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In this day and age, more and more public attention has been placed on developing internet access speed with a huge

amount of local authorities’ money. There are several factors leading to improve the internet and I agree that it is not

the most suitable use of government money.

There are several reasons why the government spends a large amount of money in order to enhance the quality of

technology. The main reason for this issue is that the internet is a tool for people to entertain and study. In fact, both

adults and students can expand their knowledge and relieve stress through watching useful videos on the internet

quickly. Pupils can self-study the helpful knowledge online in order not to waste money having extra classes. Adults can

have referred to good ideas related to their jobs with modern technology to accomplish their assignments perfectly.

Take myself as an example, 2 years ago, I often researched the knowledge in the textbooks through the internet before

going to class at school; therefore, I had been praised by my teachers for my improvement in my studies. Another

important reason contributing to this phenomenon is that citizens can keep in touch with others. Specifically, they can

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stay in touch with people living far away from home by using social apps on the internet. Take my sister as an example,

she has a best friend who lives far from home, she and her best friend have kept in touch for 6 years through social apps

such as zalo or facebook.

I strongly believe that it is not the most appropriate use of government money. Firstly, modern technology is now

enough to meet human needs. This is because people can utilize the internet with high speed and they can do

everything they want with high precision and fast speed. Take my father as an example, due to the covid 19 pandemic

about 1 year ago, my father had to hold important meetings online on electronic devices and he was unlikely to wait a

minute because the speed of the internet was extremely fast. Secondly, there is another problem to deal with. To be

more specific, we need to have a huge amount of government money to purchase good services and construct hospitals

in order to treat diseases. Take my village as an example, there are many people with covid 19 outside community in my

village, we need local authorities’ money to build isolation places and hospitals to be able to treat covid 19 and improve

human health.

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In conclusion, there are two main factors for government to improve internet access, and I trust this is not the most

optimal way to spend money.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

● Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
○ Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why is it happening
■ Main idea 1: The Internet enables students to enhance their
general understanding of nearly all subjects (broaden their
horizons) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động
từ "enable" tiếng anh
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■ Supporting idea: School age children can access

educational videos on YouTube, read online articles and
use interactive learning platforms.
■ Example:
■ Main idea: 2 The Internet gives workers great access to
various sources of knowledge so that they can know how to
solve difficulties in their work (HOẶC: Workers can gain
access to an enormous volume of information which can
assist them in solving work-related problems and increase
their work productivity. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn
Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
■ Supporting idea:
■ Example: By using search engines such as Google and
Yahoo, they can also find any data on almost any
subject they are looking for.
○ Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 do you think it is the most appropriate
use of government money? - upgrading internet access is not
the best way to allocate government money >> IELTS TUTOR
hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "appropriate" tiếng anh

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■ Main idea 1: The broadband connection in most countries

today is fast enough to satisfy the basic demands of the
public.
■ Supporting idea: An improvement in the quality of the
Internet supply can be deemed not obligatory and
urgent.
■ Example: For example, in Vietnam, hardly do individuals
have to wait a long time for a web page to load
■ Main idea 2: There are several other fields which are being
placed under strain and require the capital disbursement to
function (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are
some other areas that authorities could invest in as a pre-
requisite complement before supplying a widespread
network)
■ Supporting idea: Constructing schools and deploying
qualified teachers to areas that are used to the absence
of the Internet and are unaware of the benefits it might
offer could be more promising >> IELTS TUTOR
hướng dẫn Cách dùng "across" tiếng anh
■ Example:
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