Professional Documents
Culture Documents
The introduction
Sentence 1: Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
Sentence 2: Answer the question
The body
The first paragraph:
- Sentence 1: The topic sentence (advantages or disadvantages)
- Sentence 2-5/6: 2 advantages or disadvantages
The second paragraph:
- Sentence 1: The topic sentence (advantages or disadvantages)
- Sentence 2-5/6: 2 advantages or disadvantages
The conclusion
The restatement: Restate your answer
Sample:
Taking a gap year before attending college has recently gained enormous
popularity amongst high school graduates. My essay below will analyze both the
benefits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon.
From an opposite angle, the disadvantages of a gap year before college are
varied. Initially, compared to the students having a year off, those who go straight
to university after high school are more likely to have a permanent job early. They
finish their academic studies one year in advance, hence better opportunities to get
a job with stable incomes. More importantly, high school seniors might lose their
studying habits as well as discipline. In other words, one year spent on travelling or
working can demotivate (mất tinh thần ) them from following tertiary education.
(đại học, cao đẳng)
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Topic 2: Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful
educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an
adverse effect on the people who play them.
In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Outlines:
Pros:
-entertainment
The more amount of studying, working stress, the higher demand for
relaxation
-> the increasing rate of people who play games
- enhance logical thinking, problems solving skills
Use brain to complete some tasks in quiz games
*Cons:
- highly additive
Spending too much time on games leads to their negligence on some
important acticities, daily routines ( studying, working)
Crime cases increase since teenagers get involved in robbery, murder to
enrich their current budget
Model answer
There have been endless arguments over the possible impact of video games upon
players. Much as the dispute in favor of the significance of the advantages of those
games is legitimate, personally I believe they are still outweighed by the
disadvantages.
On the one hand, some certain benefits of video games are undeniable. Firstly,
they are functioning as a source of harmless entertainment. In modern time, daily
performances always go along with a huge amount of stress from studying and
working, hence the higher demand for relaxation. As a matter of fact, the world is
seeing an increasing number of not only youngsters but also adults who play video
games to alleviate (xoa dịu) the intensity ( cường độ) of their academic studies or
hard-working occupations. Secondly, it is also proved that playing games can
enhance logical thinking and problems solving skills since players are forced to use
their brain to complete the game.
On the other hand, I would argue that those video games present more
disadvantages. Video games are highly addictive, and that players are constantly
given more stages in these games leads to their negligence on other important
activities since the temptation of clearing those stages is sometimes irresistible. If
time is spent excessively on games, players’ daily routine, studying or working for
instance, will suffer. More dangerously, many crime cases have been reported
recently with the motive of getting money to play video games. Especially young
people are more likely to get involved in robbery or even murder as their addiction
to games cannot be sufficed by their current budget.
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TOPIC 1: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning
a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. What are
the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Outline:
Pros:
- Children are so young that picking up a new language is effortless:
Surveys, 4-9ages is a golden time for a person to adopt a new language
as it is the period to have the best listening skill,… + imitate fast
- Studying language early facilitates to have a better job opportunity
Nowadays, language is as important as science and technology ->
acquiring some language skills have a lot of benefits
Cons:
- Chidren are too young to balance between studying language and other
main subjects
Not focusing on their mother tongue which is more needy and important -
> time waste
Get confused to study two languages at the same time -> have a negative
effect on their development. ( ex: a bilingual child tend to talk more slowly
than a monolingual one)
Answer
Due to the development of communication systems, learning an international
language at an early age has been a controversial global issue. Following that, it is
commonly acknowledged that primary schools are the most appropriate places for
teenagers to adopt the second language rather than the secondary ones. From my
personal perspective, in this essay, I will analyze both the benefits and
drawbacks of that phenomenon.
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TOPIC 2: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning
a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the
advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Outline:
Cons:
- Chidren are too young to balance between studying language and other
subjects
Get confused between two language-> time waste
- Not understand the full meaning of aspects of the language
have a detrimental effect on their mind development.
* Pros:
- Children are so young that picking up a new language is effortless:
Surveys, 4-9ages is a golden time for a person to adopt a new language
as it is the period to have the best listening skill,… + imitate fast
- Studying language early facilitates to have a better future
Nowadays, language is as important as science and technology ->
acquiring some language skills have a lot of benefits
Answer
These days, the development of communication systems has recently uplifted
controversial arguments whether primary schools are better places to learn an
international language than the secondary ones. From my personal view, I believe
that this topic has far more benefits for several following reasons.