Project Title: “PROPOSED DEVELOPMENT PLAN AND DESIGN OF SPORTS AND RECREATIONAL FACILITIES AT

BRGY. CALOOCAN, BALAYAN, BATANGAS”

Proponents:
1. Carable, John Michael J.
2. Gaba, Jose Henderson P.
3. Masicat, Jiannroi D.
4. Mercado, Sharmaine M.

Date of Defense: January 6, 2020

Summary of Comments

Comments Page No. Action Taken Page No. Remarks

Consider the Cutawtaw Included the Cutawtaw
Gymnasium in the background 1-4 Gymnasium in the Background
of the study of the Study
Clarify the orientation of the
8
location of the proposed project
Requested for and presented
Present more data in Chapter 2 data of athletes that will use the
to support the _ of design facilities of the proposed
project
Discussed the basis of the
Discuss the basis of the
30 capacity for each building on
capacity for each building
Chapter _
Validate the source and provide
a study of the users for the 30
proposed project
 Justified the paragraphs and
Justify the paragraphs and
- rephrased some sentences as -
rephrase some sentences
necessary

Engr. Erwin Rafael D. Cabral

Member, Panel of Examiner
Project Title: “PROPOSED DEVELOPMENT PLAN AND DESIGN OF SPORTS AND RECREATIONAL FACILITIES AT
BRGY. CALOOCAN, BALAYAN, BATANGAS”
Proponents:
1. Carable, John Michael J.
2. Gaba, Jose Henderson P.
3. Masicat, Jiannroi D.
4. Mercado, Sharmaine M.
Date of Defense: January 6, 2020
Comments
Need more discussion and data
in Project Background about
the need of a new sports
coliseum
Location of the Study first
before the Objectives of the
Study
Explain the current situation of
the location of the proposed
project
Discuss the reason of including
the contour map
Summary of Comments
Page No. Action Taken Page No. Remarks
Interviewed the Balayan
Municipal Planning and
Development Office about the
1-4
need of a new sports coliseum
and included it on Project
Background
Put the Location of the Study
4 before the Objectives of the
Study
Explained the current situation
9 of the location of the proposed
project
Discuss the reason of including
9
the contour map on Chapter _

Lack of data for the Potential
Users
Show the basis of the capacity
of users in sports coliseum and
include the number of delegates
Validate the number of persons
who will use the quarters
building and the number of
rooms in the building
Waste disposal and waste
management, fire protection
and security system does not
include in the Utilities
Discuss the budget in the
Economic Constraints
The discussion under
Environmental Constraints are
mostly technical
Are there no social constraint?
Explain the contents of the
republic acts mentioned in the
Legal Constraints
Discussion under Health and
Safety Constraints are not
constraints
The description of the layout in
the paragraph does not match
the drawing
Requested for and presented
data of athletes that will use the
11
facilities of the proposed
project
Showed the basis of the
11 capacity for the Sports
Coliseum on Chapter _
Showed the basis of the
12 capacity for the Quarters
Building on Chapter _
Removed waste disposal and
waste management, fire
14
protection and security system
from Utilities
Discussed the budget in the
18
Economic Constraints
Put the discussion under
19 Environmental Constraints into
Technical Constraints
19
Explained the contents of the
19 republic acts mentioned in the
Legal Constraints
Removed the discussion about
19
Health and Safety Constraints
Matched the description of the
23 site layout in the paragraph to
the figure
 Include FIBA in the Design
Considerations
Look for more codes for the
facilities
Show a better perspective of the
Sports Coliseum
Reduce the dimensions to
whole numbers of the facilities
Remove the functions of each
facility in the table
Remove the perspective of the
Materials Recovery Facility in
the Preliminary Design
Utilize/Rearrange the buildings
in the site development plan
Justify the number of parking
lot
Redesign the parking area
Use the vicinity map in the
Location of the Project in
Chapter 1
Change ‘Site Development
Plan’ into ‘Proposed Layout
Plan’
Clarify the need of perimeter
fence
Clarify the size of the creek
The dimension text should not
Included FIBA in the Design
24
Considerations
25
Changed the perspective of the
31
Sports Coliseum
Reduced the dimensions to
31
whole numbers of the facilities
Removed the functions of each
31 facility in the tables in the
Preliminary Design
Removed the perspective of the
36 Materials Recovery Facility in
the Preliminary Design
Rearranged the buildings in the
37
site development plan
Justified the number of parking
37
lot
37 Redesigned the parking area
Used the vicinity map in the
- Location of the Project in
Chapter 1
Changed ‘Site Development
- Plan’ into ‘Proposed Layout
Plan’
Clarified the need of perimeter
-
fence
- TANGGALIN
- Placed the dimension text
 be at the center of the
dimension line
Utilize the space of the toilet
and commercial space in the
Sports Coliseum
Consider to elevate the height
of the Sports Coliseum
Benchmark for the existing
sports quarters with same
facilities
Redesign the proposed
structures
above the dimension line
Redesigned the Sports
Coliseum and utilized the space
-
of the toilet and commercial
space
Elevated the height of the
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Sports Coliseum to _ meters
Performed a benchmarking
activity at an accommodation
-
building for athletes in the
Batangas Sports Complex
Redesigned the structures of the
-
proposed project
Engr. Rhea S. De Ocampo
Member, Panel of Examiner
Project Title: “PROPOSED DEVELOPMENT PLAN AND DESIGN OF SPORTS AND RECREATIONAL FACILITIES AT
BRGY. CALOOCAN, BALAYAN, BATANGAS”
Proponents:
1. Carable, John Michael J.
2. Gaba, Jose Henderson P.
3. Masicat, Jiannroi D.
4. Mercado, Sharmaine M.
Date of Defense: January 6, 2020
Comments
Justify the paragraphs
Present a figure that shows the
existing court in Balayan is
located right in front of its
municipal building
Include the date when the
picture of existing court is
taken
Present more pictures to prove
that there is lack of facilities
Provide a representation of the
location map of Balayan from
different source
Summary of Comments
Page No. Action Taken Page No. Remarks
Justified the paragraphs as
-
necessary
Presented a figure that shows
the existing court in Balayan is
2
located right in front of its
municipal building
Included the date when the
3 picture of existing court is
taken
3
Provided a representation of the
6 location map of Balayan from
different source
 Overlay the contour map
Provide a table that lists the
target activities in the Sports
Center
... low cost chenes
Discuss the total population and
demography of Balayan
(Discuss the foundation design
in Chapter 2)
Show that the location of the
proposed project is beside the
proposed new government
center
Clarify the need of perimeter
fence
Consider the slope protection
system for the creek
Provide larger figure for the
proposed layout plan
Present the figure of the
standard dimensions of the
courts in the appendix
Consider the government center
in the traffic flow
9
Tabulated the target activities in
11
the Sports Center
Discussed the total population
and demography of Balayan
Discussed the foundation
-
design in Chapter 2
Included a figure which shows
that the location of the
23 proposed project is beside the
proposed new government
center
Clarified the need of perimeter
23
fence
Interviewed the Balayan
Municipal Planning and
Development Office regarding
23
the plans for the creek and the
slope protection system to be
used
Provided a larger figure for the
23
proposed layout plan
Presented the figure of the
29 standard dimensions of the
courts in the Appendix
37 Included the road network of
the proposed government center

Centralize the parking area
Show the creek in the drainage
layout
Improve the design of the
facilities to attract people
in the flow of traffic
Parking area were placed only
37
at around the Sports Coliseum
Showed the creek in the
52
drainage layout
Redesigned the structures of the
-
proposed project
Dr. Cristina Amor M. Rosales
Member, Panel of Examiner