The educational philosophy statement is evaluated on four criteria: idea development, illustrative examples, quality of writing, and additional comments. For idea development, a proficient statement will use generally sound assumptions and arguments to logically develop the author's views about education. For illustrative examples, a proficient statement will include specific examples from the author's experiences that are relevant to supporting points. For quality of writing, a proficient statement will be clear, well-organized, and free of mechanical errors or issues with usage. An advanced statement provides convincing reasoning and demonstrates a unified theme and voice.
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The educational philosophy statement is evaluated on four criteria: idea development, illustrative examples, quality of writing, and additional comments. For idea development, a proficient statement will use generally sound assumptions and arguments to logically develop the author's views about education. For illustrative examples, a proficient statement will include specific examples from the author's experiences that are relevant to supporting points. For quality of writing, a proficient statement will be clear, well-organized, and free of mechanical errors or issues with usage. An advanced statement provides convincing reasoning and demonstrates a unified theme and voice.
The educational philosophy statement is evaluated on four criteria: idea development, illustrative examples, quality of writing, and additional comments. For idea development, a proficient statement will use generally sound assumptions and arguments to logically develop the author's views about education. For illustrative examples, a proficient statement will include specific examples from the author's experiences that are relevant to supporting points. For quality of writing, a proficient statement will be clear, well-organized, and free of mechanical errors or issues with usage. An advanced statement provides convincing reasoning and demonstrates a unified theme and voice.
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