EXERCIS

E 8B
MEMBER OF GROUP

1. Tria oktafrianti (17-

117)
2. Indah salsabilla (17-
118)
 EXERCISE 8B

Find and correct the errors in the following essay. (The number in
parentheses at the end of each paragraph indicates the number of errors in
that paragraph.) The essay discusses the following topic

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The primary

reason to get an education is to succeed financially. Support your
response with reasons and examples.
 WE AGREE ABOUT PRIMARY REASON TO GET AN
EDUCATION IS TO SUCCEED
FINANCIALLY

• getting an education will get a good job

getting a good education someone will have a good job because in

education we will get extensive knowledge and can train our skills to
prepare ourselves in the future so that with a good job it will be good
for the income we receive, for example there will be a difference
between someone who only gets education up to elementary school and
someone who gets education to undergraduate, because there will be a
wider choice of employment opportunities for a bachelor and in that
choice there will be jobs that cannot be chosen by someone who is not
getting a good education, such as to become a doctor must get an
education and have to study at the medical campus
• education can improve good communication skills

educated people have good communication, communication is the

basis for a person to work together and work relationships, one's
communication skills will be different at each level of his
education, someone who has good communication, will be easy to
work with others so that it will easier to achieve financial
prosperity
Find 5 errors
 obtaining

at
I am a university student, and l am studying in the university for a number
of reasons. Of course, one of my reasons for going to school, studying
hard, and obtain a university degree is to succeed financially; the more
money I make, it will be etter for me. However, financial success is not my
most importantest reason for going to the university. Instead, I am going to
the university for a much broad reason than that: I believe that a university
education will give me a much rich and better life, not just in a financial
way
broader important

a
Thank you
People who are not educated and become successful are the result of their
hard work that never gives up. They have to start from Zero and know
nothing, different than educated people who have been taught from the
ground up