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    The student received a mark of 2 out of 10 for their TOK exhibition. While they presented three images, the specific objects in each image and their real-world contexts were not clearly identified. There were few links made between the images and the prompt question. The points provided about each image were underdeveloped, especially in the third commentary. Additionally, the student provided an "answer" to the prompt on the first page, when the task did not require an answer, but rather an explanation of how each image connects to and illuminates the prompt.

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    The student received a mark of 2 out of 10 for their TOK exhibition. While they presented three images, the specific objects in each image and their real-world contexts were not clearly identified. There were few links made between the images and the prompt question. The points provided about each image were underdeveloped, especially in the third commentary. Additionally, the student provided an "answer" to the prompt on the first page, when the task did not require an answer, but rather an explanation of how each image connects to and illuminates the prompt.

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    Tok 2023 Exhibition J Comm en

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    The student received a mark of 2 out of 10 for their TOK exhibition. While they presented three images, the specific objects in each image and their real-world contexts were not clearly identified. There were few links made between the images and the prompt question. The points provided about each image were underdeveloped, especially in the third commentary. Additionally, the student provided an "answer" to the prompt on the first page, when the task did not require an answer, but rather an explanation of how each image connects to and illuminates the prompt.

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    Exhibition example J: Examiner’s comments

    TOK exhibition examiner‘s comments


    Mark awarded 2

    Marks available 10

    Example J
    The student presents three images but it is not clear what the specific objects are in each case. The real-world contexts are
    not identified. There are few links to the prompt and the points provided are underdeveloped. In the third commentary
    in particular, the prompt is only vaguely addressed. The student provides an “answer” to the prompt on the first page. It
    should be noted that this task does not require students to provide an answer to the prompt in the same way that they are
    expected to, for example, answer an essay title. For this exhibition task, the focus is on showing how each object connects to
    the prompt. The focus should therefore be on how each object is interesting for helping us think about the prompt/helps to
    illuminate something interesting about the prompt, not about coming to a conclusion.

    Theory of knowledge assessed student work 1

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