Some children spend hours every day on their cellphones.

Many people think this is a negative development.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, THE NUMBER OF YOUNGSTERS spending time on

smartphones are increasing, which IS leading to health problems. The
majority of people believe this new technology brings A negative impact.
In contraSt, the minority of people said the smartphones are convenient
because of the functions. In this essay I will discuss the disadvantages
and the benefits OF ADOLESCENTS USING the DIGITAL TECHNOL-
OGY.

Students are willing to study at home in present time because kids are
able to search for information and sending homework by the smart-
phones easily. 2 IDEAS? UH-OH… The reason is the RAPID DEVEL-
OPMENT OF technology development rapidly means children ARE
ABLE TO learn new knowledge in a few minutes ON the internet. In ad-
dition, the teachers encouraged students to submit their projects on the
school website, which is convenient to use less time, as well as saving
papers. WHY ON EARTH ARE YOU STILL INTRODUCING SECOND
IDEAS INSTEAD OF DEVELOPING THE FIRST? I’M REALLY NOT
SURE HOW MANY TIMES I CAN SAY… JUST CHOOSE ONE IDEA
AND DEVELOP IT… For instance, students spend a lot of time in the li-
brary to find information in the previous decades. However, nowadays
students did the research faster than before and effective.

TurNING to the downside, the children spent several hours on watching

some CRIMINAL videos and spread on the internet, which mislead chil-
dren to do something illegal.
Due to the kids are too naive to affect by the younger generation.

WHEN YOUNGSTERS WATCH THESE ACTIVITIES THEY WILL EAS-

ILY BE INFLUENCED BY THEM.

So, the dangerous things are ATTEMPTED by the kids, EVEN SOME
children died because IMITATING THE BEHAVIOUR IN THE VIDEOS.

A Few days ago, the news revealED that a group of kids WERE HIT by
a truck during changing a game in the road.
Ultimately, the children had been recured. WHAT ARE THESE HORRI-
BLE SHORT SENTENCES?

In conclusion, I mostly agree with the cellphones indeed brought the

benefiTS for YOUNGSTERS. Nevertheless, the new technology CAN
BE abused by children, including IN CRIMINAL WAYS.??? OVERCHAL-
LENGE ISN’T A WORD? WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? I be-
lieve it will be better if the parents make some rules to prevent the
kids spending to much time on the new technology. YAY! A NEW
UNDEVELOPED IDEA IN THE FINAL SENTENCE!

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