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ENGL 1302-101
3 December 2022
Controlling idea:
Taylor Swift cannot be regarded as a feminist vocal artist because she has cultivated a brand image over
the course of her career that reinforces and promotes sexist stereotypes about women.
Sample Paragraph:
[1] In the song “You Belong with Me,” Swift portrays women as weak and fragile, which reinforces sexist
stereotypes such as those that insist that a woman requires a man’s attentions to be considered a valuable person.
[2] To set the scene, Swift sings from the first-person perspective of a girl who is secretly in love with her male
friend, who is himself dating another girl. [3] The lyrics narrate the singer’s frustration, detailing moments of
intimacy between her and her friend that serve to fuel her love for him and cause her to pine for his love in return.
[4] At one point she laments that while her friend’s stylish and popular girlfriend receives all of his misdirected
affection, she sits at the periphery of his attentions, all but forgotten despite their closeness:
[5] But she wears short skirts, I wear T-shirts
She’s Cheer Captain and I’m on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you’re looking for has been here the whole time. (ll. 7-10)
[6] These lines emphasize the singer’s vulnerable position on the outskirts of the student community. [7] She is
represented as sitting in the bleachers, which indicates her unimportant status. [8] Her friend, the one who is
supposed to attend to her emotional needs and act as a buffer against the apparent shame of anonymity, neglects
her for his girlfriend. [9] Reference to the girlfriend’s “short skirts” emphasizes her inappropriate and attention-
seeking behavior through sexy dress, which highlights the contrast with the singer’s modest dress (“T-shirts”) and
suggests the singer’s superior morality and, thus, personal value. [10] The lines also reference the singer’s
passivity, her inability to take action to fulfill her desires. [11] The singer can only hope, by “dreaming,” that her
friend will suddenly realize his love for her (“what you’re looking for”). [12] Though it creates frustration for her,
the singer’s passivity is represented as noble. [13] Following the logic of the song, it can be presumed that once the
friend realizes his love for the singer, he will rescue them both from the misery of true love separated and protect
her through the vigilance of his constant loving attention. [14] Ultimately, in representing the girl as admirably
faithful to her secret love (both the state and the boy), the lyrics of this song reproduce and reaffirm notions that a
worthy (i.e. desirable) woman is passive and fragile and in need of the undivided attentions and protection of a
male suitor.
Practice identifying each part of the following paragraph. Give the number of the sentence(s) that matches the
category.
Topic Sentence
Conclusion Sentence
Evidence
Evidence Analysis
Evidence Introduction
Quotation Paraphrase