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Put your writing in your My Notes folder in your Student Folder and please send me a message to let

me know if you have done the task.

1. Write an email to your LINC instructor giving feedback on the semester so far. Say
what you have liked and make suggestions for some changes /improvements.

Dear Simon,
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to take a moment to share my feedback
on the semester so far in our LINC class.
Firstly, I'd like to express my appreciation for your dedication and effort in
guiding us through the curriculum. Your clear explanations and engaging
teaching style have greatly enhanced my learning experience. I particularly
enjoyed the interactive activities and group discussions, which have helped me
grasp the material more effectively.
However, I believe there are a few areas where we could make some
improvements. Firstly, I feel that incorporating more real-life scenarios or case
studies related to the topics we're studying would provide valuable context and
make the material more relatable. Additionally, it would be helpful to receive
more timely feedback on assignments to better track my progress and address
any areas needing improvement.
Overall, I'm grateful for the opportunity to be part of this class and I'm looking
forward to the remainder of the semester. Thank you for your dedication to our
learning journey.

Regards,
Nasim

2. One of your colleagues was in charge of organising an annual executive conference,


and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your colleague on
that. Write a letter to this colleague. In your letter, congratulate your colleague for
successfully organising the event, mention what you liked about it the most, say how
much you would like him/her to organise other events as well.

Dear Roya,
I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations
to you on the outstanding success of the annual executive conference. Your
meticulous planning and dedication truly shone through in every aspect of the
event.

What I liked most about the conference was [mention specific aspect or detail]. It
was evident that you put a lot of thought and effort into ensuring a seamless and
enriching experience for all attendees.

Your exceptional organizational skills and attention to detail make you the perfect
candidate to spearhead future events. I would be thrilled to see you take on more
responsibilities in organizing upcoming gatherings.

Once again, congratulations on a job well done!

Regards,

Nasim

3. imagine You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has
asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director
at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the
course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another
cookery course, you'd like the school to offer.

Dear Ms. Black,

I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to take a moment to express my
gratitude for the wonderful cookery course I recently attended at your school.

I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of the course, from the hands-on experience in
the kitchen to the insightful tips and techniques shared by the instructors. The
small class size allowed for personalized attention, which greatly enhanced my
learning experience.

Since completing the course, I've been experimenting more in the kitchen and
trying out new recipes with confidence. The skills I acquired during the course
have truly empowered me to explore the world of cooking further.
I would like to suggest offering a course focused on international cuisine.
Exploring different culinary traditions from around the world would not only
expand our culinary repertoire but also broaden our cultural understanding.

Once again, thank you for providing such a valuable learning experience. I look
forward to the possibility of attending future courses at your esteemed cookery
school.

Regards,

Nasim

4. Your local museum has asked for feedback on your recent visit. Write to the museum.
Tell them what you liked and what you didn't like. Make some suggestions for
improvements. Describe some other exhibits you would like to see.

Dear Drumheller museum,

I recently visited your museum and wanted to share my feedback with you. I
enjoyed the diverse collection and engaging exhibits, particularly [mention
specific exhibits or aspects]. However, I noticed a lack of signage in some areas,
which made it challenging to understand the exhibits fully. Improving signage
and providing more detailed explanations would enhance the visitor experience.
Additionally, optimizing the layout for smoother navigation would be beneficial.

For improvements, consider incorporating more interactive elements and


multimedia presentations to make the exhibits more immersive. I would also like
to suggest adding exhibits on [mention specific topics or themes] to diversify the
collection and appeal to a broader audience.

Thank you for providing such a valuable cultural experience for the community. I
look forward to seeing how the museum evolves in the future.

Regards,

Nasim
5. You have finished a course. (NOT LINC or another English language course) Write a
letter to the course organizer to give your feedback. In your letter include: the details
of the course, what you enjoyed during the course, and any suggestions you would
have.

Dear Dr. Ted,

I hope you are doing well.

I am writing to provide feedback on the contaminated soil remediation course that I


recently completed as a teaching assistant (TA). The course covered different aspects of
environmental assessments for contaminants and their treatment techniques.

I thoroughly enjoyed the teaching method that you used to motivate students to be
more engaged in the class discussion and to share their field experiences if they had.
Your deep understanding and passionate about the subject matter, fascinated me to
attend every session behind my responsibilities as a TA. I particularly appreciated the
hands-on activities and practical exercises you presented in the class, as they allowed
me to apply these concepts in my thesis research.

However, I believe there are a few areas where the course could be improved. Firstly, I
found that the pace of some sessions like EA phase ii and iii was a bit rushed, and it
would be beneficial to allocate more time for in-depth discussions and Q&A sessions.
Additionally, providing a filed trip workshop to visit contaminated sites near or within
Calgary would make the learning process more tangible.

I am grateful for the opportunity to participate in this course and to gain knowledge in
remediation area which is one of the most important fields in environmental
engineering.

Regards,
Nasim

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