Admission essay

My name is Brock Tone, I am seventeen years old and I am happy to apply for a chance at the

Oklahoma University studying a course in for Political Science campaign. The letter is serves as

a formal request for my admission to your prestigious university. I have checked around several

colleges that offer training in the same course and chose Oklahoma University because it is

known for its commitment in producing outstanding graduants into the field of employment.

I have a great interaest in youth participation in policy formulation and I believe that undergoing

the course will set the right trajectory for my career in politics. I have worked in the previous

John McCain campaign and represented the youth in several regional functions. As such, I

believe the university has an exceptional breeding ground for me to flourish.

I am very active in co-curricular activities having been a dependable member in interclass

debates. I am not only a football fan but a player having represented my school to the national

level. It is my wish to nurture these talents as I pursue my undergraduate education. I believe that

The University of Oklahoma offers the ambience and a conducive environment for me to

flourish. I have a great interaest in youth participation in policy formulation and I believe that

undergoing the course will set the right trajectory for my career in politics. I have worked in the

previous John McCain campaign and represented the youth in several regional functions. As

such, I believe the university has an exceptional breeding ground for me to flourish.

I am not only a football fan but a player having represented my school to the national level. It is

my wish to nurture these talents as I pursue my undergraduate education. I believe that The

University of Oklahoma offers the ambience and a conducive environment for me to flourish. I

have a great interaest in youth participation in policy formulation and I believe that undergoing
the course will set the right trajectory for my career in politics. I have worked in the previous

John McCain campaign and represented the youth in several regional functions. As such, I

believe the university has an exceptional breeding ground for me to flourish.

On completion, I will be able to fight for legislation on issues affecting the youth such as

poverty, barriers in accessing education, numerous practices of discrimination and partial

employment projections and prospects. I believe these issues have been persistent with the

advent of technology that requires for an expert look to save our youth. My wish is to see more

youth hold positions that will help drive their wishes and participate fully in policy formulation.

I am not only a football fan but a player having represented my school to the national level. It is

my wish to nurture these talents as I pursue my undergraduate education. I believe that The

University of Oklahoma offers the ambience and a conducive environment for me to flourish. I

have a great interaest in youth participation in policy formulation and I believe that undergoing

the course will set the right trajectory for my career in politics. I have worked in the previous

John McCain campaign and represented the youth in several regional functions. As such, I

believe the university has an exceptional breeding ground for me to flourish.