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OUTLINE

A.INTRODUCTION (Topic Sentence): A life without a smartphone would be a great loss for
people.

B.BODY

Major Support 1 : Communication

Minor Support (a): reaching immediately

Minor Support (b): helping to other people

Major Support 2: different applications

Minor Support (a):get rid of many devices

Minor Support (b): spending time

Major Support 3 : easy access

Minor Support (a): finding address easily

Minor Support (b): shopping fastly

C. CONCLUSION (Closing Sentence): Smartphones allow us to live a more comfortable


life.

A GREAT MISSING

Smartphones are the important parts of modern life. Assuming that it isn’t in our lives, it
would be a great destruction.First of all, smartphones are the biggest factor that enables in
communication. If it weren't for them,people wouldn't reach each other immediately. For
example, they couldn't be support us to someone in need of help, a patient more easily. People
would continue to lead a life unaware of everything. Secondly, smartphones provide great
benefits to our lives thanks to various applications. We get rid of by many devices by carrying
just smartphones.In mean, we don't need to wear a wrist watch or carry a notebook or
calculator with us. In order to listen to music, watch a movie or series, we can watch it over
the phone without a computer. We get to where we want to go more easily with
navigation.Smartphones also make it quick for people to shop. Instead of going to the store
for a product or book, people are happy with a system that is delivered to the door with an
order. Without this system on phones, we would have a more tiring shopping process.As a
result,the absence of phones would take us back to ancient times, a tiring and introverted life.

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