Quarter 3_Reading and Writing

Assessment: Writing Critique

Name: John Miro A. Caponpon Date: 03/08/2023
Grade and Section: HUMSS 11-C

Instagram, Snapchat, Fortnite: The Distractions in every Students

The distraction of Instagram, Snapchat, Fortnite etc. in many students and how to help
students balance time spent on social media and homework in light of the fact that many students
are distracted by it. Instagram, Snapchat and Fortnite have been in the life of many student over
the past years. Students nationwide and in different grades spend a significant amount of time
chatting online as social media usage soars. When students have free time after school, they
typically use their smart phones, computers, and tablets rather than working on schoolwork or
studying for exams and quizzes. Students should use social media less and spend more time on
their academics to avoid being distracted.

Yes, there are many claims i’ve seen in the article presented, the first is the Social Psychological
and Personality Science tracked college students’ progress on their goals over the course of a
semester and found that successful goal attainment was less about self-control and more about
blocking and eliminating potential distractions, this statement is a claim of value the particular
reason for this circumstance is the findings of the study show that rather than getting upset and
disappointed with someone for lacking the self-control to avoid the distractions, it is usually
more constructive to take a step back and figure out how to block or remove digital distractions.
In a 2015 survey of more than 1,800 teachers and 400 principals in Alberta, B.C., found that
nearly three-fourths of teachers frequently or very frequently observed students multitasking
with technology, and 67 percent of teachers believed that the number of students negatively
distracted by digital technologies in the classroom was growing this statement can be a claim of
value the particular reason is they give a survey to define the students have been multitasking
with technology and the number of students being distracted by technology. This statement is
focused in studying many students to determine if they were distracted by social media platforms
or not. Yes, as I know is each claim of this article have its own evidence to determine.

The purpose of this article is to remind every students to have proper time management on using
social media platforms to avoid being distracted in doing schoolworks. As far as I know is they
study every students to define if they were distracted by social media or not inside the school.
This article can influence many students the particular reason for this circumstance is they give
five strategies to help student lessen the use of social media to avoid distraction. Yes, i agree to
the main idea of the article the particular reason for this circumstance its focused on helping
student along the lines of lessen the usage of social media to avoid being distracted and they
even provide strategies to help student student build up to working for 35 or 40 minutes without
distractions this actively demonstrates that them get their work done more quickly. Maybe yes,
based on my own understanding, it used any text throughout the context of the article. As I
know, I don’t see any errors in the article the particular reason for this its has a clear information
and strategies to solve the problem in the article.

The organization make sense the particular reason for this over time, technology may now be
used in a variety of ways to increase productivity, and doing so doesn't have to be difficult this
actively demonstrates that they only focus on helping students lessen the usage of social media
to avoid distraction. The tone and language text is appropriate the particular reason is they can
influence many students to do it and it can also help them to attain self-control and to block and
eliminate potential distractions over the course of a semester. The article portrays the proper
mechanics in a text making it easily to understand the main purpose of the article also to gain
information in every student and encourage them to have a proper usage of social media.

To sum up everything that has been stated so far to avoid distraction, students should use social
media less and focus more on their academic work the particular reason for that is distraction
may affect student behavior and prevent the school works from getting done. My suggestion as a
senior high student is to have time management to avoid being distract by social media, if you
keep doing this everytime soon you will realize that you attain having time management
everytime and it can boost your performance to have better grades

Reference used:
~https://eastside-online.org/news/social-media-and-the-internet-distract-students-from-
homework/