Q1. What was good about my presentation?

Overall, our presentation had good, clear information with easy to

read slides containing relative pictures. A majority of feedback said
that the slides were interesting and easy to read at the same pace as
the speaker. Almost all feedback proved that the slideshow was
presented at a good pace with each speaker talking for roughly the
same amount of time.

Q2. Which elements could be improved?

In general, I need to speak louder and more formally, also just
project my voice to the audience better so they can hear everything.
A few people said that parts of the presentation were quiet
compared to the rest. A few times in feedback people said that
certain information on the slides could be simplified down to bullet
points, while still containing the key parts.

Q3. How can you improve them using editing?

I can either increase the volume of certain parts of the video or re-
record a voiceover for my part of the slideshow in better quality.
At one point there was a problem and the slideshow disappeared
from the screen for about 10 seconds, I will cut this part out to make
the video look more professional.
Possibly cut out repeated/unnecessary information in order to better
sum up the key points of each slide.