Hello Rana,

1. Overall effectiveness: 8/10

The video is clear enough for the audience to understand the information you intended to
pass. It is we drafted and the slides are displayed well and in line with the oral message.

2. Graphics and Oral presentation: 4/5

I think you really did an awesome job in aligning your slides with the oral message. You
really utilized smart graphics in your presentation that aligns with the message presented.
The graphic and oral presentation you get 4 out of 5 in my perspective. However, we are
humans and we are never perfect and that is why there is always a room for
improvement. One recommendation for a better presentation is you check on the size of
the slides and try and enlarge them next time. Also, in your oral presentation avoid to
stutter and be consistent in your speech.
3. Message
Your message was well put together and relevant. I agree teaching is a field in which
expertise is mandatory. Your key points were clear and your message is engaging the
target audience.
Great presentation.
Ahmed.

Hello Sean,
1. Video effectiveness: 9/10
Thank you for sharing your insights with the class. I think your presentation is
outstanding and well organized. The overall video presentation was well engaging and I
would rate it 9 on a scale of 10.
2. Oral presentation: 5/5
Your oral presentation as well was spot on. You were audible and you brilliantly chose
your wordings. No stuttering in your voice and you were confident. I rate your oral
presentation 5 over 5.
Graphics: 3/5
Your overall presentation is awesome, however, you forgot to utilize graphics in your
slides and here I give you 3 out of 5.
3. Content
Your content is relevant and meets the requirements. You linked your keywords to the
objectives of the presentation in you conclusion. Keep the good work as we approach the
big report. The only concern in the content delivery is that it was a bit unclear what your
main topic was. Improve your overall presentation skills particularly the use of graphics.
Good work.
Ahmed.