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1st Grade Ela - Wangaris Trees of Peace 1 of 3 Teacher Materials
Vocabulary
Vocabulary
Enduring Essential From the text
Needed to talk about the
Understanding Question(s) Focused
Fast Instruction text
Instruction
One’s home is How can we make our • barren • army of women • illustration
more than a house. home a better place? • convinces • backyard • key details
• home • maize • key words
How did Wangari • Kenya • nursery
make her home a • protect • sugar cane
better place? • seedlings • sweet potatoes
• true story • tree farm
• umbrella of green
trees
• Wangari
Days At-A-Glance
DAY ONE DAY TWO DAY THREE DAY FOUR
Introduce the title and author/ Read text aloud a third time, Introduce the concept of a Support students to write
illustrator of Wangari’s Trees of pausing after page 16 to timeline and organize independently in response
Peace. Begin a “Key Words” discuss the Essential Question. students into collaborative to the Essential Question:
class chart and enter four Pause again after page 18, add
vocabulary words before timeline teams. Assign one How did Wangari make her
protect to the “Key Words”
reading. Do one reading Key Detail Card to each home a better place? After
chart and ask students to write
without stopping and then a their understanding of protect.
team, with each card writing, celebrate the
second. Pause to discuss key After writing, complete the highlighting a point in time. completed reading and the
details and to enter four third read aloud. Close by Ask student teams to written responses.
additional vocabulary words. playing the Mystery Word illustrate their Key Detail
Close with a review of what has Game to review the nine words Card and to explain the
been learned about Wangari. on the “Key Words” chart. illustration to the class.
CI Student Work CI Student Work CI Student Work CI Student Work
CCSS Product CCSS Product CCSS Product CCSS Product
RI.1.2 Oral Response RI.1.2 W.1.2
RI.1.3 Oral response L.1.1 Written Response
RI.1.4 Written Response L.1.2
RI.1.7 Drawing and oral
RI.1.4 response
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Page 1
Wangari’s
Trees of
Peace
By Jeanette
Winter
Table of Contents
Performance Task Overview ................................................................... 3
Time of Delivery ................................................................................ 3
Enduring Understanding ..................................................................... 3
Essential Question ............................................................................. 3
Text Summary .................................................................................. 3
Rationale for Text Selection ................................................................ 3
Text Considerations ........................................................................... 4
Targeted Word Study/Vocabulary ........................................................ 4
Opportunities to Collect Information ..................................................... 5
Scoring Tools .................................................................................... 5
Sample Student Work Products ........................................................... 6
Instructional Next Steps ..................................................................... 6
Days At-A-Glance .............................................................................. 8
CCSS Alignment Chart ...................................................................... 10
Get Ready, Get Set, Go! ................................................................... 12
DAY ONE ........................................................................................... 14
DAY TWO .......................................................................................... 21
DAY THREE ........................................................................................ 26
DAY FOUR ......................................................................................... 33
Collecting Student Information: RI.1.2 Comprehension Checklist .............. 36
Collecting Student Information: RI.1.4 Vocabulary Rubric ........................ 37
Collecting Student Information: RI.1.2/RI.1.3 Comprehension Checklist .... 38
Enduring Understanding
One’s home is more than a house.
Essential Question
How can we make our home a better place?
How did Wangari make her home a better place?
Text Summary
In Kenya, Wangari Maathai grows up in a home surrounded by trees. When
she returns from studying in America, she is disturbed to see that the forests
in her homeland are being cut down to make room for cities. She decides to
save Kenya from becoming a barren, treeless place and begins by the small
step of planting nine seedlings.
Eventually, other women join her efforts and their combined efforts expand
across Wangari’s homeland. Over time, other African nations follow her
model and also plant trees. The Author’s Note on page 29 explains that
Wangari was eventually awarded the Nobel Peace Prize in 2004.
Note: This book was published in 2008, three years before Wangari Maathai
died in 2011.
The illustrations are engaging and informative, and support and extend the
content in the prose. While the prose is succinct, it is also rich, including
engaging figurative language appropriate for primary grade students to hear
and use.
There is a clear central message for young readers—with hard work and
determination, a person can make their home a better place.
Text Considerations
While the story of Wangari’s endeavor occurred in the past, the prose in the
book is written in the present tense (e.g., “Wangari lives under an umbrella
of green trees”). This may be confusing to young students and require a
brief explanation.
In addition, this narrative takes place in another country and the author uses
words that may be unfamiliar to students like “Mount Kenya in Africa” and
“sweet potatoes, sugarcane, and maize.” However, the author’s prose and
illustrations are straightforward, enabling the young student to use context
and discussion to understand these words and to continue following the
narrative thread.
Finally, the title of this book includes the word peace, perhaps as a way to
honor Wangari Maathai being awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for her efforts
in Kenya. While this is explained in the Author Notes at the end of the book,
the concept of using the trees as a way to achieve or as a sign of peace may
not provide the most powerful central theme for first grade students to
study. Rather, the theme of devoting her life to making her homeland a
better place for everyone seems to provide a rich opportunity for student
thinking and was chosen as the emphasis for this particular performance
task.
In both Focused and Fast Instruction the goal is not for students to
memorize an exact dictionary definition of a term or phrase. Activities will
build deep understanding within the context of a text over the course of
multiple days.
1Blachowicz, C. L. Z., Baumann, J. F., Manyak, P., & Graves, M. (2015). Flood, Fast, Focus:
Integrating Vocabulary in the Classroom. In K. Wood, J. Paratore, B. Kissell, & R.
McCormack (Eds.), What's New in Literacy Teaching? Weaving Together Time-Honored
Practices with New Research (Chapter 2). Newark, DE: International Literacy Association.
Scoring Tools
Scoring tools are provided to help educators analyze student responses and
plan instructional next steps. The scoring tools incorporate evidence from
the PARCC Evidence Statements which describe the knowledge and skills
that a task requires. The evidence(s) listed in each of the standards-aligned
checklists targets what the teacher needs to observe, analyze, and consider
when planning instruction.
The scoring tools used in this performance task are checklists. Scoring tools
are standards-aligned and may reflect one or more standards. In this task,
the W.1.2 Comprehension Checklist is an example of a single standard
checklist. The RI.1.2/RI.1.3 Comprehension Checklist is an example of a
Teachers unfamiliar with the use of these types of tools may find initially
that they are more confident in using only a single part of a multi-part tool
for scoring or that it is best to apply all parts of a multi-part tool, but to a
small group, rather than the whole class. As teachers learn to use these
types of tools, they may expand the application of the tools with their
classes. Over the course of the first year of implementation of the formative
tasks, teachers should develop a greater understanding of how these scoring
tools allow for the collection of information on student performances in
relation to the standards. They will become better poised to provide refined
feedback to students and parents and to more efficiently alter instruction
based on information collected.
Days At-A-Glance
Times listed are approximate. Teachers should use professional judgment to
determine the time needed for their students.
Day
Description
Duration
• Introduce the title and author/illustrator.
• Clarify the meaning of true story and enter as the first words
on a “Key Words” class chart.
• Before reading, also enter and discuss the words Wangari,
Day Kenya, and home.
One • Read the first time from beginning to end without stopping.
• Reread pages 1 to 10, pausing at four targeted points to
50 min discuss key details in illustrations and to define words and
phrases that will be added to a “Key Words” class chart
(umbrella of green trees, barren, seedlings, and
convinces.)
• Close by asking students to review what they have learned
about Wangari at this point in the text.
• Read aloud pages 1 through 16 and pause for students to
discuss the Essential Question: How did Wangari make her
home a better place?
• Collect information using the RI.1.2 Checklist (p.35).
• Read pages 17-18 and add the word protect to the “Key
Day
Words” class list.
Two
• Ask students to use the illustrations and words on page 18 to
write a definition of protect using Student Resource: Making
40 min
meaning of Protect (p.43) and then complete reading text.
• Collect information using the RI.1.4 Vocabulary Checklist.
• Review vocabulary on the “Key Words” list by playing the
Mystery Word Game using Teacher Resource: The Mystery
Word Game (p.44).
• Lead a discussion of the meaning of timeline.
• Organize students into collaborative timeline teams and assign
Key Detail Card(s) using Student Resource: Key Detail Cards
(pp.58-68).
Day • Unroll the timeline and support students to use their Key Detail
Three Cards to create a timeline about Wangari’s work in Kenya.
• Collect information using the RI.1.2/RI.1.3 comprehension
45 min
Checklist (p.37).
• Support students to illustrate a second Key Detail Card to
match the words on the first Key Detail Card they placed on the
timeline.
• Collect information using the RI.1.7/RI.14 Illustration and
Vocabulary Checklist (p.38).
Day
Description
Duration
• Support students to write independently in response to the
Day
Essential Question: How did Wangari make her home a better
Four place?
30 min
• Plan a celebration of the completed reading and the written
responses.
L.1.2
Demonstrate
command of the
conventions of
standard English
capitalization,
punctuation, and
spelling when
writing.
(#) Evidence identified in PARCC Grade 1 Evidence Table
Get
Set
Continued • Print detail cards on card stock using the Student Resource:
Key Detail Cards for the Timeline (pp.58-68).
• Prepare and copy as needed: RI.1.2/RI.1.3 Comprehension
Checklist (p.37) and RI.1.7/RI.1.4 Illustration and Vocabulary
Checklist (p.38).
For Day Four:
• Prepare individual copies of the Student Resource: How
Wangari Made Her Home a Better Place (p.45).
• Prepare and copy as needed: W.1.2 Writing Checklist (p.39)
and L.1.1/L.1.2 Knowledge of Language and Conventions
Student Checklist (p.40).
Go! Begin DAY ONE.
DAY ONE
Key
T=Teacher alone
T+S=Teacher & students
S+S=Student & student
S=Student alone
Step-by-Step Directions
Tips for Teacher Language & Student Engagement CCSS
STEP 1.1
T
T+S
T+S What do you think the words true story tell us about the
book?
STEP 1.2
T+S
Add Wangari, Kenya, and home to the “Key Words” class RI.1.4
chart and locate Kenya on a world map.
Clap the syllables of Wangari and explain that this is the name of
the person about whom the book is written.
For home and Kenya explain that Kenya is the name of a country
in Africa where Wangari lived—it was her home and where this
true story takes place.
Clarify that home can mean more than the house in which
someone lives. It can mean the village or the town or the country
in which a person lives.
Begin reading the book a second time and stop four times between
pages 1 and 10 to discuss key details and to add words to the “Key
Words” class chart.
S+S Organize students for Turn & Talk to answer the question:
Why do you think the author uses the words umbrella of green
trees?
STEP 1.5
T+S
STEP 1.6
T
S+S
T+S
RI.1.4
RI.1.7
Add barren to the
“Key Words” class chart.
T+S Ask the students to Turn & Talk with a partner to use the
words and the illustration on page 5 to determine what barren
means. If needed, reread page 6 before students begin Turn &
Talk.
T+S Ask student pairs to share their meaning with the class and to
explain how they figured it out. Confirm understanding, and clarify
where needed.
STEP 1.7
T
T+S
Read pages 7 and 8 and pause to add seedlings to the “Key RI.1.1
Words” class chart. RI.1.2
RI.1.4
T+S Read pages 7 and 8 and then reread the sentence containing
seedlings.
STEP 1.8
T
S+S
T+S
RI.1.1
Read pages 9 and 10 and pause to add convinces to the RI.1.2
“Key Words” class chart. RI.1.4
S+S Turn and work with a partner to figure out what convinces
means on this page. Use the illustration and the words to help you.
T+S Ask student pairs to share their understanding of the word RI.1.1
convinces (e.g., talking/persuading the women into helping plant RI.1.2
the seedlings). Confirm that students understand and clarify where RI.1.4
needed.
Note:
During Day Three, students will need some understanding of what
a tree farm and nursery are. It is not necessary to add them to
the “Key Words” class list. If students are not familiar with the
terms, explain that Wangari needed more land than just her
backyard to plant seedlings for Kenya. In this book, tree farm
and nursery are names for places where you can grow many
trees.
STEP 1.9
T+S
You might mention to students that what they are doing is talking
about the timeline of Wangari’s life. Help students understand
that they are reading about her life in the same order that it
happened. This may prepare students for the timeline activity in
Day Three.
DAY TWO
Key
T=Teacher alone
T+S=Teacher & students
S+S=Student & student
S=Student alone
Step-by-Step Directions
Tips for Teacher Language & Student Engagement CCSS
STEP 2.1
T
S
S+S
CI RI.1.2 Comprehension Checklist (p.35)
CI Oral responses during Think-Pair-Share (Glossary)
Provide a moment for students to think on their own and then ask
for a Thumbs Up/Thumbs Down (Glossary).
S+S Then organize students for Turn & Talk and say:
Now turn to your partner to share your decision and the reasons
for your decision. Make sure you each have a turn to explain your
thinking.
Note:
It is not necessary to ask students to share their thinking about the
Essential Question with the whole class. Students will have
opportunities to discuss the Essential Question again and will write
about it independently on Day Four.
STEP 2.2
T
S
CI RI.1.4 Vocabulary Rubric (p.36)
CI Student Resource: Making Meaning of Protect (p.43)
CI Written response
Read pages 17 and 18, add the word protect to the “Key RI.1.4
Words” class chart, and ask students to write their own
definition for protect.
Then say:
I’ve added protect to our list. It’s a really important word the
author uses on page 18.
I’ll reread that page and then I want you to use the illustrations,
the words, or both to figure out what protect means on this page.
Not just what it means, but what it means on this page.
Play The Mystery Word Game to review the nine words RI.1.4
entered on the “Key Words” class chart.
This game should move briskly and can be played again at a later
time using the same list of words and game rules.
Form student pairs (or small groups) to work as teams with only
one sheet of blank paper or a white board for each group.
Notes:
1. Detailed directions and definitions for each word are RI.1.4
provided on the Teacher Resource: The Mystery Word
Game.
2. Visual clues may be offered as support as students learn
to play the game/learn the word meanings.
For example, say the clue and draw a line for each letter
in the word (__ __ __ __ __ __) and/or provide the
beginning sound/letter.
3. The game can be played with any list of words from any
text and provides a playful way to review the meaning of
key words/details from a text.
4. Organizing students to collaborate in teams to match the
words to the definitions can provide an additional level of
support to all members of the group.
5. Over time, students can be challenged to write their own
definitions and assume the role of “Mystery Word Reader”
as a center activity.
DAY THREE
Estimated time needed
40 minutes
Key
T=Teacher alone
T+S=Teacher & students
S+S=Student & student
S=Student alone
Step-by-Step Directions
Tips for Teacher Language & Student Engagement CCSS
STEP 3.1
T
Teacher Resource: The Timeline Template (pp.46-57)
Student Resource: Key Detail Cards for the Timeline (pp.58-68)
STEP 3.2
T
S+S
S+S
T+S Call on student pairs to share their thinking with the class,
calling attention to the two root words in timeline.
STEP 3.3
T+S
Teacher Resource: The Timeline Template (pp.46-57)
Student Resource: Key Detail Cards for the Timeline (pp.58-68)
Is your key idea first, next, last? Listen as I give each group their
key idea. Think about where the detail belongs on our timeline.
Note:
Determine whether students need additional support and consider
one or more of the following scaffolds:
• Reread the story after distributing the Key Detail Cards and
ask students to listen for their detail to determine where it
fits.
• Place all the cards in a row in the correct sequence and read
them aloud in order. Shuffle them and hand the cards out in
random order, rereading each as you hand it out.
• Use book illustrations as prompts to cue correct sequence of
key details.
STEP 3.4
T
S+S
CI RI.1.2/RI.1.3 Comprehension Checklist (p.37)
CI Teacher Resource: The Timeline Template (pp.46-57)
CI Student Resource: Key Detail Cards for the Timeline (pp.58-68)
Unroll and
display the
Timeline
Template.
Point and read the title and author in the left boxes and explain RI.1.1
they are not key details. RI.1.2
RI.1.3
Then ask:
Who thinks they have the card that tells what happened first?
Continue this routine (i.e., place the card, answer the three
questions) as each subsequent detail is identified) until the
timeline is complete.
Telling how the key detail helps describe the key idea may also
require prompting and support.
STEP 3.5
S+S
CI RI.1.7/RI.1.4 Illustration and Vocabulary Checklist (p.38)
CI Drawing to describe the key details in the timeline card and oral
response
CI Sample Student Work Products #1-2 (pp.69-70)
Now, you’re going to turn over your second card and work RI.1.1
together to create your own illustration to help explain the words RI.1.7
on your card.
Members of each timeline team will need to talk and agree on the
best way to illustrate their key detail so that their drawing matches
the words on their timeline card.
Your illustration does not have to be the same as the one that
Jeanette Winter drew.
DAY FOUR
Estimated time needed
30 minutes
Step-by-Step Directions
Tips for Teacher Language & Student Engagement CCSS
STEP 4.1
T+S
This activity may happen in a whole group or it may take place in a RI.1.2
small instructional reading group. RI.1.4
STEP 4.2
T+S
CI W.1.2 Writing Checklist (p.39)
CI L.1.1/L.1.2 Knowledge of Language and Conventions Student
Checklist (p.40)
CI Student Resource: How Wangari Made Her Home a Better Place
(p.45)
CI Written Response
CI Sample Student Work Products #3-4 (pp.71-72)
Sample Student Work Product #X (p.)
Invite students to write independently to answer the RI.1.1
Essential Question. W.1.2
Distribute Student
Resource: How Wangari
Made Her Home a Better
Place (p.45).
Point out that you have provided a topic sentence for them.
Explain that students will give details from the text to support that
topic sentence and then will write a closing statement at the end.
RI.1.2.2
Retells a key
detail from the
text.
Student Name Yes No Comments
Standard Evidence
RI.1.4 Ask and answer questions to help Demonstrates the ability to ask or
determine or clarify the meaning of words answer questions to determine the
and phrases in a text. meaning of or clarify the meaning of
words and phrases in a text. (1)
RI.1.2 RI.1.3.3
Describes the
Retells a connection between
key detail two pieces of
in the text. information in a
text.
Student Name Yes No Yes No Comments
Standard Evidence
RI.1.7 Use the Demonstrates use of the illustrations and details in a
illustrations and details in a text to describe the key ideas in the text. (1)
text to describe its key
ideas.
RI.1.4 Ask and answer Demonstrates the ability to ask or answer questions
questions to help to determine the meaning of or clarify the meaning
determine or clarify the of words and phrases in a text. (1)
meaning of words and
phrases in a text.
RI.1.7 RI.1.4
Demonstrates Demonstrates the
use of the ability to
illustrations and determine the
details in a text meaning of words
to describe the and phrases in a
key ideas in the text.
text.
Student Name Yes No Yes No Comments
W.1.2.2 W.1.2.3
Includes facts Provides a
about the topic. sense of closure.
Student Name Yes No Yes No Comments
Standards
L.K.1 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and
usage when writing or speaking.
L.K.2 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization,
punctuation, and spelling when writing.
Date:
CCSS Student Name: Yes No
L.1.1.A Prints uppercase and lowercase letters.
L.1.1.B Uses common, proper, and possessive nouns correctly.
Uses singular and plural nouns with matching verbs (e.g., I hop,
L.1.1.C
he hops).
Uses personal, possessive, and indefinite pronouns (e.g., I, me,
L.1.1.D
my; they, them, their, anyone, everything).
Uses verbs to convey a sense of past, present, and future (e.g.,
L.1.1.E Yesterday I walked home; Today I walk home; Tomorrow I will
walk home).
L.1.1.F Uses frequently occurring adjectives.
Uses frequently occurring conjunctions (e.g., and, but, or, so,
L.1.1.G
because).
L.1.1.H Uses determiners (e.g., articles, demonstratives).
Uses frequently occurring prepositions (e.g., during, beyond,
L.1.1.I
toward).
Produces and expands complete simple and compound
L.1.1.J declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory sentences
in response to prompts.
L.1.2.A Capitalizes dates and names of people.
L.1.2.B Uses end punctuation for sentences.
L.1.2.C Uses commas in dates and to separate single words in a series.
Uses conventional spelling for words with common spelling
L.1.2.D
patterns and for frequently occurring irregular words.
Spells untaught words phonetically, drawing on phonemic
L.1.2.E
awareness and spelling conventions.
Insert ✓ in the appropriate box.
Prepare individual student copies of this checklist.
If/Then Chart
If… Then…
RI.1.2 • Provide prompting by showing the relevant
students struggle to pages from the book for students to recall key
retell key details details.
• Practice with student-created language
experience informational texts.
• Meet with the student(s) in a small group to
implement similar lessons over time.
• Identify key details and prompt students to
understand why they are essential to the text.
• Provide students with a familiar topic and ask
them to list key details relevant to that topic.
RI.1.3 • List the facts on sentence strips and have
students struggle to students pair these and explain their thinking.
make connections • Give students key prompts to help them focus
between two pieces on the key ideas to consider when making
of information in a connections.
text • Have students study the illustrations to help
them draw connections between two ideas or
pieces of information.
• Have students co-create connection charts.
The teacher guides in the development of
categories, and students work in teams or
individually to fill out the chart.
RI.1.4
• Read additional books on the same topic and
students are not highlight reoccurring vocabulary on the topic.
(accurately) using • Model having a conversation with a student in
vocabulary when front of the larger group; ask the other
responding orally and students to show a Thumbs Up when they
in writing to the text hear you or your student partner use a word
from a targeted word list.
If… Then…
RI.1.7 is happening?” and “What detail is in the
Continued photograph that makes you think so?” This
might need to be modeled in whole-group
first.
• Provide opportunities for students to illustrate
their own writing.
• Partner students in pairs to analyze
illustrations relative to their key details.
W.1.2 • During dictation, engage the student in orally
student writing does composing what he or she will write; follow by
not reveal sharing the pen (both teacher and student
understanding of write) to sketch, label, and/or draw.
information learned • Continue modeling sketching, labeling, and
about the topic writing during whole-group and small-group
instruction.
The illustrations
This game moves briskly and should take 5 minutes or less to complete
The “Key Words” class list is already in the order in which the words were
entered during the read-alouds.
• Determine whether students need to hear the text read through again.
• Distribute one piece of blank paper or a small white board to each group.
• The teacher (or Student Mystery Reader) uses oral cloze to read aloud a
definition.
• Each group writes the number of the word that best matches the
definition.
• The Mystery Reader calls on groups to share the word they selected.
• The game can be played again on another day using the same words.
* Note: The definitions used for this game are aligned to the context of the text.
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Wangari’s Trees of
Peace:
A True Story from
Africa
Written and
Illustrated by
Jeanette Winter
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Young Wangari’s
home has an
umbrella of green
trees.
Young Wangari’s
home has an
umbrella of green
trees.
Wangari goes
to school in
America.
Wangari goes
to school in
America.
Wangari returns
to a barren land.
Wangari returns
to a barren land.
Wangari plants
seedlings in her
own backyard.
Wangari plants
seedlings in her
own backyard.
Wangari starts a
farm for baby
trees—a nursery.
Wangari starts a
farm for baby
trees—a nursery.
Wangari convinces
village women to
help her.
Wangari convinces
village women to
help her.
An army of women
plants trees in
Wangari’s village.
An army of women
plants trees in
Wangari’s village.
Wangari stands
tall as an oak to
protect the trees.
Wangari stands
tall as an oak to
protect the trees.
The umbrella of
green trees
returns to Africa.
The umbrella of
green trees
returns to Africa.
Jeanette Winter
writes a true story
about Wangari.
Jeanette Winter
writes a true story
about Wangari.
Scoring Rationale:
The student team collaborated to accurately use an illustration to show the key
detail related to the phrase umbrella of green trees. Included in their drawing
are green grass, tall green trees close together forming an umbrella-like visual,
women standing straight up carrying firewood (lower left-hand corner of
illustration), small houses (as opposed to tall buildings), and a bright happy-
looking sun.
Transcription:
Wangari made her home a
better place by planting
trees. Wangari went to jail it
wasn’t Wangari fault. It was
the government fault.
Wangari told the women to
plant more trees. Then
when she got out her home
was better by the trees.
Scoring Rationale:
The student included facts about the topic (“…planting trees…” and “…told
the women to plant more trees…”) and ended with a sense of closure
(“…her home was better by the trees…”).
Transcription:
She put seedlings of
trees into the ground
for new tree to grow
in the earth. And
more and more trees
growed in the earth’s
soil and ground.
Scoring Rationale:
The student included facts about the topic (“…put seedlings of trees into
the ground…” and “…more and more trees growed…”) but did not provide a
sense of closure.
Retrospective Journal
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