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    This document is a revision action form for an undergraduate research paper on the development and consumer acceptability of oyster mushroom skinless longganisa. It lists the requested revisions from the panelists for each chapter, including revising the title to remove reference to longganisa, revising the introduction, objectives, scope and delimitation to add nutritional analysis, and revising the related literature review to add results. The researchers and adviser have signed to confirm the revisions were made.

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    This document is a revision action form for an undergraduate research paper on the development and consumer acceptability of oyster mushroom skinless longganisa. It lists the requested revisions from the panelists for each chapter, including revising the title to remove reference to longganisa, revising the introduction, objectives, scope and delimitation to add nutritional analysis, and revising the related literature review to add results. The researchers and adviser have signed to confirm the revisions were made.

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    This document is a revision action form for an undergraduate research paper on the development and consumer acceptability of oyster mushroom skinless longganisa. It lists the requested revisions from the panelists for each chapter, including revising the title to remove reference to longganisa, revising the introduction, objectives, scope and delimitation to add nutritional analysis, and revising the related literature review to add results. The researchers and adviser have signed to confirm the revisions were made.

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    BU POLANGUI UNDERGRADUATE RESEARCH

    ______ Semester, SY _____________


    REVISION ACTION FORM
    Title of the Research/ Undergraduate Thesis Development and Consumer Acceptability of Oyster Mushroom
    (Pleurotus Ostreatus) Skinless Longganisa
    Researcher(s)/ Proponent(s) Toledo, Ma. Anna Josiela L.
    Sario, Stephanie Grace S.
    Luces, Lester M.
    Program/Year/Block Bachelor of Technology and Livelihood Education Major in Home Economics
    Final Oral Defense Date and Venue:
    Panelists/Evaluators: Panel Chairperson: Ma. Teresa I. Magdasoc, MaEngEd
    Member: Dexter Sarte
    Member: Ma. Cristina Abano
    Adviser (s): Beverly Miraflor
    Date of Revision March 09, 2023

    CHAPTERS Reviewer’s Remarks, Comments, or Revisions Made/ Actions Para #, Sentence #, Remarks
    Suggestions Taken Page # (Panel)

    Tittle Revise the Tittle and remove the The Tittle was revised Front Page
    oyster mushroom longganisa

    Chapter 1  Revise the Introduction The introduction was Page 1-3


     Revise the Objectives revised
    The objectives was revised Page 4
     Revised the Scope and The Scope and Delimitation Page 5

    Page 1 of 2
    Delimitation and add the we added the nutritional
    nutritional analysis analysis of oyster
    mushroom
     Add mushroom grower and The significance of the
    food technology in the study was revised Page 6-7
    significance of the study
    Chapter 2 The review of related
     Revised the related literature literature and studies was Page 7-14
    and related studies add the revised and added the
    results results
     Revise the Theoretical The Theoretical Paradigm Page 15-16
    Paradigm was revised
    The Conceptual Paradigm Page 17-18
     Revise the Conceptual
    Paradigm was revised

    Chapter 3

    Page 2 of 2
    Prepared by:

    TOLEDO, MA. ANNA JOSIELA L.


    Researcher/s (signature over printed name)

    SARIO, STEPHANIE GRACE S.


    Researcher/s (signature over printed name)

    LUCES, LESTER M.
    Researcher/s (signature over printed name)

    Attested by:

    BEVERLY MIRAFLOR_
    Adviser (signature over printed name)

    Page 3 of 2

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