Global

Environmental
Issues By; Chong & Lee

IELTS BAND 9 ESSAY

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the
loss of particular species of plants and animals.

Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
INTRODUCTION
There are different arguments related to the
various environmental problems that we face today.

Pertaining to this, certain advocates believe that

the loss of specific trees and wildlife is a major
concern, while some critics oppose it, as they think
there are other areas that need more attention.

However, in my perspective, I strongly believe that

natural hazards like global warming and the
shortage of drinking water draw urgent attention.
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On the one hand, others often give paramount importance (重要)
to the extinction of certain flora and fauna for two main reasons.

Firstly, the public considers that their existence maintains the

geological ecosystem and their absence could result in further
deterioration. (恶化)

For example, after a kind of wild animals disappeared in

Australia, there was a rise in the infestation of crops which led
to an increase in human diseases.

Secondly, they are considered to be known as endangered

species, which leads to their smuggling (偷猎) poaching. To
explain, the African continent is known to be a hunting ground for
many poachers who kill them for monetary (金钱)purposes.
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On the other hand, others and I believe that there
are more grievous natural hazards for three reasons.

To begin with, global warming has resulted in

increased temperatures, melting of glaciers and an
alarming rise in seawater levels.

To be precise, it is expected that the tiny islands in

vast oceans will be lost forever in the near future.
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Moreover, there is a consistent rise in air, water and
soil pollution because of industrialisation.

For instance, the quality of air in New Delhi is

reported to be the worst in India.

Lastly, there will be a wet drought in future as there

will be water all around but it will not be potable.
 CONCLUSION
To conclude, after having a glance at the above explanation,

I truly feel that there are other natural disasters that need universal attention at the earliest.

It is recommended to everyone to maintain the ecosystem if humanity has to survive.