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    The document outlines the benefits of students working while studying in college. It discusses four main reasons: 1) It can help students avoid debt by having income to pay expenses and graduate with minimal financial obligations. 2) Students gain valuable job experience that employers find desirable. 3) It improves time management skills which are important for adjusting to the real world after college. 4) Working can help improve students' grades by allowing them to better understand and retain what they've learned. The document argues that working part-time during college can both financially support students and provide them with beneficial experiences.

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    The document outlines the benefits of students working while studying in college. It discusses four main reasons: 1) It can help students avoid debt by having income to pay expenses and graduate with minimal financial obligations. 2) Students gain valuable job experience that employers find desirable. 3) It improves time management skills which are important for adjusting to the real world after college. 4) Working can help improve students' grades by allowing them to better understand and retain what they've learned. The document argues that working part-time during college can both financially support students and provide them with beneficial experiences.

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    EVALUATIVE OUTLINE FR

    Uploaded by

    Faris Naqiuddin
    The document outlines the benefits of students working while studying in college. It discusses four main reasons: 1) It can help students avoid debt by having income to pay expenses and graduate with minimal financial obligations. 2) Students gain valuable job experience that employers find desirable. 3) It improves time management skills which are important for adjusting to the real world after college. 4) Working can help improve students' grades by allowing them to better understand and retain what they've learned. The document argues that working part-time during college can both financially support students and provide them with beneficial experiences.

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    NAME 1: MUHAMMAD FARIS

    NAQIUDDIN BIN JUSLI


    ELC231-EVALUATIVE COMMENTARY (350-400 WORDS)
    NAME 2: MUHAMMAD IRSYAD BIN
    OUTLINE FAUZI

    Intro Overview of the  Overview - Why students need to start working while
    Article, studying in college.

    Author’s Tone,
     Authors’s tone - The author’s tone is objective
    Thesis Statement (3
    Main Ideas)

     Thesis Statement - Here are a couple of reasons why


    you ought to consider working and studying at the
    same time.

    2nd Para. 1st Main Idea  1st Main Idea - It can help students avoid debt

    Supporting Detail 1
     Supporting detail 1 - it is easier for a student to have
    Supporting Detail 2 money to spend and avoid borrowing.

     Supporting detail 2 - With work, you are likely to


    graduate with minimal financial obligations

    3rd Para. 2nd Main Idea  2nd Main Idea - Learners get valuable job experience

    Supporting Detail 1
     Supporting detail 1 - they want a person who will start
    Supporting Detail 2 generating some income immediately after they are
    hired

     Supporting detail 2 - you can find all the possible jobs


    that will help you get into the career of your dreams.

    4th Para. 3rd Main Idea  3rd Main Idea - Earn better time management skills

    Supporting Detail 1
     Supporting detail 1 - You will understand which
    Supporting Detail 2 activities are essential and you will have a much easier
    time adjusting to the real world outside your college.

     Supporting detail 2 -.When you can manage your


    time, it means that you will employ careful planning
    each week to minimize time wastage
    5th Para 4th Main Idea  4th Main Idea - Helps improve students grades

    Supporting Detail 1
     Supporting detail 1 - Working can go a long way in
    Supporting Detail 2 helping with mind mapping and allowing them to
    understand what they have learnt each day.

     Supporting detail 2 - most people learn better through


    practice

    6th Para Write Personal  Personal opinion – Agree


    Opinion/View  Support student financially
    (agree/disagree),  Get valuable experience
    Justify your opinion
    (reasons)

    Conclusion Restate Personal  Avoid students from financial problem


    Opinion/View,  Gets valuable experience
     Lessens burden of parents
    Final comments

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