Intermediate Super Intensive 02 - Comments (Writing 1st Draft)

1. Maria Fernanda Alayo

No corrections to make.

2. Sayra Arenas

No corrections to make.

3. Erick Campos

Erick, to write the email, you have to use the ideas fom the Brainstorming. They are related to one

another. Minimum 350 words.

4. Fiorella Carrera

Ok, but next time give more details in both paragraphs.

5. Carla Chang

Give complete ideas in the Brainstorming. In the second part, try to give more information.

6. Daniela Flores

OK, but give complete ideas in the Brainstorming and in the second part of the writing, give more

information. Minimum 350 words.

7. Luis Gonzalez

Good Eduardo. Next time, try to give more information.

8. Mirelly Guevara

No corrections to make.
9. Carlos Gutierrez

Ok, but the Brainstorming is also part of the Writing. They are both related to each other. In the

Brainstorming, you have to write a list of 10 ideas (Complete sentences) about the topic.

10. Gianella Luján

Ok. No corrections to make.

11. Pierre Pasapera

All the ideas from the Brainstorming have to be about the same topic (Holy Week)

In the Second Part of the Writing , try to give more information.

12. Hardy Purizaca

The Brainstorming is also Part of the Writing. There, you have to write 10 complete ideas about the topic

(A Special Celebration in your country). Do it, please, and in the Second Part try to give more

information.

13. María Jose Requejo

Good. No corrections to make.

14. Ivette Reyes

No corrections to make

15. Akyra Rodriguez

Ok. No corrections to make.

16. Lorena Rueda

Ok, but try to give more information in the Second Part of the Writing.

17. Anderson Ruiz

No corrections to make.
18. Diego Tello

The ideas in the Brainstorming (10 ideas) have to be the same in the Second Part of the Writing.

They are both related to each other.

19. Gerson Zulueta

Ok, but try to give more details in the Second Part of the Writing.

Los estudiantes cuyo comentario es “No corrections to make”, escriben la misma información del

Writing enviado. Los demás si hay alguna corrección que hacer lo realizan siguiendo las

indicaciones y haciendo las correcciones necesarias.