Nowadays, more and more students do part-time jobs while they are still at university.

In my opinion,
working and studying at the same time have some benefits but there are also a bit drawbacks. This essay
will discuss both views.

There are a variety of reasons why students work while they're in school because this brings many
benefits for to them. Firstly, having a part-time job which makes students understand the importance
and vavlue of money. For example, when they toil hard and save money for purchasing an item, they
learn to value money and use it wisel. Moreover, with some students' financial circumstances may
require them to work while they pursue their degree, therefore they will have an amount of income to
help them pay the tuition fee, bills, or other expenses related to student life. Additionally, working while
being in university gives them several experiences such as students can learn many working and as well
as life skills which will support them eassy to seek good career opportunities in the future.

On the other hand, the disadvantages of working students while in college is spending time on working,
which leads to filling up their schedule. which means that students have less time for study and
relaxation. If students don't concentrate on studying, that their grades may take a hit and they are likely
to have poor academic performance although this isn’t always the case. For instance, when you do
working in a complex environment which will be tiring and stressful. So these can make your feel
overwhelmed and impact your studies. Additonally, working a part-time job might means mean that you
have less time to spend with friends you’ve made in your accommodation or at university.

In conclusion, it is clear that having part-time jobs brings many benefits and drawbacks to students.
However, they need to keep a work-study balance in order to perform well in both duties while still
spare time for themselves.

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