A Marriage Ceremony That Disappointed Me

Outline
Introductory Paragraph
General Statement: social occasion, forge.
Thesis Statement: unpleasant, management, hospitality.

Body
Topic Sentence of the 1st Paragraph: uncomfortable, atmosphere.
Supporting Sentence 1: space, few seats.
Supporting Sentence 2: temperature, malfunction.

Topic Sentence of the 2nd Paragraph: terrible time, awful.

Supporting Sentence 1: catering staff, service.
Supporting Sentence 2: rotten, prepared.

Concluding Paragraph
Restatement of Thesis Statement: ineffective, negative.

A Marriage Ceremony That Disappointed Me

 Marriage is a lovely social occasion that helps to forge new ties within families and between
two persons. It is a significant social and cultural occasion in addition to being a necessary
obligation. Putting together a wedding ceremony requires much planning and careful
consideration. A few months ago, I attended the wedding of my distant relative. My experience
of the wedding ceremony was unpleasant due to poor management and unaccommodating
hospitality.
I felt uncomfortable because of the atmosphere and hospitality during the wedding. The
marriage ceremony took place in Mohakhali. When me and my family arrived there, but there
was nobody at the gate to welcome the guests. As soon as we walked into the hall, we saw that
there weren't enough space for all of the people attending the event. Not only was there not
enough space, but there were also very few seats for a large number of attendees. In addition
to the uncomfortable room temperature, some of the air conditioners are malfunctioning. The
behavior of the hosts really harsh, and one of them advised us to move to that area and stay
there instead of sitting here.
We had a terrible time there because of the awful food and service. We first had to wait a long
time to eat because there weren't enough tables to accommodate the big number of guests.
The catering staff took a long time to finish cleaning the table when we arrived at our seats.
There was just one person per table, and the service was quite poor. It took a while before the
meal was delivered, and when it did, we found that some of it was rotten and wasn't prepared
properly. Besides, when we complained about the food, the person in charge of our table was
quite unpleasant and urged us not to eat it.
A wedding ceremony's planning involves a lot of responsibilities. A lack of management could
result in disaster and a wedding ceremony I attended is a result of that. For that reason of Due
to ineffective administration and unfriendly hospitality, I had a negative experience at the
wedding ceremony.