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Task 2
Task 2
In this modern day and age, the rate of immigration has been constantly
increasing. There is an argument about whether these emigrant employ-
ees or students have to adapt to the culture of the countries they move
to. In the majority of circumstances, I agree that it is necessary to be
OBEY with a foreign customS, HOWEVER there are exceptions that it is
tough to follow.
Firstly, when interacting with any person, it is vital for individuals to re-
spect the person's personality , race , and cultural background. Okay. It
is polite to accept the diversity of traditions globally and be open-
minded ENOUGH to give everything a try. In addition, honoring a differ-
ent custom can increase your reputation and explore a new environ-
ment. For example, if a Western student studies in Taiwan, tying not to
complain about the taste or smell of stinky tofu will reflect your kindness
and also provide the pupil an unforgettable memory.
Mmmmm…. good for the first half but this paragraph gets lost in the
second half.
Uh-oh… a little off structure. The idea makes sense, but it’s weakly de-
veloped and the middle sentence is quite bad for grammar.
Sometimes your grammar is very good. Sometimes you lose focus and
it starts to become word salad (詞沙拉). Focus!
Actually, I think you’re capable of doing this. I think you could push to
Band 6.5-7 *quite easily*
I will give you another homework. I will give you another Task 1 home-
work as well.