CÁCH VIẾT OPENING – MỞ BÀI : ĐƠN GIẢN & HIỆU QUẢ

- Quy tắc: 2 câu dành cho band < 6.5 và 3 câu dành cho band 7.0+
 Sentence 1 - background info: viết về thông tin chung mà đề bài đưa ra – chưa cần đưa
ra quan điểm của mình về bài
 Sentence 2 – paraphrasing the topic choosing your position: viết lại đề bài bằng từ ngữ
khác, trả lời câu hỏi và đưa ra quan điểm của mình về vấn đề mà đề bài đề cập đến
Vd : this essay will take a closer look at some reasons and solutions to this issue
 Sentence 3 (high band) – an outline sentence: tóm tắt lại ý chính trong quan điểm của
bạn bằng 1 câu
- EX: THIS IS THE BEST TIME TO LIVE DUE TO THE DEVELOPMENT OF TECHNOLOGY IN
COMMUNICATION AND HEATH. DO U AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT
In the contemporary world, the advances in technology have brought a major
improvement to human’ living standards. This could be seen as a paradigm shift in the
way people communicate and take care of their well-being. This essay will support this
argument by analyzing how convenience smart devices really are and how effective
modern technology could assist medical practitioners in hospital treatment.
 không câu nào thừa + tips: dung cohesion devices: this…
- Mẫu câu sentence 1 :
 Over the last decade, something has become prevalent and publicly recognized
phenomenon. ( một hiện tượng phổ biến và ai cũng nhìn thấy)

 In recent decades, there has been a growing trend towards soothing for various
purposes.

 In recent decades, something has been receiving a great deal of media/police…

attention around the world due to its grabbing attentions factor
EX: In recent decades, something has been receiving a great deal of media attention
around the world due to its grabbing- attention factor that potentially increase its
viewership.
Dùng cho các sự kiện quan trọng như global warming, obesity epidemic hay
copyright infringement

 Something is/are at the forefront of public awareness ( điểm nóng thu hút sự chú ý của
mọi người )
EX: in contemporary world, the obesity epidemic and how to address it are at the
forefront of public awareness

 Something has gained in popularity over the past decade, making a paradigm shift in
something ( điều gì đó đang trở nên thịnh hành và làm thay đổi điều gì đó
EX: the social networking has gained in popularity over the last decades, making a
paradigm shift in the way people conduct their business.
  Over the past decades, something has a growing influence in the modern world, which
could be even seen in. ( việc gì đó đang có sự ảnh hưởng ngày càng lớn trong thế giới
ngày nay, điều mà có thể được thấy ở…)
EX: over the past decades, the use of technology has been a growing influence in the
modern world, which could be even seen in the classroom.

- Mẫu câu sentence 2:

 Although skeptics support the idea of _ due to its _ this may come as an expense of _
( mặc dù ý tưởng về điều gì có vẻ hợp lý, nhưng nó lại đi cũng với những vấn đề của cái
cái gì đó)
EX: Although skeptics support the idea of broadcasting foreign movie due to its potential
benefits, this may come at the expense of a country’s culture.

 While _ seems to be/ appears reasonable, ample evidence suggest that the opposite is
true
( trong khi điều gí đó trong có vẻ hợp lí, nhưng nhiêu bằng chứng đã chứng minh điều
ngược lại là đúng)
EX: while introducing a new languages in primary education appears reasonable due to
its potential benefits, plenty of evidence suggest that the opposite is true.

 While no one can deny _ , it is not to say that _ do/does not have the downside that
need to be considered.
( trong khi không ai phủ nhận điều gì đó, nhưng nó ko có nghĩa là điều gì đó không có
mặt xấu cần cân nhắc)
EX: while no one can deny smart devices has facilitated many aspect of human life, it is
not to say that they dot not have the downside to be concerned.

 Despite many advantages/disadvantages that may derive from _, it is believed that _

is predominantly disadvantageous/ advantageous to _
( mặc dù có nhiều mặt tốt/ xấu có từ điều gì đó, nhưng nó được tin rằng điều gì đó rất
tốt/ xấu cho ai đó)
EX: despite the many advantages that may derive from using social networking sites, it
is believed that they are predominantly disadvantages to youthful students due to the
harmful effects on their well-being.

 Although _ has many positive/negative ramifications, it is not without drawbacks,

benefits
( mặc dù điều gì đó sẽ có rất nhiều hậu quả tốt/xấu nhưng không có nghĩa rằng nó
không có mặt tốt/ xấu)
EX: although working from home has many positive ramifications, it is not without
drawbacks
 - Mẫu câu sentence 3: (advanced): câu này sẽ đưa điểm lên cao hơn – thesis statement ( tóm tắt
bài này sẽ nói về điều gì ).
 This essay will support this argument by analyzing <idea 1> and <idea 2>.
 This will proven by looking at <idea 1> and <idea 2>.
 To prove this, <idea 1> and <idea 2> will be made.
EX: the use of social media, such as facebook and twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this
century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the past decade, the use of social network sites, such as facebook and twitter has gained in
popularity, making a paradigm shift in human communication. Despite the many advantages that may
derive from this trend, it is believed that social media is predominantly disadvantageous to users.
Especially youthful ones. This essay will support this argument by analyzing some mental and physical
heath issues that result from the excessive use of these online platforms.

Over the past decade, hosting a sports event has gained in popularity, making aparadigm shoft
in human communication. Despite the many disadvantages that may derive from this trend, it is
beliveved that to be a host and organize a sport event is is predominantly advantageous to
specific country’s citizen, especially for sport fan. This essay will support this argument by
analyzing some benefits that result of this remarkable event.
On the one hand, organizing a sport even, such as SEA games would require massive of financial
resources
choosing a subdevelopment country to host a sport event is a bad idea
on the other hand,
In conclusion, hosting a sport event is associated with many benefits which far outweigh the
drawbacks. Government that excepted such honor, in my opinion should manage the state
budget for organizing a well-performed event and delivery their national culture regarding
environmental and transportation problems.
Healthcare system, transport infrastructure, school tuition and fees, free access, less privileged
Body 1:
- Admittedly, there are some arguments in favour of abolishing college fee
- First, <idea1> regardless of <idea 1+>
- This <idea 1.> presumably , tend “not only + but also ”, which
- Second , probably result a greater …, which
- In fact, it is acknowledged that

- Nevertheless, the resultant problems/benefits would be far more significant than minor
problems/issues once…
- First, <idea 1> is synonynmous with
- Example, meaning that
- Second, including
It, instead, would be a more financially viable option if