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Rewriting a Business Letter

Class:
Academic Writing

Teacher:
Mrs. Fernandez

Section:
41

Week 7

Presented by:
✔ Pamela Meraz Castillo – 41811139
✔ Allison Rodriguez – 41511089

Date:
La Ceiba, Atlántida
September 2nd, 2021
September 1st, 2021
Fine Foods Ltd.
10 Bridge Street
London
SW10 5TG

Dear Mr. Roger Jones:

I am writing regarding your letter of September 1st, based on the stock control
system offered by your company. I would like to inform you that it meets our
requirements. However, there are certain doubts that I would like to clarify before
making the purchase.
In the first place, referring to what you mentioned, about the system being updated,
it would be very helpful if you specified what would happen if it was updated
again and in the same way, clarify if we could qualify for a discount.

In the second place, in relation to what you mentioned about the time it takes for
the system to install, which is three weeks, I would appreciate, if you could
confirm if there is a possibility that it can be done in a shorter period.

I will thank you in advance for taking this into consideration. I look forward to
your correspondence regarding this matter.

Best regards.
Janet Brown