Mikhail Robertson 6/2/2022 (dd/mm/yy)

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Hello, my name is mikhail robertson and I’m here to speak about bullying specifically verbal since that’s
the sub-topic I chose. The reason why I chose this topic is because it’s one of the most common types of
bullying especially in schools and it’s affected me in the past and I’d like to know how I could’ve dealt
with such situations better. I think I’ve achieved this through an article from JSY blog, a video by shuhari
self-defense and a poem by Francis Duggan.