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IELTS 8.5 OVERALL

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 1. Topic: WORK

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company
or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

ANALYSIS:
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company
or organization.
Why might this be the case? (1ST QUESTION)
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? (2ND QUESTION)

Bước 1: Chuẩn bị từ vựng theo yêu cầu đề:

Từ Mở bài Thân bài 1 Thân bài 2 Kết bài

vựng đề
bài
Từ Self-employed Decide to
vựng work for
triển themselves
khai
Work for a Be employed
company or by others
organization
Phần Why? The reasons
câu hỏi for this
Disadvantages Drawbacks

INTRODUCTION:

Many people these days decide to work for themselves instead of being employed by
others. This essay discusses the reasons for this and also the drawbacks of this
choice of career.

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 Từ Mở bài Thân bài 1
vựng
đề bài
Từ Self-employed Decide to work Choose to +become Kết quả:
vựng for themselves become entrepreneurs better
triển self- + run their long-term
khai employed own career
businesses prospects
Work for a Be employed by
company or others
organization
Phần Why? The reasons for Two main
câu hỏi this reasons
why +
Clause
Disadvantages Drawbacks

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PARAGRAPH 1:

There are two main reasons why people are choosing to become self-employed. The
main one is that people feel motivated to become entrepreneurs. This is because they
see running their own businesses as an exciting challenge. For instance, I was bored
with my regular job teaching at a school and so I started my own online IELTS
teaching company in order to have a more stimulating work day. In addition, running
your own business can lead to better long-term career prospects. If you work hard at
your business and develop enthusiastically satisfied customers you will be deriving all
the benefits rather than passing these on to an employer.

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 Từ Mở bài Thân bài 2
vựng
đề bài
Từ Self- Decide to venturing the business is not Result:
vựng employed work for out on your successful Not have an
triển themselves own income
khai
Work for a Be
company employed
or by others
organizati
on
opened a Could not attract Consequence:
restaurant enough customers bankrupt
stressful Reason:
the lack of
resources
Example: run
your own
website
Phần Why? The
câu hỏi reasons for
this
Disadvant Drawbacks Be not The biggest
ages without its downside
drawbacks

Running your own business is not without its drawbacks. The biggest downside is
the risk of venturing out on your own. If the business is not successful you will not
have an income. For instance, my uncle opened a restaurant, but it turned out his
cooking skills were not as good as he thought and he could not attract enough
customers to pay all his bills and finally he became bankrupt. As well is this, it can be
extremely stressful to run your own business. This can often be due to the lack of
resources to help you with issues such as the need to run your own website.

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 Từ Mở bài Kết bài
vựng
đề bài
Từ Self-employed Decide to work Run their Result:
vựng for themselves own Have a better
triển business career
khai
Work for a Be employed by
company or others
organization
Phần Why? The reasons for
câu hỏi this
Disadvantages Drawbacks It should be This can be Therefore:
kept in risky and
mind. that stressful. Is not
suited to
all people

In conclusion, many people are venturing out on their own due to their interest in
running their own business and believing that they will have a better career. However,
it should be kept in mind that this can be risky and stressful. Therefore, this type of
career is not suited to all people.

2. TOPIC: ENVIRONMENT

MODEL ANSWER:

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of
particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important
environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Bước 1: Chuẩn bị từ vựng theo yêu cầu đề:

Từ vựng Mở bài
đề bài
Từ vựng the loss of particular the extinction of The loss of
triển species of plants and certain species species
khai animals
the main is the greatest
environmental threat to our
problem of our time environment
more important more pressing Critical issues
environmental environmental
problems issues
Phần Discuss both views + discusses both
câu hỏi perspectives

and give your + why I believe

opinion that

INTRODUCTION:

While many believe that the extinction of certain species is the greatest threat to our
environment, others feel that there are more pressing environmental issues. This
essay discusses both perspectives and why I believe that there are more critical issues
than the loss of species.

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Từ Mở bài Thân bài 1
vựng
đề bài
Từ the loss of the extinction of plants and the loss of one species
vựng particular certain species species are
triển species of plants interrelated
khai and animals
1.
the main is the greatest : lead to the loss of
environmental threat to our other species.
problem of our environment
time
2. the loss of the extinction of if coral dies
particular certain species
species of plants
and animals
the main is the greatest =>consequence:
environmental threat to our the fish and marine life
problem of our environment that feed off it also die
time
3. the loss of the extinction of the importance of the
particular certain species biodiversity of the
species of plants planet,
and animals when a species dies
the main is the greatest This (biodiversity) is
environmental threat to our reduced
problem of our environment
time
Reason:
For application
Example: in the field
of medicine.
more important more pressing
environmental environmental
problems issues
Phần Discuss both discusses both There are …
câu hỏi views perspectives reasons why
people might
believe that

and give your why I believe that

opinion

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PARAGRAPH 1:

There are two main reasons why people might believe that the extinction of certain
plants and animals is the most serious issue. The first of these concerns the way that
plants and species are interrelated and how the loss of one species can lead to the
loss of other species. For instance, if coral dies many of the fish and marine life that
feed off it also die. Moreover, many people note the importance of the biodiversity
of the planet and point out that when a species dies this is reduced. This biodiversity
is important because we are constantly finding that certain species have important
applications such as in the field of medicine.

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 Từ Mở bài Thân bài 2
vựng
đề bài
Từ the loss of the extinction of
vựng particular certain species
triển species of
khai plants and
animals
the main is the greatest
environmenta threat to our
l problem of environment
our time
more more pressing more serious man-made problems
important environmental environment are emerging
environmenta issues al issues
l problems
Example:
such as Global warming
Experience rising
temperature
Consequence: become
uninhabitable
Phần Discuss both discusses both There are …
câu hỏi views perspectives reasons why
people might
believe that

and give your why I believe that

opinion

However, others consider that there are more serious environmental issues. One of
the reasons is that the extinction of a species can be considered a part of nature. For
instance, we know that the dinosaurs died out due to naturally changing weather
patterns, and life of our planet still continues. In addition, man-made problems are
emerging such as Global warming that are so serious they have potential to wipe out
all life on our planet. If the earth continues to experience rising temperatures, it will
start to become uninhabitable even for humans.

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 Từ Mở bài Kết bài
vựng
đề bài
Từ the loss of the extinction of
vựng particular certain species
triển species of
khai plants and
animals
the main is the greatest
environmenta threat to our
l problem of environment
our time
more more pressing man-made global
important environmental warming:
environmenta issues the most serious problem
l problems
Consequence: threatens to not only
destroy certain species
but also destroy all life
on our planet including
humans.
Phần Discuss both discusses both both sides
câu hỏi views perspectives of this
argument
have their
merits
and give your why I believe that in my
opinion opinion

CONCLUSION:

In conclusion, in my opinion both sides of this argument have their merits. However,
it seems that man-made global warming is the most serious problem because it
ultimately threatens to not only destroy certain species but also destroy all life on our
planet including humans. Moreover, it seems that we are not taking enough steps to
mitigate this catastrophic problem.

3. TOPIC: UNSATISFACTORY JOB

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an
unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and
improve such situations.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Bước 1: Chuẩn bị từ vựng theo yêu cầu đề:

Từ vựng Mở bài
đề bài
Từ vựng Accept a bad Accept of
triển situation negative
khai (unsatisfactory job or circumstances
shortage of money)
Try and improve Try to seek
such situations solutions in
such situations
Phần Discuss both views discusses both Some believe Discuss both
câu hỏi perspectives that perspectives

Others
emphasise
that
and give your why I believe Why I believe
opinion that that

INTRODUCTION:

Some believe that it is important to be accepting of negative circumstances when

they occur whereas others emphasise that it is better to try to seek solutions in such
situations. This essay discusses both perspectives and why I believe that the arguments
for seeking solutions are stronger.

Từ Thân bài 1
vựn

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 g đề
bài
Từ Accept a Accept of Must be
vựn bad negative accepting of
g situation circumstan bad
triể (unsatisfact ces circumstances
n ory job or
khai shortage of
money)
Accept the
reality
Example: Lead to:
Economic going bankrupt
downturns
Dwell on our Despite: Result:
current Setback Maintain a
circumstances positive mood
Try and Try to seek
improve solutions in
such such
situations situations
Phầ Discuss discusses Some believe Discuss both
n both views both that perspectives
câu perspectives
hỏi Others
emphasise that
and give why I Why I believe
your believe that that
opinion

PARAGRAPH 2:

There are two main reasons why people believe that we must be accepting of bad
circumstances. First of all, we often cannot avoid bad situations. Since these situations
cannot always be avoided it is best to just accept the reality. For instance, economic
downturns can lead to the company we work for going bankrupt and in this case, we
should not feel hard done by if we lose our job. In addition, unnecessary stress can be
caused by dwelling on our current circumstances. If we are accepting of our
circumstances this can allow us to maintain a positive mood and to continue enjoying
our life despite a setback.

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 Từ Thân bài 2
vựng
đề bài
Từ Accept a Accept of
vựng bad negative
triển situation circumstan
khai (unsatisfac ces
tory job or
shortage of
money)
Try and Try to seek Have a
improve solutions in proactive
such such attitude
situations situations
Find solutions To solve the Focus on
to any negative problem of …. solutions
predicament
Feelings of
empowerment
Solve our
problems
Eustress =>motivate us
to find
solutions
Phần Discuss discusses Some believe Discuss both
câu both views both that perspectives
hỏi perspectives
Others
emphasise that
and give why I Why I believe
your believe that that
opinion

PARAGRAPH 3:

However, others argue that we should have a proactive attitude and find solutions to
any negative predicament. The main benefit of this approach is that it may lead to
eustress which helps to motivate us to find solutions. For instance, if we lose our job
we should focus on finding a new job to solve the problem of being unemployed.
Additionally, focusing on solutions can divert some of our negative emotions such as
a feeling of bad luck or guilt into more positive emotions such as feelings of
empowerment in our ability to solve our problems.

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 Từ Kết bài
vựn
g đề
bài
Từ Accept a Accept of
vựn bad negative
g situation circumstances
triể (unsatisfact
n ory job or
khai shortage of
money)
Try and Try to seek
improve solutions in such
such situations
situations
Phầ Discuss discusses both Some Discuss both
n both views perspectives believe that perspectives
câu
hỏi Others
emphasise
that
and give why I believe that Why I I believe both
your believe that sides of the
opinion argument have
merits

CONCLUSION:

In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However, I believe it
is better to focus on finding solutions because it increases the likelihood of solving
our problems and maintaining a positive mental attitude, which is far more
important than the benefits of avoiding stress through being accepting of our
circumstances.

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