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English Coursework 2

Name : Heng Yi Jun


Student ID : 1201200318
Topic :

The drinking age


should be 18.
Thesis Statement:
The drinking age should be 18 instead of 21.
Arguments :
• Drinking alcoholic beverages can maintain heart health.
• Drinking alcohol can make bones strong.
Concession & Refutation

Concession 1 : Refutation 1 :
Minors have not fully A moderate amount of
developed physically, so alcohol can supplement
drinking too much alcohol vitamins, especially vitamin
will be harmful to the body. B.
Concession 2 : Refutation 2 :
Decreased intelligence. Drinking can improve
cognitive ability.
A Call to Action
• The Ministry of Health should change the
age limit for drinking from 21 to 18.

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