16/1/2023

Hi everyone! First of all, thank you for giving me the opportunity to introduce myself.
I’m excited to be here. My name’s Nhi and I‘m in early-twenties. I grew up in Tien
Giang province. This place is famous with lots of rice plant and fruits. I grew up in a
family of four. I have one siblings and I’m youngest in my family. Beyond my family,
I’m also in a wonderful relationship. My boyfriend and I have been together for 2
months now. We share common interests, such as chatting, eating, loving blue color.
We’re planning to get married in the next 10 years. One thing you may not know
about me is I’m studying Psychology at University of Social Sciences and
Humanities. I choose this major because I hope to support people overcome mental
health issues. Now I’m in my third year of my psychology degree. I’m excited
because I’m nearing the end of my studies. My goal is to become a therapist in the
future.

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18/1/23

Hi everyone! First of all, thank you for giving me the opportunity to introduce
yourself. I’m really excited to be here. My name’s Nhi and I’m in early-twenties. I
come from Tien Giang province where has lots of rice plant and fruits. I grew up in a
family of four members. My family includes my parents, my brother and me. I’m the
youngest in my family. We always support and love each other. We’re happiness
family. Beyond my family, I’m also in a wonderful relationship. My boyfriend and I
have been together for over 2 months now. We share common interests, such as
intervest characterics, chatting, eating, activities, loving blue color and so on. Maybe,
this is reason why we feel peaceful and comfortable when we’re together. We’re
planning to get married in the next 10 years. One thing you may not about me is that I
love writing romantic stories and going swimming, doing yoga. I'm studying
Psychology at University of Social Sciences and Humanities. I’m in my third year of
my psychology degree. I choose this major because I become to therapist to help
people to overcome their mental health issues. I’m excited because I’m nearing the
end of my studies.

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"Hi everyone! First of all, thank you for giving me the opportunity to introduce
myself. I’m really excited to be here. My name is Nhi, and I’m in my early twenties. I
come from Tien Giang province where there are lots of rice fields and fruits. I grew up
in a family of four members, including my parents, my brother, and me. I’m the
youngest in my family, and we always support and love each other. We're a happy
family.

Beyond my family, I'm also in a wonderful relationship. My boyfriend and I have been
together for over 2 months now. We share common interests such as personality traits,
chatting, eating, engaging in activities, and both love the color blue. Perhaps, this is
the reason why we feel peaceful and comfortable when we're together. We're planning
to get married in the next 10 years.

One thing you may not know about me is that I love writing romantic stories and
enjoy swimming and doing yoga. I'm currently studying Psychology at the University
of Social Sciences and Humanities, in my third year of my psychology degree. I chose
this major because I aspire to become a therapist to help people overcome their mental
health issues. I'm excited as I'm nearing the end of my studies."