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KEY - Opinion essay outline

Do you agree or disagree? Why?


Attention getter:
There's still a great deal of sexual discrimination against women
Thesis: within society

Supporting ideas
Reason 1 No childcare facilities in the
Difficult to get back to workplace
work after giving birth To find someone to look
after you baby is expensive
and time-consuming

Supporting ideas
Reason 2
TV programmes and
agree / Difficult to change the
advertisements still show
disagree traditional views on
few men doing housework
the role of women

Reason 3
Families need two
Supporting ideas
incomes to have a
Women end up doing 2
good standard of living
jobs: one at home and one
at the office

However...
Some people think that
discrimination does not Supporting ideas
women have legal rights that
exist
protect them from
discrimination
they have started to reach top
But it's not the usual thing positions

Conclusion
The position of women has improved, but only a little.
Traditional views need more time to evolve
Sexual discrimination still exists and we need to fight against it

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