Nama : Ayasy Izzul Haq

Kelas : XI IPS 1

1. Thesis
Text 1 : (P1)
The fact that the pandemic corona virus infected more and more victims. People should stay home to
stop the pandemic disease, for some reasons.
Text 2 : (P1)
Do you agree that music is important in our life? Yes I do, music has certain role completing our day
to day activities. Here are some reasons why music is heard everywhere and anywhere.
Text 3 : (P1)
To improve comfort and cleanliness at our school, a number of dust bins should be increased.

2. Arguments
Text 1 : (P2,3,4,5)
Firstly, people should stay at home because if they have physical contact, people will be easier to
be infected each other. Research indicates that the virus spread through physical contact, which
means the more physical contact happens, the higher the risk of the virus spreading. (P2)
Secondly, people have to stay home so for the people who has been infected cannot take the virus
to infect others. Because by staying at home, you can do an independent isolation for about two
weeks and monitor your health and keep in contact with medical care to get further information
when you have something wrong with your body. (P3)

The last, staying home make people cure themselves instead of infecting the others. Just like the
previous point, if you are not a high- risk patient, then you can heal yourself at home independently.
It can also help medical workers to work in hospitals with patients who are in high risk. (P4)
All of these efforts are not only about preventing from being infected by corona virus but also stop
the spreading of the virus itself to others. (p5)

Text 2 : (P2,3,4)
Music is a way to express feelings. When we fall in love, the kind of music we’d listen to would be
all about love. When we’re sad, we would go for music that is melancholic in nature and immerse
ourselves in the sadness. When we’re happy, we’d choose songs with happy tunes too. (P2)

Song can help people to memorize the last experiences. A favorite song is a powerful documentary.
People with Alzheimer would remember details about songs they were familiar with. For example, an
elderly woman who couldn’t even remember her husband’s name would remember the details of her
favorite song; when it was played, how it made her feel and things about the song that made it
especially memorable for her. (P3)

Further, music can unite people and changes the world. A song with good lyric and striking deep
chord can stimulate certain universal feeling of all people. We can see it in the case of the famous and
legendary Michael Jacson’s Heal the World. The song can arouse humanism for a lot of people in the
world. (P4)

Text 3 : (P2,3)
 When we look at classrooms, school corridors and school yard, there are paper mineral water cups,
straws, and napkins here and there. The condition of uncleanliness and discomfort really hinders
learning and teaching environment. Litters thrown carelessly cause disease, especially empty plastic
cup or glasses. They can be filled out with water coming from the rain. This can be placed for dengue
mosquitoes to spread out. Besides, these rubbish can deteriorate the scene. Well painted wall and
green school yard do not mean anything litters are scattered everywhere.(P2)

Anyway I notice that most of the students in our school have responsibilities for the school
environment. They put their litters on the proper places. But some are not diligent enough to find
the dust bins. The numbers of dust binds in our schools are not enough. Ore dust bins should be put
beside each of steps, outside of the classrooms, and some more also the corridors. Probably one dust
bin should be in every ten meters. So when students want to throw away their litters, they can find
the dust bins easily.

3. Conclution
Text 1 : (P6)
From the reason above, staying at home is the best way to stop this pandemic disease causes more
victims.
Text 2 : (P5)
So what would the world be like without music? It would be
lonely
Text 3 : (P5)
When school is equipped with sufficient dust bins, we do not have problems of freak and discomfort
any more. Our school will be very clean and become a nice place to study.

4. The connector used in each text

Text 1 :

Firstly…, secondly…, the last…,

Text 2 :

Further…

Text 3 :

Besides, anyway, but,

5. The phrase used to make conclution

Text 1 :

From the reason above…

Text 2 :

So what would be the world without music?

Text 3 :
When school is equipped with sufficient dust bins,