out articles of
scholar and other professional people which would be helpful for them. They can
take lectures from different academics on different topics.
One of the most important benefits of internet is that students can earn from
internet through bloggers. Students can take interest on earning through internet. It
would be a great source of income for them and also it would provide them a big
experience of writing. The students who are interested in media and wanted to be a
writer in the future must do this work. This would increase their professional skills
which would lead them towards great future.
Students can also use internet for the social connectivity and there are lots of social
media websites which mostly students use for social networking. Such as
Facebook, Twitter, Weibo etc are the famous social networking site. Students can
contact themselves with the foreign students and discuss them on different issue to
enhance their skills and knowledge. By using internet wisely, students can get
many information to enrich their knowledge.
Besides that some students will spend too much of time through the internet.
Students are likely to neglect their studies. If the movie has too strong a hold even
elderly people are likely to neglect some their important work. Students might lose
concentrate on their studies because they spent too much time on internet. Some of
them can’t even divide their time to do homework but they spent their time
on watching movie or chatting with their friends through internet.
While the internet has made life easier for people in many ways it is also reflecting
an uglier side to its existence through a number of problems that it has thrown up
for its users. With a large amount of information freely available on the internet
theft and misuse of this information is a likely possibility. Time and again you see
cases of people using someone else’s information and research and passing it off as
their own. Children nowadays seem losing their ability to communicate with
others. They are used to communicate with others via internet but they cannot
communicate with others face by face fluent. It was a strange sight that internet
had make people losing their ability to communicate. It is because people now are
over depending on internet.
Another problem or disadvantage of the internet is that it has allowed a great deal
of anonymity to a large number of people who may access the different websites,
forums and chat rooms available. This has allowed perverted individuals to at
times take advantage of innocent people and abuse their trust. We can always hear
from news that cheaters used internet to make crimes. The cheaters will make
friends with single ladies and cheat them by using sweet words. Lonely single
ladies are very easy get in trap of these cheaters. These cheaters normally will
cheat these ladies to bank-in money to them. Some of the cheaters try to borrow
money from these ladies.
There are a host of games that are available on the internet and this has made most
children to shun all outdoor activity. In the absence of physical activity, children
can easily fall prey to a lot of lifestyle related diseases such as obesity, apart from
failing to develop interpersonal skills. Apart from these factors, sitting
continuously in front of a computer screen can seriously damage our eyes, and put
a strain on our neck and shoulders. Children are in their developing years and these
factors can create life-long problems for them. Children will become more
violence because affected by internet games. There are too many internet games
that contain violence content and it may affect negative influence to children.
If you have been following news lately then you must know what we are referring
to. Children have been lured by paedophiles posing as good Samaritans and have
been physically abused and molested. Internet has also made it easy for
unscrupulous elements to get in touch with children and this has led to an increase
in the cases of kidnapping and identity thefts. About 60% young teens in the
United States have admitted to responding to messages from strangers. This kind
of behaviour is extremely risky and has made children extremely vulnerable to
become victims of cyber-crime.
4.0 Conclusion
The points mentioned above have posed new challenges to teachers and parents.
There are demands from various quarters that there should be some sort of
regulation to check this issue. However, we believe that instead of making internet
a taboo, we should educate children to use it for their benefit. It is advisable for
parents to monitor how much time their children spend on the internet, and if
possible set a time-limit till which they would be allowed to use the internet.
Having the computer in the living-room instead of a child’s bedroom can also
ensure censorship on what they are accessing on the internet. It is also important
that you talk to them about ‘the birds and the bees’ because if you do not talk to
them, they will turn to their friends and internet for answers which may not provide
authentic information. Parents play important role in this content and they have to
pay attention on their children despite them get affected by internet.
Although studies on this disorder are in preliminary stages, it has been established
that children who spend most of their time on the internet, show a peculiar kind of
behaviour which is marked by an urge to be on the internet all the time, so much
that the child may show all activities and become immersed in the virtual world.
Surveys conducted over the years have found that most people who suffer from
Internet addiction disorder are young adults, who easily fall into the lure of
exploring everything that is available on the internet. In America alone, it has been
estimated that around 10-15 million people are suffering from internet addiction
disorder, and this is increasing at the rate of 25% every year. Internet had
controlled some of them who are depending internet in their life activities. Most of
them will get mad if they cannot connect to internet. It becomes a kind of
physiology sickness around us.
The internet focused on the negative effects, it in no way means that we are
undermining the importance of internet in our lives. We have written this article
for the internet audience, and you are reading it through the internet, which itself
explains the positive side of internet usage. It is for us to decide whether we use
technology for the betterment of our lives or put it to unabated abuse. Children
may not be mature enough to understand this, but us as parents, teachers and
guardians need to ensure that we inculcate the right behaviour in our children.
Lastly, we have to take the responsibilities to guide out children to use internet
wisely and ensure them to get right information from internet.
In this era of science and technology, mobile phone plays a important part in our
lives. It would be unusual to find anyone between the ages of 13 and 50 who does
not own a mobile phone. It is one of the most useful inventions or device off all
times and it has brought us a lot of advantages but also has it own dark side. It
brings us comfort but also it will damaged us if we used in a wrong way.
Social Media for School Students and Children - Advantages & Disadvantages
Social media is a tool that is becoming quite popular these days because of its user-
friendly features. Social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and
more are giving people a chance to connect with each other across distances. In
other words, the whole world is at our fingertips all thanks to social media. The
youth is especially one of the most dominant users of social media. All this makes
you wonder that something so powerful and with such a massive reach cannot be
all good. Like how there are always two sides to a coin, the same goes for social
media. Subsequently, different people have different opinions on this debatable
topic. So, in this essay on Social Media, we will see the advantages and
disadvantages of social media.
Moreover, live lectures are now possible because of social media. You can attend a
lecture happening in America while sitting in India.
In addition, it strengthens bonds with your loved ones. Distance is not a barrier
anymore because of social media. For instance, you can easily communicate with
your friends and relatives overseas.
Most importantly, it also provides a great platform for young budding artists to
showcase their talent for free. You can get great opportunities for employment
through social media too.
Another advantage definitely benefits companies who wish to promote their
brands. Social media has become a hub for advertising and offers you great
opportunities for connecting with the customer.
It is harmful because it invades your privacy like never before. The oversharing
happening on social media makes children a target for predators and hackers. It
also leads to cyberbullying which affects any person significantly.
Thus, the sharing on social media especially by children must be monitored at all
times. Next up is the addition of social media which is quite common amongst the
youth.
This addiction hampers with the academic performance of a student as they waste
their time on social media instead of studying. Social media also creates communal
rifts. Fake news is spread with the use of it, which poisons the mind of peace-
loving citizens.
In short, surely social media has both advantages and disadvantages. But, it all
depends on the user at the end. The youth must particularly create a balance
between their academic performances, physical activities, and social media. Excess
use of anything is harmful and the same thing applies to social media. Therefore,
we must strive to live a satisfying life with the right balance.
7. Modern technology: advantages and disadvantages
In the world today, people cannot live without technologies such as televisions,
mobile phones, computers and others.
These technologies have slowly taken an essential part in people’s day-to-day lives
and being without them would be unimaginable for some of us.
These technologies have slowly taken an essential part in people’s day-to-day lives
and being without them would be unimaginable for some of us.
Advantages of technology
First, the evolution of technology is beneficial to humans for several reasons. At
the medical level, technology can help treat more sick people and consequently
save many lives and combat very harmful viruses and bacteria.
The invention of the computer was a very important point. Communication is thus
enhanced, and companies can communicate more easily with foreign countries.
Research is also simplified.
Technology has also increased the productivity of almost every industry in the
world. Thanks to technology, we can even pay with bitcoins instead of using
banks. The digital coin has been such a game changing factor, that many realised
that this is the right time to open a bitcoin demo account.
When observed more closely, new things are discovered every day. Let’s take for
instance when radio waves were discovered, radio broadcasts followed suit almost
immediately. The same applies to the television and electricity. If no one had
discovered that electricity could be generated, then the entertainment industry
wouldn’t be at it’s current stage of development.
In the modern industrial world, machines carry out most of the agricultural and
industrial work and as a result, workers produce much more goods than a century
ago and work less. They have more time to exercise and work in safer
environments.
The use of technology certainly needs rule and new laws. For example internet use
is an individual freedom. However, the invention of the atomic bomb cannot be an
individual freedom. In fact, regulations are difficult to implement when these
technologies are introduced – such as regulation surrounding the impending arrival
of autonomous vehicles.
Finally, as most technological discoveries aim to reduce human effort, it would
imply that more work is done by machines. This equates to less work for people:
the human is becoming ever so obsolete by the day, as processes become
automated and jobs are made redundant.
Undeniably, the birth of the internet has reshaped and redefined almost every
aspect of human’s life including the way we shop. While it is not difficult to see
why online shopping is one of the most popular uses of the internet,there are
disadvantages which also need to be put into consideration.
There are several reasons for people to prefer this modern shopping style to
traditional ones. To begin with, it is more economical to buy goods online. Asa
matter of fact, today there are many small independent businesses who find
marketing online not only the most effective method to reach their potential
customers but also the cheapest one. Instead of investing a huge amount of money
in the rent, the staff and advertisements, all they need to do now is to set up several
free accounts on popular websites and forums and start telling people about their
products and special offers. That means on these sites, goods are sold at lower
prices compared to those in big shops. Another advantage of online shopping is it
helps people save time. The more developed our society becomes, the faster the
pace of life is. Time has been given such an importance that scientists and
inventors have worked hard to minimize the time spent on each individual task like
traveling to work or cooking. By using online shopping,people can buy exactly
what they need without even leaving the house to go from this shop to another to
compare.
However, certain drawbacks have been claimed by people who shop online. The
most common complaint about this shopping method is the items they order online
do not always appear to be as appealing as on the websites. Obviously, all of the
pictures of the products have been photo-shopped in order to attract more buyers. It
is especially challenging to shop for fashion items since people cannot try them on.
For example, a sweater may look perfect on the model in the picture, but one can
expect to be disappointed when he actually puts it on.However, since most of the
goods bought online are not refundable, customers in such cases usually feel
frustrated. Besides, like other inventions, online shopping has negatively affected
people’s lifestyle in a way that it does not encourage them to move. According to
some famous researches carried out recently, inactivity results in dangerous
illnesses, among which are obesity and depression. In other words, if people keep
depending too much on technology, their health will be seriously threatened.
All considered, while people benefit enormously from shopping online, they also
suffer from scams and health deterioration. I would suggest consumer protection
groups act more efficiently in order to ensure the rights of buyers.
It is to say that this is the time of technology thus online classes are good for many
of the reasons but traditional classes system have many advantages that should not
be ignored fully. Now we should take advantage of both online as well as offline
classes.
Online classes system can be difficult for some persons who don't know the proper
use of technological instruments. For small children online classes requires great
disciplines and practice. It also requires more interventions of parents in case of
small children. In online classes student use electronic devices like mobile, tablet,
laptops or computer. Use of these devices for longer time will badly affect the
health of students.
In conclusion, it is to say that this is the time of technology thus online classes are
good for many of the reasons but traditional classes system have many advantages
that should not be ignored fully. Now we should take advantage of both online as
well as offline classes.