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From: cameronm@gmail
Dear Leslie,
Attaching a Diagram
As stated above the user who tested the product had the opinion that biggest problem with our
instructions as is, is that there are no supporting images detailed enough to provide the readers
with context. The users had no problem with anything written until the last step and believed
that a visual aid would have helped him do it without any confusion.
To address this problem, I would like to attach an illustrated diagram alongside the written
instruction. This illustration would provide a depiction of each step of tying the knot on top of a
human torso, as to provide scale to the viewer and show how the finished knot should look.
This would help our product sell better as it’s easier to understand and could reach a wider
audience. Without these changes customers might be disappointed with our product and that
leaves us looking bad.
Thank you,
Cameron