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Chapter I
Writing is a crucial macro skill that one should be able to master (Fareed et al.,
2016; Tseng 2019; Mejos 2023). This may be the reason why most of the assessments
are done through writing, for instance, essays. According to White (2020), an essay is a
written output that is designed to showcase one’s idea, emotion, argument, or even a
debate about a certain topic. Just like any other writing assessment, essays are done with
guidelines in mind, thus making them technical. Because of this, students find it hard
(Bonale 2023; Evans 2023; Mejos 2023). Even though this is the case, essay writing skills,
if mastered, can be a great asset, for this does not only hone one’s writing skills but also
one’s communication skills, academic skills, and problem-solving skills (Elser 2023; Okpe
& Onjewu 2017). Consequently, Bailey (2015) and Meyers (2014) observed that, because
of the wide variety of skills that one can hone, the essay type of test is highly utilized,
writing that showcase and support a thesis. As stated by Perkins (2020), when teachers
seek to test the understanding level of high school students, essays are highly utilized.
Caulfield (2023) also added that there are four types of high school essays: expository,
essays can either be done traditionally, that is, through pen and paper, or done through
any technologically advanced gadgets like cell phones, laptops, tablets, and the like.
Seeing that the education system has also adapted to the advancement of technology,
many of these tasks, like writing essays, are now done digitally or through the use of
As identified by Zheng and Warschauer (2017), many things have changed these
days due to the fast-paced development of technology. Also, as stated by Fitria (2021),
technology was developed to assist people in their activities, thus making them more
productive. Because of their characteristics, technologies have been highly utilized in the
field of education (Faisal & Carabella, 2023). Through the integration of technology,
students can now work collaboratively through their writing process, which will in turn
foster their critical thinking skills and self-assessment (Inderawati et al., 2019). According
to Castillo (2023), in the classroom setting, 90% are using personal computers, 59% are
using interactive whiteboards, and 36% are using handheld technological tools like
phones, iPads, laptops, etc. With the rise of technology and the avid use of the internet,
more students are now integrating different technological tools into their academics,
In 1956, John McCarthy coined the term artificial intelligence (AI). This marked the
beginning of a highly powerful study in the field of machines and its journey towards
attaining human intelligence. The term AI has been highly used by many, both within and
outside the field (Monett & Lewis, 2018). AI has opened many doors to reinvent business
models (Duan, Edwards, & Dwivedi, 2019), alter the nature of work (Schwartz et al., 2019),
improve performance in different fields (Wilson & Daugherty, 2018), and expand human
capabilities (Dwivedi, et al., 2021). Hence, it is undeniable that the emergence of AI has
contributed positively to mankind. However, according to Wang and Siau (2019), due to
its wide array of capabilities, there have been fewer demands for jobs, putting many
people at risk of being replaced with AI and AI-based automation technology due to the
high demand in society. It would be inevitable that AI would outperform humans in nearly
every cognitive task (Wang & Siau, 2019). Ahmad (2023) even concluded that the wide
use of technology, especially AI, limits the thinking capacity of individuals, decreasing
The Programme for International Student Assessment (PISA) 2019 report indicated
that the Philippines has the lowest overall reading literacy score among participating
countries, averaging 340. Reading literacy encompasses the skills of reading, speaking,
listening, and writing. The decline in writing literacy has led to a surge in the use of essay
writing tools. A 2022 survey conducted by the International Society for Technology in
Education (ISTE) revealed that 40% of students in grades 5-12 reported using an essay
There have been numerous existing literature on the overall use of technology and
its specific impacts in the field of education, but literature about the specific effects of AI
in education, especially in the field of writing has been highly lacking. This study aims to
bridge the gap by determining the relationship between the usage of AI-based technology
and the essay writing skills of grade 9 students in VSU Integrated High School.
Specifically, the research will seek to accomplish the following statements:
This chapter introduce a brief description of related literature and studies of the
variables in this research namely essay, high school student’s essay performance,
Essay
writing that focuses on a specific subject. In school, being good at writing is crucial,
especially for essays (Bailey, 2015; Meyers, 2014). If students possess critical thinking
skills, they will be able to develop and articulate issues, offer responses, provide reasons,
and express their opinions in their essay writing. This implies that critical thinking is a
fundamental skill for effective and comprehensive essay development (Rohayati, 2017).
However, according to Faradhibah and Nur (2017), To write a good essay, it's not
just about coming up with ideas. It's also important to be really good at how you put your
sentences together. If your sentences don't flow well and connect smoothly, the reader
might get confused or misunderstand what you're trying to say. An essay is a common
type of assignment where you write about one main topic, dividing it into paragraphs (each
talking about a big idea). So, learning to write well, especially essays, is really important
Urbano et.al. (2021) note that high school students commonly face difficulties in
academic essay writing, with issues ranging from topic-related knowledge to grammatical
students at Santa Maria National High School specifically identifies challenges in crafting
argumentative essays.
manifold advantages (Fleckenstein, 2020), the existing literature underscores the need
for addressing the persistent challenges faced by high school students in mastering this
skill, with this, high school essays serve as a crucial component of students' academic
or descriptive essays (Caulfield, 2023). Deane (2014) emphasizes that these writing tasks
play a significant role in enhancing students' critical thinking skills, writing proficiency, and
ability to articulate their thoughts. The acquisition of such skills becomes particularly vital
for high school students as it equips them with the necessary tools to navigate their higher
education successfully (Surat et.al., 2014). Despite the evident benefits of essays in
As technology undergoes continuous evolution, its usage and applications are also
current technologies. Franklin and Bolick (2007) emphasize the role of technology as a
valuable means to address complex challenges, advocating for the adoption of advanced
resources, and the development of active and effective learning techniques, creating
engaging and enjoyable educational experiences. Preston (2015) adds that the perpetual
environment.
can harness technology through collaborative efforts, exploration of features with peers,
maintaining proper netiquette. Despite the evident growth in technology use over the
centuries, continuous improvements are still necessary. Given that technology has
become an integral part of our lives, its use, especially in the classroom, should be
time; however, Dyhrkopp (2021) argues for the importance of clear technology policies in
In the aspect of using AI, Bhutario (2022) argued that applications and other AI-
powered platforms provide learners with the opportunities for personalized learning as
they can identify their writing strengths and weaknesses. Tambunan (2022) claimed that
AIpowered applications improved the punctuation and grammar of the students according
to his study. In connection, Malik et. al. (2023) supports Bhutario and Tambunan’s claims
as his study revealed that the emergence of AI tools serves as an important assistance
However, several scholars have contrasted the claims above, as their study
revealed how various University of the Philippines Diliman students were put under
(2022) in his study at Philippine Normal University argued that, although AI was able to
guide the essay writing of the students, its reliance led to the learners not being able to
develop organization and content writing skills. On top of that, these claims are proven by
Ebora (2022) as her study revealed that students are now merely relying on AI's advanced
technology in making their essays, and this will eventually lead them to develop a lazy
With the emergence of AI-based tools as part of the evolution of technology it has
crucial for high school students to possess critical thinking skills in giving arguments and
viewpoints in crafting their essays. As a result, Faradhibah and Nur (2017) claimed that
writing a quality essay needs to highlight the structure of the sentences. Whereas Austria
et al. (2022) found out that AI-based technology provides students with personalized
advancement has led to students' dependency not developing organization and content
writing skills. On top of that, Ebora (2022) said that, because of Ai's advanced technology,
students are now relying on Ai to make their essays, this will eventually lead them to
heavily rely on this and in turn develop dependency when it comes to creating essays on
their own.
Grade 9 Students
According to Zaff (2014), ninth grade is a crucial year, often seen as a "make or
break" period. It's when students deal with changes in thinking, emotions, and body, and
the pressure is higher because they're adjusting to new schools with more responsibilities.
Belsky (2023) also added that students in grades 9-12 are when they start to develop
various foundational skills like writing, spelling, grammar, and vocabulary, making them
highly highly prone to external influence especially when developing theses skills. With
this reason, Hammond et al. (2020) concluded in his research that, it’s empirical for to
understand the dynamics of this grade level. so that we can shed light to the individual
struggles and emphasize on the importance of the developmental stage, especially now
Chapter II
Methodology
Overview
This chapter will explain the various methodologies that the researchers are going
to use in gathering data and analysis which are relevant to the research. The
methodologies will include areas such as the research design, respondents of the study,
Research Design
phenomena that show what it's like, focusing on the details without trying to figure out why
things are the way they are. This will enable the researchers to examine the effects of AI
The respondents of the study are the Grade 9 students of VSU Integrated High
School. Using purposive sampling, the researchers will make use of the overall population
of the Grade 9 students. Before administering the study, informed consent will be given
to the respondents to give them an overview of how their data will be used. We selected
the said respondents because according to a study conducted by Wormald (2012), 49%
The researcher will use a survey by Crusan and Ruecker (2019) containing
questions about their usage of AI in their essay writing. The day after, those students who
will claim to use AI in aiding their essay writing will be given a two-item standardized essay
question. The questions that they have to answer are to tell their stand on the following
statements: A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent
knowledge of the subject being taught and, always telling the truth is the most important
consideration in any relationship. Their outputs will be rated using a holistic rubric scale
adapted from Assessment Institute 2015. This test and rubric will be validated by an expert
To identify the errors in their outputs, the researchers will use rubrics which include
four criteria: (1) quality of evaluation and response to scenario (Written response
addresses all essay question writing prompts clearly and directly); (2) quality and clarity
of thought (Response indicates depth and complexity of thought in answering the essay
question) ; (3) organization & development of ideas (Response is well organized and
developed with appropriate support to make meaning clear);(4) grammar, usage, and
mechanics (Response is free from any errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics). The
students' output will be rated on the scale of 1-4; 4 for excellent which equates to the
student being proficient in writing, 3 for a satisfactory output, meaning the essay is done
with good skills in writing and a clear understanding in writing, 2 for fair, these are for
outputs that lacks proficiency in writing, and lastly 1 for poor which equates to little to no
understanding of writing.
Data Gathering Procedure
This study will be conducted during the school year 2023- 2024 at Visayas State
University Integrated High School in considering the following technical procedure. By the
third week of November, planning of the context and procedure of the study must be done.
The planning for the preparation of the source of data in surveying respondents was
included in the study. Formulation of the questionnaire regarding the study must be also
The researchers will submit research instruments to experts in the field of writing.
After the validation of the instrument, the researchers will then secure an approved letter
to be submitted to the office of the Principal of Visayas State University Integrated High
School by the fourth week of November 2023, to officially conduct the survey.
respondents on the fourth week of November. The students will be given thirty (30)
minutes to answer the survey questionnaire. The same week of November 2023, the
researchers will hand out the two (2) item standardized essay tests to the respondents.
The researchers expect to retrieve one hundred percent (100%) of the two-item essay
test.
With the given data, the researchers will be expected to come up with general
findings, conclusions, and recommendations during the first month of December after
Objective 1: Frequency analysis will be used to determine the common AI writing tools
Objective 2: Frequency analysis will be utilized to identify the common error in essay
writing skills
Objective 3: Mean and standard deviation will be used to determine the level of essay
writing skills
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