Brainstorm:

Other things:

children will be easily to get access to public websites or social networking sites such as Facebook or
Instagram -> Many videos, songs or even short films shown on these sites and children may watch and
imitate the characters.

News reports shown on television keep children updated with latest information around the world.

Friends -> Share the same personalities, interest and concept -> children’s thoughts or behaviors are
much likely to be affected by their fellows -> This could be positive behaviour but it could also be
negative, such as smoking or taking drugs.

Friendship teaches them how to be supportive and now maintain trust. Moreover, another benefit
music is that it keeps children calm and focused on their studies.

Family:

Because children spend a huge amount of time being with their children at home so it is easy for them
to see the way that their parents solve problems and copy them

They develop their confidence, socialisation skills, morals, values and views on life through their
interaction with parents.

Moreover, a child learns family traditions and religious rituals by observing their elders -> For example,
during my childhood -> always followed the footsteps of parents and grand parents in numerous ways
such as white putting on particular clothes according to occasions as well as respectfully treating my
guests.

ESSAY

Opinions are divided on whether children’s growth are influenced most by everyday things such as
televison, friends and music or by their families. Although the former option can offer certain benefits, I
believe those of the latter are more substantial for children.

It is understandable why some think other things are more important than family because of certain
reasons. One of them is that with technology items like smartphone, televison or laptop, children can be
easily to get access to public websites or social networking sites such as Facebook or Instagram and they
watch many movies, songs or even short films on these sites. Therefore, children may imitate their idols
and influencers. For example, they can some livestreams and then mimic some quotes or behaviors of
influencers into their life. Besides, another significant factor that exercises a great influence on chlid’s
development is friends. Because chlidren spend most of their time at school, they can share the same
personalities, interest and concept with their friends. Consequently, children’s thought and behavior are
much likely to be affected by their fellows. However, this could be positive behaviour but it could also be
negative, such as smoking or taking drugs.

I believe that family is still the most important factor affection to children’s growth. Because children
spend a huge amount of time being with their parents at home so it is easy for them to see the way that
their parents solve problems and copy them, thus, they can improve their confidence, socialisation skills,
morals, values and views on life through their interaction with parents. Moreover, a child learns family
traditions and religious rituals by observing their elders. For example, parents are people who allow
which things and content children can expose to, so they can prevent many toxic and unreliable content
on the internet far away children and protect them safety.

In conclusion, some people claim that other things are more influenced to children’s development, I
believe family, especially parents are still more important than anything to chlidren’s growth.