12/03/2020

Topic 1: Nowadays, young people admire media and sports stars though they often
do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people are of the opinion that young people, nowadays, are having great admiration
for media and sports celebrities although they are not perfect role models to follow. In my
opinion, this problem could have both positive and negative consequences in equal
measure.
On the one hand, youngsters’ adoration towards celebrities can bring several positive
effects to on themselves. The talents and achievements of stars involved in media and
sports could inspire young people to develop their potential abilities. For example,
Cristiano Ronaldo, a world-class midfielder central forward, is a role model of diligence
and determination for all the efforts he has exerted in football training. Many adolescents
who are Ronaldo’s fans have trained themselves hard to achieve extraordinary results in
their lives and engaged in regular exercises such as working out regularly at the gym or
taking up sports. In this way, the young may still benefit from sports stars’ valuable life
lessons. Besides, some public figures have desirable influences on the youth by their
admirable actsion of kindness such as helping poor people and orphanage
childrenorphans, struggling to controvert social evils. In recent years, protecting women’s
right in UK has been successful and a person representing for “ The United Nations
Entity for gender equality and the empowerment of women” is Emma Waston, who is an
English actress known for her role as Hermione Granger in the Harry Potter series. She is
not only a renowned actress but also a bright example for young generations.
On the second hand,other hand, idolizing entertainers and sportsmen may result in
adverse effects. No sooner do several singers wear sex-arousing costumes on the stage to
attract audiences’ attention than the youth tend to have a misunderstanding that in order
to become attractive and celebrated, scandals can be helpful. Adolescents, therefore, have
fashionable trend which is not suitable with their ages. They deliberately change styles
and show a propensity for copying what their idols say and show on TV, even though
those actions go against the cultural values of a standard society.
In conclusion, the adoration which youngsters dedicate to famous celebrities or athletes
have both strengths and weaknesses. I think negative or positive influences of this
depends on the ways of young people’s approach.
 Writing Marking Sheet
Task Response Coherence & Lexical Grammatical
Cohesion Resource Range &
Accuracy

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Từ vự ng phù 
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Ngữ phá p phù
hợ p và liên kết hợ p hợ p
 nhìn chung bà i phù hợ p
viết tương đố i
well-developed
 Keep up your good work! Bài này

7.0 sẽ tốt nếu em hoàn thành nó trong

đúng 40 phút.

Topic 2: Some people think that the media should not report details of crimes to the
public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that detailed reports about crimes should be strictly
controlled. I totally agree with this idea because of several reasons.
Firstly, the news outlets should pay more attention to the affairs themselves only report
the criminal activities as a piece of news, rather than
the details of the crimes. This information can make a misleading statement to the
children and adolescents who are curious about the process of committing crimes and are
likely to copy the criminal actions blindly. If the children read or watch too much
criminal report which describes the crimes in detail, it can be seem deemed/seen as
normal ways of behaving and they can use it to handle problems in the future. In the other
words, detailed description of illegal acts can generate individuals’ potential desire to
commit a crime, thus induce many social problems.
Secondly, the prominent of crime reports may exert negative impacts on the society.
Petty crimes such as shoplifting and political criminals deserve a second chance as their
actions are not considered to be damaging to the life of other people. If we punish them
too hard, it will raise some kind of hatred and resentment in them during the reintegration
into the society. Besides, Detailed description of criminals’ identity (names, addresses
etc.) may destroy the likelihood of criminals re-integrating into the society, and also
obliterate their families too. these offenders may also have children who are still in
school at a very young age. There is highly probable that these kids will be discriminated
from other classmates, some of them might fail to build rapports with their peers or even
drop out of schools early.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that governments should impose prohibition on
reporting details of crimes since it brings more disadvantages than advantages.

Writing Marking Sheet

Task Response Coherence & Lexical Grammatical
Cohesion Resource Range &
Accuracy

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