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stop

bullying
thesIs
Bullying is a big problem that often occurs in the school
environment. Bullying can make student’s uncomfortable
when they are in the school environment . There are some
reasons why bullying must stop.
Arguments
ArGumen 1
First , student’s who are bullied feel isolated and not
considered . If left unchecked , this action will make
student’s mentally disturbed , stress , and depressed .
Argumen 2
Second , Bullying can make student’s feel uncomfortable at
school. The learning atmosphere becomes uncomfortable and
student’s feel restless
conclusION
The conclusion is a big problem if it not treated
immediately , teachers and parents must provide
education about bullying.
LANGUAGE FEATURES
Focus : Bullying Emotive words : uncomfortable,
Simple present tense : often mentally disturbed , stress , and
depressed
occurs , becomes noun phrases : a big problem
Temporal conjuctions : First , mental verbs : feel uncomfortable ,
Second feel restless
Conjuctions : and , if , when Relational processes :are , is

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